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Something so right – chapter 74
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Bette yawned and lent back – she looked across at Tina
“I couldn’t leave you at night – not for a second”
“You know that I am going to be fine “
“Yes – its going to be a while before you are running any half marathons with me but yes – I know that you are going to be okay. With rest and your inhalers and painkillers you are going to be just fine”
“Everyone at the hospital told me how lucky I am to have a partner who is so devoted”
Bette didn’t speak – she was still beating herself up over what had happened on Friday night.
“Peggy gave me the ring back this morning when I saw her “
“It did cross my mind where it ended up “
“When you are feeling better we can talk “
Tina moved so she could touch Bette’s face
“I still love you and I want to spend the rest of my life with you “
“But not marriage “
“Lets put marriage to one side for a while – do you love me and want to spend your life with me ?”
“You know that I do “
“So – lets lay that down as our starting point – we don’t want to split up – we want a future that involves one another –
everything else is up for negotiation “
Bette nodded “ Do you want some lunch ?”
“What are you offering ?”
“Pretty much anything you want “
“Chicken sandwich and a beer ?”
“You can have the chicken sandwich with tea, coffee, milk or soda “
“Coffee would be great – you need a hand ?”
Bette got up and looked down at her partner
“I will never forget how afraid I was that I could have lost you- that fate would take you away from me – it might stop me from being such a jackass “
“But being a jackass is part of your charm “
Bette chuckled as she went into the kitchen.
Left alone Tina closed her eyes – she was tired but knew that if she slept now she wouldn’t sleep tonight. It was also weird that they were in the apartment that was clean and tidy and quiet – three things it rarely was with Finn around. As much as she would miss her brother it had brought home to her that her idea of her home was one that involved her and Bette – alone. Just the two of them until they both had reached a point in their lives where they wanted a family.
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Love Tina’s ass can look at that all day. Ok great chptr looking forwrd to more
I love this version of Bette and Tina finding out about one another’s needs and trying to live with the differences – why oh why can’t aren’t you the one who wrote the final season. You are so right about what was worth watching this last episode Tina’s ass, Angie’s face and Bette’s look of love when she kissed Tina at the airport. And that’s about all. Thanks for your alternative it makes this season more bearable.
purrfect!!!
Loved the update AllyE. Tina and Bette really need to mature a bit more before they think of marriage and talk a LOT about things. They are of two different minds because of circumstances beyond their control. They each need reassurance that their love will never waiver for any reason and a marriage certificate is not really necessary to ensure that. People fall out of love all the time marriage or not. Hopefully Tina will speak with her mother the next day when she calls and ask her not to come to LA, their presence is not needed. And that her health will improve more without the aggravation of her mother’s presence. Because they will not be able to be in a room together without taking offense to something the other will say. Great post AllyE. Have a good weekend. Post when you can.
These two really need to get a grip!!! Both are insecure and immature!!! Grrrr!!! LOL :)
Great update Ally! Tina definitely gets some smooth points for the no pyjamas in bed ploy. PPS!
What is that quote..an update by any name would still be as sweet!
You are such a wonderful writer. So much passion and love.
i hope these two find some middle ground soon. thanks for the update, ally! looking forward to the L Wing tom :)
Great chapter, I hope Tina’s mom doesn’t come and start trouble that makes T have a setback in her recovery. PS
This Ma Kennard doesn’t leave people alone?? God help Tina. What a wonderful chapter Ally, I loved the fact that they have the place for themselves, they can rest and spoil each other, and do what they want. I am so looking forward for the next chapter. Have a great night. Love
I think it’s sad that they wouldn’t let Tina’s mother talk to her, despite everything. Even tired, she could have said hello and let her mother hear her voice. If Ma isn’t too cool with Bette, it really is Tina’s problem not being able to accept her mother for who she is that is the real stumbling block. It’s not like she abused Tina, it’s just that her parents’ lifestyle makes Tina uncomfortable. And T & B get all upset that Ma doesn’t accept their relationship! But Ma never kicked them off the farm, Tina left in a huff. Tina really does need to grow up. She reconciled with Bette in the aftermath of the fire, she could have done the same with her mother. And I’m not sure if Bette was protecting Tina so much as enabling her.
Hehehehe, Ally you funny girl – where were you with your thought – I think in LWord-land by Tinas cute ass as you mentioned LOL. Where is my L Wing dose.
My apologies – i had just finished writing LWing 251 and thats my excuse ! Thanks to funnyone for emailing me to inform me of my error. i will post lwing tomorrow !! sorry again – klutz am i.
Ally… haha.. I guess you are getting old woman.. you posted a Something so right chap by the name of L wing. Damn.. you got me all happy to see a new chap of L-wing (not that I don’t get happy to see one from SSR too) and I got so confused with Tina at the hospital.. Come on my queen.. you can’t leave me all hoping now.. post the L wing chap too?? please??
Not a problem… I’ll take a ‘Something So Right’ chapter any way I can get it ;-)
I thought that was an L Wing and then it wasn’t but it is all good because it was an Ally post. Thanks Woman…pps
OK these two are so not ready for marriage yet, but how about a long engagement this way Tina get stime and Bette gets the reassurance she feels she needs? PPS:)
i think bette has the right idea of keeping everything in tina’s life pretty much calm, but tina should at least talk to her mom when she feels better.tina needs to at least be respectful of her mom’s choices, just her mom needs to to her choices. these two are so not ready for marriage yet! :)PPS
That was great!