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Something so right – chapter 74
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Tina smiled and went across and sat down. Bette went into the bedroom and removed Tina’s dirty pyjamas from her case – she collected her own dirty washing and walked back through to put a load in the washing machine. After five minutes she returned back and sat beside Tina who was just getting used to being home again
Tina looked at Bette – for once the stunningly sexy brunette didn’t look perfect
“You look utterly done in “ Tina commented
“I don’t think I have the energy to argue “
“Bette – I know how little sleep you have been getting – even last night you wouldn’t leave me. I am sure the nurses thought you were crazy “
Bette smiled and took Tina’s hand and kissed it
“Don’t you believe it – they think that I am wonderful -that cute one – the one with the short red hair – she said it was one of the most romantic thing she had seen “
“I see – even in hospital you get a fan club ?”
“The dark haired one – I think she was called Fiona – she said that if it hadn’t been obvious that I loved you she would have had me then and there “
Tina laughed – it wasn’t uncommon for Bette to visit a new place and within hours she had her own harem of gay and straight admirers. It didn’t really bother her Bette had proved time and time again that she wasn’t interested.
“Get any phone numbers ?” Tina asked smiling
“No but I saw Helena in action – she’s got herself a date with a doctor “
“WHAT ! – Dr Hope – she is cute I know but she is married to a surgeon and they have three of the most adorable children “
“Not Dr Hope – she was standing talking with a blonde doctor – very tasty actually. Helena moved in like a player and got a phone number. Remind me to tell Helena how smooth she is “
Tina kissed Bette on the lips
“Everyone thought you were nuts for sleeping in my room every night – but I know that you needed to do it “
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Love Tina’s ass can look at that all day. Ok great chptr looking forwrd to more
I love this version of Bette and Tina finding out about one another’s needs and trying to live with the differences – why oh why can’t aren’t you the one who wrote the final season. You are so right about what was worth watching this last episode Tina’s ass, Angie’s face and Bette’s look of love when she kissed Tina at the airport. And that’s about all. Thanks for your alternative it makes this season more bearable.
purrfect!!!
Loved the update AllyE. Tina and Bette really need to mature a bit more before they think of marriage and talk a LOT about things. They are of two different minds because of circumstances beyond their control. They each need reassurance that their love will never waiver for any reason and a marriage certificate is not really necessary to ensure that. People fall out of love all the time marriage or not. Hopefully Tina will speak with her mother the next day when she calls and ask her not to come to LA, their presence is not needed. And that her health will improve more without the aggravation of her mother’s presence. Because they will not be able to be in a room together without taking offense to something the other will say. Great post AllyE. Have a good weekend. Post when you can.
These two really need to get a grip!!! Both are insecure and immature!!! Grrrr!!! LOL :)
Great update Ally! Tina definitely gets some smooth points for the no pyjamas in bed ploy. PPS!
What is that quote..an update by any name would still be as sweet!
You are such a wonderful writer. So much passion and love.
i hope these two find some middle ground soon. thanks for the update, ally! looking forward to the L Wing tom :)
Great chapter, I hope Tina’s mom doesn’t come and start trouble that makes T have a setback in her recovery. PS
This Ma Kennard doesn’t leave people alone?? God help Tina. What a wonderful chapter Ally, I loved the fact that they have the place for themselves, they can rest and spoil each other, and do what they want. I am so looking forward for the next chapter. Have a great night. Love
I think it’s sad that they wouldn’t let Tina’s mother talk to her, despite everything. Even tired, she could have said hello and let her mother hear her voice. If Ma isn’t too cool with Bette, it really is Tina’s problem not being able to accept her mother for who she is that is the real stumbling block. It’s not like she abused Tina, it’s just that her parents’ lifestyle makes Tina uncomfortable. And T & B get all upset that Ma doesn’t accept their relationship! But Ma never kicked them off the farm, Tina left in a huff. Tina really does need to grow up. She reconciled with Bette in the aftermath of the fire, she could have done the same with her mother. And I’m not sure if Bette was protecting Tina so much as enabling her.
Hehehehe, Ally you funny girl – where were you with your thought – I think in LWord-land by Tinas cute ass as you mentioned LOL. Where is my L Wing dose.
My apologies – i had just finished writing LWing 251 and thats my excuse ! Thanks to funnyone for emailing me to inform me of my error. i will post lwing tomorrow !! sorry again – klutz am i.
Ally… haha.. I guess you are getting old woman.. you posted a Something so right chap by the name of L wing. Damn.. you got me all happy to see a new chap of L-wing (not that I don’t get happy to see one from SSR too) and I got so confused with Tina at the hospital.. Come on my queen.. you can’t leave me all hoping now.. post the L wing chap too?? please??
Not a problem… I’ll take a ‘Something So Right’ chapter any way I can get it ;-)
I thought that was an L Wing and then it wasn’t but it is all good because it was an Ally post. Thanks Woman…pps
OK these two are so not ready for marriage yet, but how about a long engagement this way Tina get stime and Bette gets the reassurance she feels she needs? PPS:)
i think bette has the right idea of keeping everything in tina’s life pretty much calm, but tina should at least talk to her mom when she feels better.tina needs to at least be respectful of her mom’s choices, just her mom needs to to her choices. these two are so not ready for marriage yet! :)PPS
That was great!