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    Something so right – chapter 83

     

     

    “He would take me to these restaurants and he would ask me about what I was doing at school. Now I thought I was a smart kid and I could hold my own at debate and I was a good speaker. But he would start me on some topic and he would demolish me – he would take my arguments and he always knew more about them than I did. He would make me feel like I shouldn’t have opinions of my own and I would retreat into my shell. The thing is I called him on it one day. I was back from University and we’d gone out to dinner and he started on something -I wish I could remember what it was now. Anyway – we started the usual debate and he picked me apart but I was more sure of myself – I could out-argue anyone at University and this one night I just thought that I wasn’t going to take any more crap from the old buzzard and I took his counter argument and I made mincemeat of him. He thought that it proved that he had taught me to fight my corner. I told him that I would go home after having dinner with him and I was always sure he hated me because I’d given into him”

     

     

    “He thought what he was doing was tough love ?” Tina summed up

     

     

    Bette nodded “I saw it as humiliating myself in front of my father. One of the reasons that I would love to have my own family is that I would never be that sort of parent”

     

     

    “You would a wonderful mother “ Tina said “Just like you are the most fantastic partner”

     

     

    “Thanks for saying that “

     

     

    “Praise when its due Bette – you rock as a lover and as a girlfriend you are the best. You have made the last 18 months the best time I have known.”

     

     

    Bette kissed Tina – enjoying the feeling that only Tina could produce in her. Only Tina could make her feel that she was special – it was only Tina for now and forever. After several minutes Bette ended the kiss

    Comments

    1. That is a great twist! Bette’s mom is full of secrets. It will be interesting if Bette goes and confronts Melvin after all this. Thanks for posting so many wonderful stories!

    2. Didn’t see that coming, like mother like daughter no wonder Melvin didn’t approve of Bettes sexuality. Glad they talk and Elizabet explain why is she leaving Bette. Please post more, thanks!

    3. Well Ally, you certainly know how to leave us hanging! So Mom’s a lesbian too. I hope that roll you’re on keeps going, because I definitely need the next chapter of this story soon!

    4. I keep reading all your stories and you keep getting my attention with the way you write and the happenings in your stories. You are very good at keeping the tension in them. Love it! Keep writing, please!

    5. WOW…. Like mother like daughter for sure…. But what the hell took Elizabeth so long. 10 yrs sober, she should have made amends before now. great story

    6. OMG, no wonder Melvin doesn’t like Bette being lesbian, like mother, like daughter. The old bastard knew Eliz was gay and wanted to leave him and take Bettead he did not want to be embarrased by her sexuality. And he probably thought he would be chided, “can’t hold your woman, lost her to another woman’s bed.” Oh damn, I love it. Serves him right. Pleaase post soon, I want to know how far Tina and Bette’s mouths dropped open, mine certainly did. I hope Tina and Bette find this info as uproariously funny as I did. This info will help Bette understand a lot of things. Wonderful AllyE, just freaking wonderful.

    7. Great story. Iwould really love to read where Bette wades into Melvine for all his small minded, belittling diatribe over the years. I know you and she could cut him to ribbons.

    8. WOO!! knocked my buttox for a loop! its so great to read bette is so like her mother in many ways. and, snigger snigger…. didn’t we all say it’s in the genes? NOW tis time for mother and daughter and ms. tina to bombard mr. melvin with the porter/kennard verbal bitch slap. but hey, i am lovin’ this story. great reading. thanxs for sharing and taking the time to post this for us.

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