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    Something so right – chapter 83

     

     

    “Right – coffee, freshly ground, croissants and a carton of my favourite fruit juice”

     

     

    Each item came in containers that again told Bette of the money that her mother clearly had. She knew that the bakery that the croissants came from was probably the most expensive in the city. The juice was poured into glasses, the croissants put on a plate and the three women sat down to share breakfast

     

     

    “Thank you for seeing me Bette – I cannot begin to share how confused you must be”

     

     

    Tina gave her a mental tick of approval – it would have been very easy to skirt around the whole circumstance of the breakfast but Elizabeth had come straight in and acknowledged Bette’s feelings.

     

     

    “Its not been easy and I don’t know what I would have done without Ti – she is my rock. I love her very much “

     

     

    “How did you meet ?”

     

     

    “In a club – I always used to make a bee-line for the most beautiful woman in a club”

     

     

    “We dated for a long while – Bette is chivalrous “ Tina added

     

     

    “Did you pick that up from Melvin ?” Elizabeth asked “ He could charm the birds out of the trees if he wanted to “

     

     

    “I am not sure what I inherited from him – or if I would want to “

     

     

    “I am sorry that he doesn’t approve of your sexuality – he could be a bigot when he wanted”

     

     

    “He’s got worse “ Bette said” Well I say that – I wouldn’t know “

     

     

    There was a silence

     

     

    “Bette – I didn’t leave you willingly – I couldn’t look after you. I am an alcoholic – at the time I was drinking several bottles of wine a day plus as much spirits as I could get my hands on. I was neglecting you – it was only a matter of time before you came to some harm “

     

     

    Elizabeth started crying – however many times she had rehearsed this speech to her daughter she knew that nothing could take away how painful it was to actually sit in front of your child and explain your abandonment.

    Comments

    1. That is a great twist! Bette’s mom is full of secrets. It will be interesting if Bette goes and confronts Melvin after all this. Thanks for posting so many wonderful stories!

    2. Didn’t see that coming, like mother like daughter no wonder Melvin didn’t approve of Bettes sexuality. Glad they talk and Elizabet explain why is she leaving Bette. Please post more, thanks!

    3. Well Ally, you certainly know how to leave us hanging! So Mom’s a lesbian too. I hope that roll you’re on keeps going, because I definitely need the next chapter of this story soon!

    4. I keep reading all your stories and you keep getting my attention with the way you write and the happenings in your stories. You are very good at keeping the tension in them. Love it! Keep writing, please!

    5. WOW…. Like mother like daughter for sure…. But what the hell took Elizabeth so long. 10 yrs sober, she should have made amends before now. great story

    6. OMG, no wonder Melvin doesn’t like Bette being lesbian, like mother, like daughter. The old bastard knew Eliz was gay and wanted to leave him and take Bettead he did not want to be embarrased by her sexuality. And he probably thought he would be chided, “can’t hold your woman, lost her to another woman’s bed.” Oh damn, I love it. Serves him right. Pleaase post soon, I want to know how far Tina and Bette’s mouths dropped open, mine certainly did. I hope Tina and Bette find this info as uproariously funny as I did. This info will help Bette understand a lot of things. Wonderful AllyE, just freaking wonderful.

    7. Great story. Iwould really love to read where Bette wades into Melvine for all his small minded, belittling diatribe over the years. I know you and she could cut him to ribbons.

    8. WOO!! knocked my buttox for a loop! its so great to read bette is so like her mother in many ways. and, snigger snigger…. didn’t we all say it’s in the genes? NOW tis time for mother and daughter and ms. tina to bombard mr. melvin with the porter/kennard verbal bitch slap. but hey, i am lovin’ this story. great reading. thanxs for sharing and taking the time to post this for us.

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