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Something so right – chapter 83
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“Hello Tina “
“Hello – come in “
“How is Bette ?”
“We were up most of the night talking – she is very confused about what version of events is the true one “
“I am sorry that she has to be put through this “
Tina stopped the woman and fixed her with her hazel eyes
“If you are genuinely here to make amends to Bette and to try and be a part of her life and be a positive force for her then I will be behind you all the way. But if you are trying to hurt her or make Melvin suffer or settle some score I will throw you out of this house personally. I am very protective of her – she’s not as tough as she seems and I won’t let you or anyone else hurt her “
The two women looked at one another for a couple of seconds before the older woman smiled and rested her hand on Tina’s shoulder
“I promise you that I am here to try and go some small way to making amends to her. I have not acted like it in the last 27 years but she is my daughter and I do love her. I know that you love her too – I could see yesterday that you are a very strong couple. I really want the best for her”
Tina nodded “Okay – I will take your word for now – come on through – we have set the table up in the garden
“
The two women walked through the house. Bette was sitting watching a blackbird wrestling a worm from the ground.
“Hello – this is a beautifully secluded garden “
“Hello “ Bette stood up and regarded the woman who stood before her – the woman who really was her mother. Today she was dressed in a pair of tan trousers and a pale blue blouse -her clothes still gave away how wealthy she was but today it was less obvious than yesterday.
Elizabeth put the brown bag on the table and started unpacking her purchases
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haha soo good!! absolutely love your story! thanks! :D
“That is my wife Hannah ” WOW…. I DIDN’T SEE THAT COMING!!! GREAT UPDETE BY THE WAY :)
Absolutely wonderful, just wait till Melvin knows his ex has a wife, going to be some fireworks.
That is a great twist! Bette’s mom is full of secrets. It will be interesting if Bette goes and confronts Melvin after all this. Thanks for posting so many wonderful stories!
Wow didn’t see that one coming. Melvin must have known and that is why he is so down on Bette. Can’t wait for B&T’s talk with her dad. PPPPS
Didn’t see that coming, like mother like daughter no wonder Melvin didn’t approve of Bettes sexuality. Glad they talk and Elizabet explain why is she leaving Bette. Please post more, thanks!
Always the drama queen. Makes for interesting stories.
Yeah your definitely on a roll. Not complaining though :D Wow, just wow!
whoa… didn’t see that one coming :) great update ally!
Huh…wife Hannah? Didn’t see that coming. Great update! Hope your roll continues.
Oh man! I really didn’t expect that. Great story and can’t wait to read more. Thank you :)
she was on top??? sounds fun. thx
Oh yeah, you are on a roll! Love it!!
Well Ally, you certainly know how to leave us hanging! So Mom’s a lesbian too. I hope that roll you’re on keeps going, because I definitely need the next chapter of this story soon!
Keep them coming, Ally! PPS!
I keep reading all your stories and you keep getting my attention with the way you write and the happenings in your stories. You are very good at keeping the tension in them. Love it! Keep writing, please!
This story is getting better and better-if possible..!
Like mother like daughter; Hannah and Tina. What is Melvin going to say when he sees Elizabeth??????? PPS
hmmm…Elizabeth has a wife…maybe now we know why Melvin doesn’t approve of Bette’s sexuality – the old buzzard! PPS!
Oh boy, the thickened pot is starting to stir…
WOW…. Like mother like daughter for sure…. But what the hell took Elizabeth so long. 10 yrs sober, she should have made amends before now. great story
Oh wow! I wasn’t expecting that. I wonder if that’s not why Melvin is so terribly pissed about Bette. Great chappie, as always.
OMG, no wonder Melvin doesn’t like Bette being lesbian, like mother, like daughter. The old bastard knew Eliz was gay and wanted to leave him and take Bettead he did not want to be embarrased by her sexuality. And he probably thought he would be chided, “can’t hold your woman, lost her to another woman’s bed.” Oh damn, I love it. Serves him right. Pleaase post soon, I want to know how far Tina and Bette’s mouths dropped open, mine certainly did. I hope Tina and Bette find this info as uproariously funny as I did. This info will help Bette understand a lot of things. Wonderful AllyE, just freaking wonderful.
Great story. Iwould really love to read where Bette wades into Melvine for all his small minded, belittling diatribe over the years. I know you and she could cut him to ribbons.
ha-ha, way to pull that one out of the hat Elizabeth, ‘my wife Hannah’. Love it!! Hope the roll continues.
OMG this is great melvin has a lot to answer for ! :)PPS
Cider?
Ally, What a great chapter. Melvin has alot to answer for. Thank you I love this story. PPS
WOO!! knocked my buttox for a loop! its so great to read bette is so like her mother in many ways. and, snigger snigger…. didn’t we all say it’s in the genes? NOW tis time for mother and daughter and ms. tina to bombard mr. melvin with the porter/kennard verbal bitch slap. but hey, i am lovin’ this story. great reading. thanxs for sharing and taking the time to post this for us.