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Something so right – Chapter 85
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“Yes you will – I will make sure of that “
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Next morning they were awoken by a phone call at 8am
“Hello “ Bette said reaching for the phone
“Good morning Bette – how are you today ?”
“Hello Elizabeth – I am fine “
“I was wondering if you would like to join me for breakfast this morning ?”
Bette looked at Tina who was still asleep
“We are still in bed “
“Oh I am so sorry Bette – I thought from your phone call yesterday morning that you were early risers like me – I do beg your pardon “
“No its okay – Tina is still asleep – look why don’t I meet you at the beach and we can go for a walk together ?”
“Are you sure ?”
“Yes – Tina deserves a lie in this morning “
“Well that would be wonderful – what time and where would you like to meet up ?”
“Eh “ Bette sat up and tried to shake the sleep from her eyes “ How about in half an hour at the little beach café – I don’t know what its called but the building is bright yellow “
“Oh yes – I know the one you mean – there is a little hut next to it that sells sunglasses and beach balls “
“Yes – that’s the one “
“Okay – are you sure Tina won’t mind ?”
“Tina doesn’t mind – Tina might not even notice I am gone “
“Well thank you Bette – I will see you in half an hour “
“Okay – see you “
Bette put the phone down and lent closer to Tina and kissed her on the lips
“I heard all of that “ Tina said sleepily
“You don’t mind do you ?”
“No – of course not but can you let her know that we both like to stay in bed at weekends – and not just to sleep.”
“Sure – she just thought “
Tina opened her eyes “ She is desperate to make up for lost time and she wants to spend as much time as possible with you – getting to know her daughter “
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thx for the update. good convo
I like the interaction between Bette and her mom. I think a dinner with Hannah and Tina might be in order. Thanks for posting!
I love B’s beautiful story of her life w/T. B is understandably wary of Elizabeth, but at least she is open to the possibility of allowing her into her life. PPS!
Gosh, I have been waiting for this update forever. I am glad to see it. I’m loving this story so much right now. I want to see how this relationship between those two unfolds. Keep it coming, please.
What a delight to see this today! Ally this was beautifully written. Tina’s sensitivity to Bette is wonderful and I love the conversations Bette and her Mom are having. I’m glad your weekend was so good. I love it when you’re in the writing mood!
Its nice to see both Elizabeth’s talking to each other. May Bette’s fears be put to rest. Great post.
:) Bette has a mommy. More please :)
Nice one!!!! Listen to Tina Bette. You need some loving about now. I’m eager to learn more about Elizabeth and Hannah so hoping there will be some family time. Thx for the entertainment.
Thanks for updating this. I love this story. I love the way you have written Tina to be a strong person with convictions and the confidence to stand behind them. She really is a good match with Bette.
I love this story and have so missed it! Thank you for posting and it’s excellent that Bette’s talking to her mother and telling her how she feels. Love how Tina is there for Bette as wel. Thank you again for posting :)
Yehey! Its been sometime on this one. And great writing as ever. The reconciliation of Bette and her mother may take longer than they were apart, but its a start that they are both willing to get on. Tina is so good for Bette. PPS
This is a great story AllyE and am so happy that Bette is talking to her mother. I think they will be great for each other and I can’t wait until they confront Melvin and get his feeble explanations as to his actions. Bette will have to be extra kind to Tina. Thanks for posting.
I so love this story!!! I an glad Bette is talking to her mother about what she is feeling. Now I can not wait to see how Bette makes it up to Tina. Thank you Ally
I didn’t realize how much I’ve missed all your postings til now….Where the heck have you been, pls don’t go away there again or at least take us with you!!! Can’t wait for more, TKS
Your writing is so descriptive. I am actually feeling Bette’s pain and longing for her mother to be back in her life yet Bette being circumspect about this happening. She has that little girl fear of abandonment. That’s what your writing does.
Well I hope you have only amazing weeks from now on. Thank you for this.
Hooray Ally!
Your writing is so fantastic… I’m really glad you decided to come back. Bette’s confusion and fear and joy at having her mother back all come through so clearly. And Tina is being so great at supporting her through it.
That was great and glad to see Bette is have a talk with her mother. Please post more, thanks!