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Something so right – Chapter 85
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“I couldn’t help but notice the rings you both wear – are you married or engaged?”
Bette laughed “No – I would love to be married to her but she has issues and the time isn’t right for either of us. Things are great as they are. I have stopped getting so antsy about it. We have the rest of our lives “
“Are the two of you exclusive ?”
“God yes – I would never be unfaithful to her. She’s changed my life – as my friend Alice says Tina has tamed the tigress Bette Porter “
“And has she ?”
“Tina came along at stage in my life when I was bored with my past life. “
“How so ?”
“I had a reputation for being some sort of lesbian icon – a different woman every night – I could get any woman I wanted. When I meet Tina I was bored with my reputation- I fell hook, line and sinker for her. I courted her – took her to dinner and long walks on the beach. She is like no woman I have ever known before – she is amazing – brilliant in so many areas. She keeps me on my toes – I don’t think there is another woman who comes close to Tina.”
Elizabeth nodded “ You do seem very happy – I am surprised that you had a reputation”
“God yes – everything was true – I was someone who hated the thought of being committed to someone. I did get any woman I wanted – click my fingers and I had women running “
“Why were you afraid of commitment ?”
“I think a lot of it is because of my father – he used and abused women “
“And you didn’t have a mother to guide you “
Bette picked up a piece of driftwood and threw it for the dogs to chase who had started to trot back to Bette and Elizabeth
“I am not getting at you but that was probably a part of it. I don’t think I had any role model to compare – you know – I never hung around with a couple who were committed to one another. I kind of grew up thinking that it was a fantasy created by TV and movies. I also think I attracted the sort of women who didn’t really want a commitment either. If you were looking for a woman who was going to be faithful to you – you would not have picked Bette Porter – you would have run miles in the opposite direction “
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thx for the update. good convo
I like the interaction between Bette and her mom. I think a dinner with Hannah and Tina might be in order. Thanks for posting!
I love B’s beautiful story of her life w/T. B is understandably wary of Elizabeth, but at least she is open to the possibility of allowing her into her life. PPS!
Gosh, I have been waiting for this update forever. I am glad to see it. I’m loving this story so much right now. I want to see how this relationship between those two unfolds. Keep it coming, please.
What a delight to see this today! Ally this was beautifully written. Tina’s sensitivity to Bette is wonderful and I love the conversations Bette and her Mom are having. I’m glad your weekend was so good. I love it when you’re in the writing mood!
Its nice to see both Elizabeth’s talking to each other. May Bette’s fears be put to rest. Great post.
:) Bette has a mommy. More please :)
Nice one!!!! Listen to Tina Bette. You need some loving about now. I’m eager to learn more about Elizabeth and Hannah so hoping there will be some family time. Thx for the entertainment.
Thanks for updating this. I love this story. I love the way you have written Tina to be a strong person with convictions and the confidence to stand behind them. She really is a good match with Bette.
I love this story and have so missed it! Thank you for posting and it’s excellent that Bette’s talking to her mother and telling her how she feels. Love how Tina is there for Bette as wel. Thank you again for posting :)
Yehey! Its been sometime on this one. And great writing as ever. The reconciliation of Bette and her mother may take longer than they were apart, but its a start that they are both willing to get on. Tina is so good for Bette. PPS
This is a great story AllyE and am so happy that Bette is talking to her mother. I think they will be great for each other and I can’t wait until they confront Melvin and get his feeble explanations as to his actions. Bette will have to be extra kind to Tina. Thanks for posting.
I so love this story!!! I an glad Bette is talking to her mother about what she is feeling. Now I can not wait to see how Bette makes it up to Tina. Thank you Ally
I didn’t realize how much I’ve missed all your postings til now….Where the heck have you been, pls don’t go away there again or at least take us with you!!! Can’t wait for more, TKS
Your writing is so descriptive. I am actually feeling Bette’s pain and longing for her mother to be back in her life yet Bette being circumspect about this happening. She has that little girl fear of abandonment. That’s what your writing does.
Well I hope you have only amazing weeks from now on. Thank you for this.
Hooray Ally!
Your writing is so fantastic… I’m really glad you decided to come back. Bette’s confusion and fear and joy at having her mother back all come through so clearly. And Tina is being so great at supporting her through it.
That was great and glad to see Bette is have a talk with her mother. Please post more, thanks!