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Something so right – Chapter 85
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“Probably “
“She probably doesn’t know how desperate you are to make up for lost time and get to know her – you have probably hundreds of new questions for her as well “
“You are pretty smart for someone who isn’t awake “
“I know – I am pretty much a all round amazing person “
“And I know that and I love you “ Bette said
“I know that babe – you better get a move on “
“Do you want anything before I go ?”
“No thanks – tell her I said hello “
“You could come with me “
“I could but I think you are ready to see her on your own “
“Thanks babe “
Tina took hold of Bette and kissed her passionately
“You might want to repay my kindness by coming home and devouring my body in a sexual orgy of need that leaves me out of breath and begging for mercy “
“Is that a request or an instruction ? “
“Figure that out for yourself – or ask your mother “ Tina said and snuggled back down in their bed. Bette kissed her again on the cheek before getting up and heading into the shower. When she emerged Tina was asleep – she got dressed in a hurry while watching the blonde. She looked so innocent when she was asleep – that was in such a contrast with how wildly passionate she was when they were together. Bette knew that she had disappointed Tina the night before by turning down all her good natured offers of a night of wild sex. She would make it up to her- maybe take her away for a weekend of pampering mixed in with great sex. Bette kissed Tina gently on the lips before she left
“I love you so much babe “ she whispered “more than you will ever know “
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Elizabeth was waiting for Bette when she pulled up in front of the café – her two dogs were on leashes and were lying at her feet. Bette got out of her car and locked it
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thx for the update. good convo
I like the interaction between Bette and her mom. I think a dinner with Hannah and Tina might be in order. Thanks for posting!
I love B’s beautiful story of her life w/T. B is understandably wary of Elizabeth, but at least she is open to the possibility of allowing her into her life. PPS!
Gosh, I have been waiting for this update forever. I am glad to see it. I’m loving this story so much right now. I want to see how this relationship between those two unfolds. Keep it coming, please.
What a delight to see this today! Ally this was beautifully written. Tina’s sensitivity to Bette is wonderful and I love the conversations Bette and her Mom are having. I’m glad your weekend was so good. I love it when you’re in the writing mood!
Its nice to see both Elizabeth’s talking to each other. May Bette’s fears be put to rest. Great post.
:) Bette has a mommy. More please :)
Nice one!!!! Listen to Tina Bette. You need some loving about now. I’m eager to learn more about Elizabeth and Hannah so hoping there will be some family time. Thx for the entertainment.
Thanks for updating this. I love this story. I love the way you have written Tina to be a strong person with convictions and the confidence to stand behind them. She really is a good match with Bette.
I love this story and have so missed it! Thank you for posting and it’s excellent that Bette’s talking to her mother and telling her how she feels. Love how Tina is there for Bette as wel. Thank you again for posting :)
Yehey! Its been sometime on this one. And great writing as ever. The reconciliation of Bette and her mother may take longer than they were apart, but its a start that they are both willing to get on. Tina is so good for Bette. PPS
This is a great story AllyE and am so happy that Bette is talking to her mother. I think they will be great for each other and I can’t wait until they confront Melvin and get his feeble explanations as to his actions. Bette will have to be extra kind to Tina. Thanks for posting.
I so love this story!!! I an glad Bette is talking to her mother about what she is feeling. Now I can not wait to see how Bette makes it up to Tina. Thank you Ally
I didn’t realize how much I’ve missed all your postings til now….Where the heck have you been, pls don’t go away there again or at least take us with you!!! Can’t wait for more, TKS
Your writing is so descriptive. I am actually feeling Bette’s pain and longing for her mother to be back in her life yet Bette being circumspect about this happening. She has that little girl fear of abandonment. That’s what your writing does.
Well I hope you have only amazing weeks from now on. Thank you for this.
Hooray Ally!
Your writing is so fantastic… I’m really glad you decided to come back. Bette’s confusion and fear and joy at having her mother back all come through so clearly. And Tina is being so great at supporting her through it.
That was great and glad to see Bette is have a talk with her mother. Please post more, thanks!