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Something so right – Chapter 85
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“Hello Bette “
“Hey there- so are you going to introduce me to these two fine dogs ?”
“Rex the red settler and Duke the Dalmatian – say hello to Bette boys “
Elizabeth let go of the leashes and the dogs bounced across to say hello. Bette bent down and started to stroke the dogs – both were very excited and licked her and pushed forward to get attention from her
“Okay that’s enough – Rex, Duke – heel boys “
The dogs obeyed Elizabeth and trotted back
“Well behaved “ Bette said
“You have no idea of the obedience lessons both of them have been on- shall we start walking ?”
“Sure “
They walked down onto the sand and Elizabeth let them both off their leashes and they raced towards the sea. Bette put her sunglasses on as they walked
“I am sorry that I woke you up “
“Its okay – Tina’s gone back to sleep “
“Cursing me ?”
“No – she’s very perceptive and she says that we are both trying to make up for lost time “
“She’s right – I can’t stop talking about you to Hannah “
Bette laughed “You have become a big discussion point between Tina and I “
“I would love for you and Tina to come to dinner and meet Hannah -but I know its only been 48 hours since I walked into your life. Please tell me if I am going too far too fast “
“I will – at the moment there is a lot going on in my head – and I am not sure what to do “
“Tina seems a very good listener “
Bette nodded “ She’s just phenomenal – I couldn’t live without her. She means the world to me – she is at the centre of my life. I have always been very driven, very motivated – but its always been personal goals – a bigger car, a better house – now so much of what I do is because of Tina. Because I want to look after her – even though she earns more than me – and because I love her so deeply “
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thx for the update. good convo
I like the interaction between Bette and her mom. I think a dinner with Hannah and Tina might be in order. Thanks for posting!
I love B’s beautiful story of her life w/T. B is understandably wary of Elizabeth, but at least she is open to the possibility of allowing her into her life. PPS!
Gosh, I have been waiting for this update forever. I am glad to see it. I’m loving this story so much right now. I want to see how this relationship between those two unfolds. Keep it coming, please.
What a delight to see this today! Ally this was beautifully written. Tina’s sensitivity to Bette is wonderful and I love the conversations Bette and her Mom are having. I’m glad your weekend was so good. I love it when you’re in the writing mood!
Its nice to see both Elizabeth’s talking to each other. May Bette’s fears be put to rest. Great post.
:) Bette has a mommy. More please :)
Nice one!!!! Listen to Tina Bette. You need some loving about now. I’m eager to learn more about Elizabeth and Hannah so hoping there will be some family time. Thx for the entertainment.
Thanks for updating this. I love this story. I love the way you have written Tina to be a strong person with convictions and the confidence to stand behind them. She really is a good match with Bette.
I love this story and have so missed it! Thank you for posting and it’s excellent that Bette’s talking to her mother and telling her how she feels. Love how Tina is there for Bette as wel. Thank you again for posting :)
Yehey! Its been sometime on this one. And great writing as ever. The reconciliation of Bette and her mother may take longer than they were apart, but its a start that they are both willing to get on. Tina is so good for Bette. PPS
This is a great story AllyE and am so happy that Bette is talking to her mother. I think they will be great for each other and I can’t wait until they confront Melvin and get his feeble explanations as to his actions. Bette will have to be extra kind to Tina. Thanks for posting.
I so love this story!!! I an glad Bette is talking to her mother about what she is feeling. Now I can not wait to see how Bette makes it up to Tina. Thank you Ally
I didn’t realize how much I’ve missed all your postings til now….Where the heck have you been, pls don’t go away there again or at least take us with you!!! Can’t wait for more, TKS
Your writing is so descriptive. I am actually feeling Bette’s pain and longing for her mother to be back in her life yet Bette being circumspect about this happening. She has that little girl fear of abandonment. That’s what your writing does.
Well I hope you have only amazing weeks from now on. Thank you for this.
Hooray Ally!
Your writing is so fantastic… I’m really glad you decided to come back. Bette’s confusion and fear and joy at having her mother back all come through so clearly. And Tina is being so great at supporting her through it.
That was great and glad to see Bette is have a talk with her mother. Please post more, thanks!