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Something so right – chapter eight
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SOMETHING SO RIGHT – Chapter Eight
Bette collected the picnic basket from the back of her car – she looked across at Tina and smiled.
“I hope I brought enough food “
“I am sure that you did – I thought you didn’t cook ?”
“My sister works at a café bar a few blocks from the Gallery – they do all the catering for my social events so I asked her to put me up a picnic hamper “
“You have a sister ? – oh yeah -you have mentioned her to me before – what’s her name ?”
“She’s called Kit “
“You said that she had addiction issues – do you want me to carry anything ?”
“If you can get the blanket and that bag “
Tina took what Bette indicated and she waited while Bette locked the car and made sure that the alarm system was set. They set off down onto the beach – Bette had taken them several kilometres up the coast close to Zuma beach country park. As well as the scenery being beautiful it was also a place she was unlikely to be disturbed by anyone she knew.
“So tell me about your sister “ Tina said taking one handle of the picnic hamper to help Bette.
Bette shrugged “ I idolise Kit -but she is always in trouble. She’s much older than me – about 12 years I guess. She’s my half sister – we share the same father. My father left her mom for my mom “
“Must be tough for the two of you “
Bette thought about it “ It can get complicated and there have been times when I have been so frustrated by her inability to take the chances that she has been given. Se has screwed up so many times – she goes into rehab and comes out clean and swears that she will turn her life around and then a few weeks or months down the line she is in trouble again “
“It can be hard to resist the things that are bad for us “
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As usual your stories are wonderful, tender etc etc etc. Thanks for posting this before the new year. I was hoping that you would give us all a chapter for the new year. Have a wonderful new year. Ps did like the scotch eggs line.. its been so long since I last had one. So it brought a smile to my face.
that was some kiss well worth the wait for both of them! happy new year !
Yay. I love this one. I totally hope Tina starts to be more comfortable with everything.
You know, I check everyday for this story. Thanks so much! I am glad Tina has figured out what she wants and had the confidence to go after it, on a beach, no less! Thanks for you time and effort with this story…looking forward to your next post…
Ally, you are one of the most sensual writers on this site. Very few of you can project the beauty and emotion that you do in your written words. Thank you that was absolutely beautiful! Happy New Year to you and I wish you a healthy and prosperous 2008!
Love first kisses…they r so sweet…thanks Ally…and happy New Year…
A great way to end 2007. Perfection.
yeah, wow, lucky tina [ pout]; i’m just jealous…pps
That’s why Jodi’s kisses could never measure up to Tina’s (Lu Holloman). They just fit together. PPS. Happy and healthy New Year.
Well I got my New Years wish.I hope you do too.
Hmm, by the time they get to and NC-17 Tina will be ripping off Bette’s clothes!
That was so sweet yet passionate..thanks Ally and happy New Year
Finally……..the kiss I’ve been waiting for. Thanks Ally & Happy New Year!
Oh finally I loved this chapter Ally and I wish you a happy and peaceful New Year too. Thanks dear
That was so sweet and cute, beautiful first kiss!
Oh God. That was great!
mm mmm i want to kiss Bette Porter!
WOW! How sweet they are together! Thanks, you make my new years eve!
Oh AllyE, that chapter was so sweet and loving. Their tender connection and the passion that they both felt,especially Tina and the kiss. I could see it, you described it so beautifully. Love this story as well as all your others. I’ve said this before, you should be writing for a living. As my editor said t me, “the world is waiting.” Happy new year everyone. PPS
That chapter was so incredible, I loved Bette and Tina’s first kiss. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
it’s 2.30am where I’m at. stayed awake just waiting for this story, that’s how much I love it. Am too sleepy to make any useful comments. Maybe tomorrow. Thanks Ally.
It’s about time Tina found the courage of her convictions. And let’s all be grateful that Kit cooked the chicken.
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Yey! I’ve waiting for this story… thank you for posting. Have a great New Year ahead!
well i wanna see a frog on acid. ;D hope your new years eve was good. thx
Hey Ally, Happy 2008! Thanks for another great chapter. And of course an image I’ll never be able to erase from my memory in comparing Alice to a “frog on acid.” Now that’s an image (LOL).