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Something so right – chapter eight
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“Are you addicted to anything ? “ Bette asked jokingly
Tina raised her sunglasses and looked at Bette
“I think I am becoming addicted to you “ she confessed in a quiet voice. Bette was knew that Tina wasn’t joking – their desire for one another was becoming more acute and harder to resist.
“Mutual “ Bette replied
“That’s okay then “
Tina went silent – she wondered if saying that had bothered Bette – she had looked at Tina with an expression that the blonde could not pin point. They walked in silence for a few minutes until Bette stopped
“Is this okay by you ?”
Tina glanced around – they were a distance from anyone – she could see people in either direction but it was hard to make out if they were male or female or what they were doing.
“Fine “ Tina smiled and laid the yellow blanket down for them to sit on.
Bette put the picnic hamper down and opened it
“Lets see what Kit packed “
Bette took out some bread rolls and a Tupperware container with cooked chicken legs in. Tina
delved into the hamper and lifted out some coleslaw and salad.
“I think there is some butter in here as well – and with luck some cutlery “
Bette fussed for a few minutes until Tina put a gentle hand on hers.
“Bette “
“Mm ? “
“Relax”
Bette smiled “ Sorry – I guess that I am not that good at being a girlfriend – I am going over the top right ?”
“First of all — you are a wonderful girlfriend and second – yes “
Bette reached out her hand and touched Tina’s face.
“I just want to do this right Tina -you are so special – I want to make you feel how much I care “
“I know you care “ Tina replied
“I’m rusty “
“Your parts look in perfect working order to me “ Tina raised an eyebrow suggestively
“Been checking them out ?”
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As usual your stories are wonderful, tender etc etc etc. Thanks for posting this before the new year. I was hoping that you would give us all a chapter for the new year. Have a wonderful new year. Ps did like the scotch eggs line.. its been so long since I last had one. So it brought a smile to my face.
that was some kiss well worth the wait for both of them! happy new year !
Yay. I love this one. I totally hope Tina starts to be more comfortable with everything.
You know, I check everyday for this story. Thanks so much! I am glad Tina has figured out what she wants and had the confidence to go after it, on a beach, no less! Thanks for you time and effort with this story…looking forward to your next post…
Ally, you are one of the most sensual writers on this site. Very few of you can project the beauty and emotion that you do in your written words. Thank you that was absolutely beautiful! Happy New Year to you and I wish you a healthy and prosperous 2008!
Love first kisses…they r so sweet…thanks Ally…and happy New Year…
A great way to end 2007. Perfection.
yeah, wow, lucky tina [ pout]; i’m just jealous…pps
That’s why Jodi’s kisses could never measure up to Tina’s (Lu Holloman). They just fit together. PPS. Happy and healthy New Year.
Well I got my New Years wish.I hope you do too.
Hmm, by the time they get to and NC-17 Tina will be ripping off Bette’s clothes!
That was so sweet yet passionate..thanks Ally and happy New Year
Finally……..the kiss I’ve been waiting for. Thanks Ally & Happy New Year!
Oh finally I loved this chapter Ally and I wish you a happy and peaceful New Year too. Thanks dear
That was so sweet and cute, beautiful first kiss!
Oh God. That was great!
mm mmm i want to kiss Bette Porter!
WOW! How sweet they are together! Thanks, you make my new years eve!
Oh AllyE, that chapter was so sweet and loving. Their tender connection and the passion that they both felt,especially Tina and the kiss. I could see it, you described it so beautifully. Love this story as well as all your others. I’ve said this before, you should be writing for a living. As my editor said t me, “the world is waiting.” Happy new year everyone. PPS
That chapter was so incredible, I loved Bette and Tina’s first kiss. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
it’s 2.30am where I’m at. stayed awake just waiting for this story, that’s how much I love it. Am too sleepy to make any useful comments. Maybe tomorrow. Thanks Ally.
It’s about time Tina found the courage of her convictions. And let’s all be grateful that Kit cooked the chicken.
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Yey! I’ve waiting for this story… thank you for posting. Have a great New Year ahead!
well i wanna see a frog on acid. ;D hope your new years eve was good. thx
Hey Ally, Happy 2008! Thanks for another great chapter. And of course an image I’ll never be able to erase from my memory in comparing Alice to a “frog on acid.” Now that’s an image (LOL).