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Something so right – chapter eight
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“Maybe “
Bette stroked Tina’s brow and moved her finger down until it rested against her lips. Tina closed her eyes – the sensations that Bette could produce with such a simple gesture blew Tina away – Bette had talented fingers . Tina swallowed
“Oh God “ she muttered
“I want you “ Bette muttered “ However long it takes is how long I will wait for it to be the right moment for me. This has to be what you want as much as its what I want “
Tina forced her eyes open and looked deep into Bette’s dark orbs. She had never been so close to anyone who could hold her attention captive just with their eyes. But Bette’s eyes were so beautiful -they were expressive and full of emotion and hinted at the depths of this woman’s soul and character.
“When I do something I do it properly “ Tina managed to say aware that her voice sounded husky “And when I do feel secure enough in what I know is my true sexuality I want to give myself to you totally – no holding back. I feel sometimes that I want to learn everything about you and have you know everything about me. “
“When the right two women met -the connection is like nothing else. I want that in my life – I want to know what it feels like to be so INTO the woman I am with that we almost have a kind of sixth sense about each other. I don’t want to be the legend that is Bette Porter “
“That might take some shaking off “ Tina smiled
“I can live with that reputation as long as you know that its in my past . When we are in clubs together you are going to face a lot of hassle because you are with me. It means nothing to some of these women that we arrive together holding hands – they just see me as a challenge – its going to be blatant Tina – are you ready for that ?”
Tina sighed “ It goes with being with you doesn’t it ? Its what it is – it’s the cost of falling for you “
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As usual your stories are wonderful, tender etc etc etc. Thanks for posting this before the new year. I was hoping that you would give us all a chapter for the new year. Have a wonderful new year. Ps did like the scotch eggs line.. its been so long since I last had one. So it brought a smile to my face.
that was some kiss well worth the wait for both of them! happy new year !
Yay. I love this one. I totally hope Tina starts to be more comfortable with everything.
You know, I check everyday for this story. Thanks so much! I am glad Tina has figured out what she wants and had the confidence to go after it, on a beach, no less! Thanks for you time and effort with this story…looking forward to your next post…
Ally, you are one of the most sensual writers on this site. Very few of you can project the beauty and emotion that you do in your written words. Thank you that was absolutely beautiful! Happy New Year to you and I wish you a healthy and prosperous 2008!
Love first kisses…they r so sweet…thanks Ally…and happy New Year…
A great way to end 2007. Perfection.
yeah, wow, lucky tina [ pout]; i’m just jealous…pps
That’s why Jodi’s kisses could never measure up to Tina’s (Lu Holloman). They just fit together. PPS. Happy and healthy New Year.
Well I got my New Years wish.I hope you do too.
Hmm, by the time they get to and NC-17 Tina will be ripping off Bette’s clothes!
That was so sweet yet passionate..thanks Ally and happy New Year
Finally……..the kiss I’ve been waiting for. Thanks Ally & Happy New Year!
Oh finally I loved this chapter Ally and I wish you a happy and peaceful New Year too. Thanks dear
That was so sweet and cute, beautiful first kiss!
Oh God. That was great!
mm mmm i want to kiss Bette Porter!
WOW! How sweet they are together! Thanks, you make my new years eve!
Oh AllyE, that chapter was so sweet and loving. Their tender connection and the passion that they both felt,especially Tina and the kiss. I could see it, you described it so beautifully. Love this story as well as all your others. I’ve said this before, you should be writing for a living. As my editor said t me, “the world is waiting.” Happy new year everyone. PPS
That chapter was so incredible, I loved Bette and Tina’s first kiss. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
it’s 2.30am where I’m at. stayed awake just waiting for this story, that’s how much I love it. Am too sleepy to make any useful comments. Maybe tomorrow. Thanks Ally.
It’s about time Tina found the courage of her convictions. And let’s all be grateful that Kit cooked the chicken.
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Yey! I’ve waiting for this story… thank you for posting. Have a great New Year ahead!
well i wanna see a frog on acid. ;D hope your new years eve was good. thx
Hey Ally, Happy 2008! Thanks for another great chapter. And of course an image I’ll never be able to erase from my memory in comparing Alice to a “frog on acid.” Now that’s an image (LOL).