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Something so right – chapter eight
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I WANT YOU
Tina put her finger on Bette’s lips – they were full and sensual. Bette moved her lips against Tina’s touch. Tina swallowed again and moved her head closer to Bette.
“Tina “
“I want to kiss you “
“Are you sure ?”
Tina nodded “I am 100% certain – I might not be very good at kissing women but I am not going to get good by just thinking about it “
“Its your call Tina – you know my feelings “
“I know your feelings and I know my own “
Tina moved so there was only a few millimetres between them. Bette licked her lips almost involuntarily and waited until Tina made the next move. It was one of the hardest things she had ever done – letting Tina place the first kiss on her lips. Time seemed to stop – Tina suddenly felt calm -this was not a gamble – this was her destiny. Bette was her providence – her future – this was meant to be.
Tina’s lips brushed against Bette’s. At first the kiss was gentle – Bette could barely feel Tina’s lips against hers – the kiss lingered for a few seconds before Tina pulled back. Bette sighed -that had been the best first kiss she could remember. Tina put her hands on either side of Bette’s face and moved in again – Bette moved her face a little allowing Tina closer access. The second kiss was more confident – Bette took hold of Tina’s face – their lips moving softly and more intimately .
Tina ended the kiss and looked at Bette. Bette opened her eyes and smiled shyly.
“You okay ?”
Tina let out a breathe she had been holding
“That was the greatest kiss I ever had – wow – Bette “
“Going to go back to Eric ? “ Bette asked smiling
“Eric who ? “ Tina shook her head and looked at Bette
“Again “ she said moving back towards Bette and kissing her. The kiss was much more passionate on both parts. Bette couldn’t believe how much her head was swimming – this was no standard first kiss. This kiss was about love and desire and she also realised that this kiss was the beginning of a whole new chapter in her life. Tina had shaken her to Bette’s foundations and Bette far from being afraid was thrilled and felt more excitement about this than anything else she knew. Bette knew from the first nano-second when Tina’s lips touched her that this blonde was as special as she had suspected. Bette knew that she was falling in love with Tina – what she was also now beginning to suspect was Tina was her future.
When the kiss ended Bette pulled Tina into a full body hug – Tina rested against Bette’s body. Nothing had ever prepared her for the sheer perfection of how Bette had tasted – this was more than she had imagined kissing a woman would feel like. She was 26 years old – she had first kissed a boy when she was 13. She knew that she would never kiss another man sexually again – she had found her truth – she had found Bette Porter.
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As usual your stories are wonderful, tender etc etc etc. Thanks for posting this before the new year. I was hoping that you would give us all a chapter for the new year. Have a wonderful new year. Ps did like the scotch eggs line.. its been so long since I last had one. So it brought a smile to my face.
that was some kiss well worth the wait for both of them! happy new year !
Yay. I love this one. I totally hope Tina starts to be more comfortable with everything.
You know, I check everyday for this story. Thanks so much! I am glad Tina has figured out what she wants and had the confidence to go after it, on a beach, no less! Thanks for you time and effort with this story…looking forward to your next post…
Ally, you are one of the most sensual writers on this site. Very few of you can project the beauty and emotion that you do in your written words. Thank you that was absolutely beautiful! Happy New Year to you and I wish you a healthy and prosperous 2008!
Love first kisses…they r so sweet…thanks Ally…and happy New Year…
A great way to end 2007. Perfection.
yeah, wow, lucky tina [ pout]; i’m just jealous…pps
That’s why Jodi’s kisses could never measure up to Tina’s (Lu Holloman). They just fit together. PPS. Happy and healthy New Year.
Well I got my New Years wish.I hope you do too.
Hmm, by the time they get to and NC-17 Tina will be ripping off Bette’s clothes!
That was so sweet yet passionate..thanks Ally and happy New Year
Finally……..the kiss I’ve been waiting for. Thanks Ally & Happy New Year!
Oh finally I loved this chapter Ally and I wish you a happy and peaceful New Year too. Thanks dear
That was so sweet and cute, beautiful first kiss!
Oh God. That was great!
mm mmm i want to kiss Bette Porter!
WOW! How sweet they are together! Thanks, you make my new years eve!
Oh AllyE, that chapter was so sweet and loving. Their tender connection and the passion that they both felt,especially Tina and the kiss. I could see it, you described it so beautifully. Love this story as well as all your others. I’ve said this before, you should be writing for a living. As my editor said t me, “the world is waiting.” Happy new year everyone. PPS
That chapter was so incredible, I loved Bette and Tina’s first kiss. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
it’s 2.30am where I’m at. stayed awake just waiting for this story, that’s how much I love it. Am too sleepy to make any useful comments. Maybe tomorrow. Thanks Ally.
It’s about time Tina found the courage of her convictions. And let’s all be grateful that Kit cooked the chicken.
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Yey! I’ve waiting for this story… thank you for posting. Have a great New Year ahead!
well i wanna see a frog on acid. ;D hope your new years eve was good. thx
Hey Ally, Happy 2008! Thanks for another great chapter. And of course an image I’ll never be able to erase from my memory in comparing Alice to a “frog on acid.” Now that’s an image (LOL).