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Something so right – chapter eight
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Bette kicked water towards Tina who kicked back -both were getting wet and silly. Bette moved closer to Tina who started to back away. She caught the back of her foot against a stone and started to stumble. Bette caught her just in time.
In an instant Tina was in Bette’s arms leaning backwards – she pulled herself up and got closer to Bette
“My knight in shining armour “ Tina quipped
“I aim to please “ Bette replied smiling.
Tina moved closer to Bette and they stood silently looking at each other. Tina swallowed as Bette flicked her finger out and it removed a drop of seawater that was slipping down Tina’s nose. They were both breathing deeply – Bette could feel her heart beating fast again. Tina felt that she was on the edge of a very steep cliff. She wanted to let herself fall – Bette was beside her and would catch her. What was holding her back ?
Dana’s words – — she kept thinking about Dana’s words “ if you kiss a woman you will not go back. You will be spoiled – once you kiss a woman there is no going back”
That had scared Tina more than she had admitted to anyone else – it had scared her so much that she hardly dare admit it to herself. But standing in the sea being held by this enigmatic and truly stunning woman Tina suddenly asked herself a question that had not occurred to her
SO WHAT ? Do you want to kiss a man again ? Look at how unhappy you truly were with Eric – could you want a man more than you want Bette ?
Bette was smiling at her – the only sounds that Tina could hear was her heart thudding against her chest and the distant cry of seagulls and the lulling and eternal sounds of the sea.
“We are soaked “ Bette said
Tina didn’t answer – she was just looking at the woman who she knew she wanted. So what if this moment was the one where she ceased to be straight. She had never been straight – no one who was straight could have the desires that she did for Bette. Tina moved closer still to Bette – easing her body against the brunette’s . She saw Bette swallow – Bette’s eyes were telling her what her own heart was saying .
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As usual your stories are wonderful, tender etc etc etc. Thanks for posting this before the new year. I was hoping that you would give us all a chapter for the new year. Have a wonderful new year. Ps did like the scotch eggs line.. its been so long since I last had one. So it brought a smile to my face.
that was some kiss well worth the wait for both of them! happy new year !
Yay. I love this one. I totally hope Tina starts to be more comfortable with everything.
You know, I check everyday for this story. Thanks so much! I am glad Tina has figured out what she wants and had the confidence to go after it, on a beach, no less! Thanks for you time and effort with this story…looking forward to your next post…
Ally, you are one of the most sensual writers on this site. Very few of you can project the beauty and emotion that you do in your written words. Thank you that was absolutely beautiful! Happy New Year to you and I wish you a healthy and prosperous 2008!
Love first kisses…they r so sweet…thanks Ally…and happy New Year…
A great way to end 2007. Perfection.
yeah, wow, lucky tina [ pout]; i’m just jealous…pps
That’s why Jodi’s kisses could never measure up to Tina’s (Lu Holloman). They just fit together. PPS. Happy and healthy New Year.
Well I got my New Years wish.I hope you do too.
Hmm, by the time they get to and NC-17 Tina will be ripping off Bette’s clothes!
That was so sweet yet passionate..thanks Ally and happy New Year
Finally……..the kiss I’ve been waiting for. Thanks Ally & Happy New Year!
Oh finally I loved this chapter Ally and I wish you a happy and peaceful New Year too. Thanks dear
That was so sweet and cute, beautiful first kiss!
Oh God. That was great!
mm mmm i want to kiss Bette Porter!
WOW! How sweet they are together! Thanks, you make my new years eve!
Oh AllyE, that chapter was so sweet and loving. Their tender connection and the passion that they both felt,especially Tina and the kiss. I could see it, you described it so beautifully. Love this story as well as all your others. I’ve said this before, you should be writing for a living. As my editor said t me, “the world is waiting.” Happy new year everyone. PPS
That chapter was so incredible, I loved Bette and Tina’s first kiss. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
it’s 2.30am where I’m at. stayed awake just waiting for this story, that’s how much I love it. Am too sleepy to make any useful comments. Maybe tomorrow. Thanks Ally.
It’s about time Tina found the courage of her convictions. And let’s all be grateful that Kit cooked the chicken.
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Yey! I’ve waiting for this story… thank you for posting. Have a great New Year ahead!
well i wanna see a frog on acid. ;D hope your new years eve was good. thx
Hey Ally, Happy 2008! Thanks for another great chapter. And of course an image I’ll never be able to erase from my memory in comparing Alice to a “frog on acid.” Now that’s an image (LOL).