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Something so right – chapter eight
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“I’ve tamed you ?”
“In Alice world -yes – you’ll get used to her. As I have said before- she is kind and sweet and very loyal to her friends but she is as crazy as a frog on acid. “
“I look forward to meeting her “
“I will remind you that you said that “
“Bette ?”
“Mm?”
“Did you pack a towel ?”
“There is probably one in the back of the car – why ?”
“I want to get my feet wet and I don’t want to trail sand in your car “
Bette sat up and looked down to the sea
“Come on – if I trail sand in the car I can’t shout at you — I’ll get it valeted tomorrow “
Bette got up and removed her sandals – Tina stood up and kicked her sandals off and took Bette’s hand
“Come on Porter – bit of exercise to shift all that food “
Tina started to run down the beach with Bette -they both splashed into the water at the same time – both shouting and laughing. The water splashed up and got their trousers wet – Tina jumped up and down laughing – Bette was laughing at the look of sheer joy on her girlfriends face – God – did Tina have ANY CLUE how desirable she found her ? Tina was beautiful to start with but when she laughed her face just lit up. Bette had always thought it was a cliché but it wasn’t – Tina became more beautiful when she laughed. She also had the most melodic and perfect laugh. It was the perfect pitch to please Bette – it was not too high which tended to make Bette’s teeth grate – it was low enough to be sexy but high enough to be feminine. It was just another of the areas where Bette was irresistibly drawn to the blonde.
Tina knew that she was closer than she had ever been to accepting her sexuality. She loved it when Bette opened up like she had today. Tina had guessed enough about the brunette to know that for Bette to open it was a unfamiliar journey. Tina found herself falling for Bette – it was rapidly reaching the level at which she couldn’t find a reason to hold herself back.
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As usual your stories are wonderful, tender etc etc etc. Thanks for posting this before the new year. I was hoping that you would give us all a chapter for the new year. Have a wonderful new year. Ps did like the scotch eggs line.. its been so long since I last had one. So it brought a smile to my face.
that was some kiss well worth the wait for both of them! happy new year !
Yay. I love this one. I totally hope Tina starts to be more comfortable with everything.
You know, I check everyday for this story. Thanks so much! I am glad Tina has figured out what she wants and had the confidence to go after it, on a beach, no less! Thanks for you time and effort with this story…looking forward to your next post…
Ally, you are one of the most sensual writers on this site. Very few of you can project the beauty and emotion that you do in your written words. Thank you that was absolutely beautiful! Happy New Year to you and I wish you a healthy and prosperous 2008!
Love first kisses…they r so sweet…thanks Ally…and happy New Year…
A great way to end 2007. Perfection.
yeah, wow, lucky tina [ pout]; i’m just jealous…pps
That’s why Jodi’s kisses could never measure up to Tina’s (Lu Holloman). They just fit together. PPS. Happy and healthy New Year.
Well I got my New Years wish.I hope you do too.
Hmm, by the time they get to and NC-17 Tina will be ripping off Bette’s clothes!
That was so sweet yet passionate..thanks Ally and happy New Year
Finally……..the kiss I’ve been waiting for. Thanks Ally & Happy New Year!
Oh finally I loved this chapter Ally and I wish you a happy and peaceful New Year too. Thanks dear
That was so sweet and cute, beautiful first kiss!
Oh God. That was great!
mm mmm i want to kiss Bette Porter!
WOW! How sweet they are together! Thanks, you make my new years eve!
Oh AllyE, that chapter was so sweet and loving. Their tender connection and the passion that they both felt,especially Tina and the kiss. I could see it, you described it so beautifully. Love this story as well as all your others. I’ve said this before, you should be writing for a living. As my editor said t me, “the world is waiting.” Happy new year everyone. PPS
That chapter was so incredible, I loved Bette and Tina’s first kiss. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
it’s 2.30am where I’m at. stayed awake just waiting for this story, that’s how much I love it. Am too sleepy to make any useful comments. Maybe tomorrow. Thanks Ally.
It’s about time Tina found the courage of her convictions. And let’s all be grateful that Kit cooked the chicken.
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Yey! I’ve waiting for this story… thank you for posting. Have a great New Year ahead!
well i wanna see a frog on acid. ;D hope your new years eve was good. thx
Hey Ally, Happy 2008! Thanks for another great chapter. And of course an image I’ll never be able to erase from my memory in comparing Alice to a “frog on acid.” Now that’s an image (LOL).