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Something so right – chapter four
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“It depends on how seriously you take the whole gay scene. It looked new and exciting to me but if you go to the same place every week then it is bound to make you feel stale “
“I know that it is early but do you want to do something with me next Friday ?”
“Suggest something “
Bette pulled a face “ The movies and dinner “
“You can’t think of anything different ?”
“I guess I have been going to Liquid too many times “
“Do your friends like to go there ?”
“I took it out on Alice last night – I was pretty mean to her “
“So suggest that you all go and do something else “
“That’s not the answer “ Bette was determined to do something on Friday that did NOT include Liquid “ Will you do something with me ?”
“Okay – and you are bored with clubs ?”
“For now “
Tina thoughts about it – she had the perfect idea
“Okay – I pick what we do “
“You ?” Bette raised a doubting eyebrow.
“Yes – me – or do you have another woman in mind ?”
Bette smiled “There is no one that I would rather spend a Friday night other than you “
Tina laughed
“You are so smooth “
“You said that to me the first time I met you – obviously you charm women into bed and I can see how “
Bette sighed
“I am not proud of that “
Tina gestured with her hand to dismiss the comment
“There is nothing wrong with being a player – if I looked as freaking hot as you and had your level of self confidence – oh yeah I would be a player “
“Have you ever been a player ?”
Tina laughed “I have had a few men – my closet is pretty well stocked with bones but there has always been this core feeling that I wasn’t meant to be with men”
“Do you want to go for a drive and a walk – it’s a nice day – we should be sitting in the sun ?”
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Ally, I love all your stories. This one is getting off to a great start. I can’t wait for the next post.
Too much black coffee?
what cute update! they are so adorable together, love how they spend the day, walking, talking, holding hands so sweet…. i’m such a sap,lol
This was very sweet. I can’t wait to find out what Tina’s real name is. PPS!!
Great Ally and I have learned how to go at your pace too despite it’s killing me I mean what can I do I love your stories that much, Great job dear, please post soon.All my love
Fanstastic! PPS
I love the way that you have them taking their time to know each other and become friends before they become lovers. Great story Ally, can’t wait for your next update.
I’m really liking your characterisation of these 2. Thx.
As per usual you got me hooked at chapter 1, your just so great at these fanfic stories what can I say other than pps
Sweet.
AllyE, the girls are just too cute together. Learning more about each other. I like the way you have them meeting. Happy that you will have two wks. off and yes we would love more posts of the stories, especially AYNiL and L Wing. PPS
funntone, ui thought it was gas! this is a fun side of each of them. thx
They are so cute and sweet and funny!
Hey Ally, Can you see I’m jumping up and down with the excitement of more chapters from you. I am just loving this romantic and gentle tale. The dialogue between Bette and Tina was awesoem. Honesty poured from Bette as she tried to show Tina the real Bette Porter. These glimpses into Bette’s psyche are so telling. I’m not sure if Tina really appreciates this now. This love affair is beginning blossom. Just perfect. More please. Many, mnay thankd from Your Loyal Fan.
I feel like I’ve seen that somewhere, Bette Porter being POTUS. Where would that be? ;-)
Hey Ally, sweeet update… I had to laugh at Bette’s full name, I’ve only seen that on your neck of the woods. Almost everyone on my other side of the family have 3 or 4 names and I love it! ;)
Hooked already and it’s only Chapter 4!