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Something so right – chapter four
“That’s a great idea – come on -we’ll take you car “
Bette nodded – it was going to be a great day whatever they did and a gentle stroll along the beach was something that she was looking forward to. Tina grabbed her bag and went to the counter as Bette searched for her sunglasses. She took her wallet from her bag and went to the counter
“It’s okay – I paid for breakfast “
Bette smiled
“Sure ?”
“Yeah – all my friends say that I have a bottomless pit for a stomach so you might be buying
me hotdogs or an ice cream in a couple of hours “
Bette liked a woman who enjoyed her food
“Okay – that’s a deal – but you are going to have to get into the habit of letting me pay for things “
Tina shook her head and headed for the door. Bette followed her outside -Tina was standing with her arms crossed.
“What ?”
“I am going to have to get into the habit of letting YOU pay for ME ?”
Bette blushed “Mistake ?”
“Very big mistake “
“I am used to being the one”
Tina frowned “ Well get un-used to it – in case you hadn’t noticed – I am my own woman and I don’t need anyone to treat me like I was some fragile little object “
Bette’s first reaction was to over react – what the hell was Tina playing at by getting so worked up over a simple thing like paying for the odd meal. But hadn’t she been annoyed that Tina had automatically paid for breakfast. If Bette had wanted some compliant woman she would have stuck to the sycophants in gay bars – she was bored with that remember ? She wanted someone who her own mind – well Tina certainly was sure of her attitude and confident.
“I am sorry “
Tina suddenly smiled “I am sorry too – I over reacted there – come on – lets get some fresh air
into our lungs. Bette’s automatic movement was to go and open the door of her Saab for Tina.
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Ally, I love all your stories. This one is getting off to a great start. I can’t wait for the next post.
Too much black coffee?
what cute update! they are so adorable together, love how they spend the day, walking, talking, holding hands so sweet…. i’m such a sap,lol
This was very sweet. I can’t wait to find out what Tina’s real name is. PPS!!
Great Ally and I have learned how to go at your pace too despite it’s killing me I mean what can I do I love your stories that much, Great job dear, please post soon.All my love
Fanstastic! PPS
I love the way that you have them taking their time to know each other and become friends before they become lovers. Great story Ally, can’t wait for your next update.
I’m really liking your characterisation of these 2. Thx.
As per usual you got me hooked at chapter 1, your just so great at these fanfic stories what can I say other than pps
Sweet.
AllyE, the girls are just too cute together. Learning more about each other. I like the way you have them meeting. Happy that you will have two wks. off and yes we would love more posts of the stories, especially AYNiL and L Wing. PPS
funntone, ui thought it was gas! this is a fun side of each of them. thx
They are so cute and sweet and funny!
Hey Ally, Can you see I’m jumping up and down with the excitement of more chapters from you. I am just loving this romantic and gentle tale. The dialogue between Bette and Tina was awesoem. Honesty poured from Bette as she tried to show Tina the real Bette Porter. These glimpses into Bette’s psyche are so telling. I’m not sure if Tina really appreciates this now. This love affair is beginning blossom. Just perfect. More please. Many, mnay thankd from Your Loyal Fan.
I feel like I’ve seen that somewhere, Bette Porter being POTUS. Where would that be? ;-)
Hey Ally, sweeet update… I had to laugh at Bette’s full name, I’ve only seen that on your neck of the woods. Almost everyone on my other side of the family have 3 or 4 names and I love it! ;)
Hooked already and it’s only Chapter 4!