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Something so right – chapter nine
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Bette had tasted just freaking wonderful – her lips were soft and just perfect.
“Its okay Tina “
“I don’t know why I am crying “
“Its okay – just tell me you are not hurt “
“I am just being silly “
“No you are not being silly “
Bette stroked Tina’s back – she kissed Tina’s hair
“Its okay honey “
“You don’t want some weepy and soppy girlfriend “
“If you are weepy and soppy then that’s the girlfriend I want “ Bette replied “ come on “
Tina looked at Bette “Thanks “
“I didn’t do anything – I just held you and very nice it felt as well “
“It does feel good “
Tina eased away and smiled at Bette who was dressed casually in jeans and a white blouse.
“You look nice “ Tina said
“So do you – what are we having – it looks really nice “
“Spicy beef stir fry – it will only take about 12 minutes. Do you prefer a starter or a sweet “
“A sweet “
“There is loads of ice cream in the freezer so we can just have some of that – I could make some popcorn “
“I brought some “
“You got movies ?”
“I did “
“What theme ?”
“80’s classics “
“Oh great – I loved all those shoulder pads – what have you got ?”
“Back to the Future, Fame, Raiders of the Lost Ark, Stand by me and Heathers “
Tina rubbed her eyes and smiled at Bette
“You are fucking brilliant – do you know that ?”
“I was worried that maybe the flash studio executive would prefer something much more serious “
“I would have thought that the Gallery owner was more high brow “ Tina replied.
Bette rubbed her nose “ I can be too serious – I don’t just chill out and I know that its bad for me and maybe that’s one of the reason that in business people are terrified of me. I can be an ogre and its not nice. “
Tina kissed Bette’s brow
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Always the Drama Queen. But in a good way. BTW, you didn’t answer my question about choosing the name of “Ella” for B & T’s baby in TLWing.
Azmama – sorry – i meant to drop you a PM. if Jennifer’s daughter is called Ella then it really is a coincidence. i have been planning this baby story for a couple of years and she was always going to be called Ella. it proves great minds think alike !! -i didn’t know about it until you told me Ally x
I’ve loved all your stories, Ally – but this one is truly my favourite, and it does prove that some things are worth waiting for… ;-)A very happy New Year to you!
ah very good…he doesn’t have a chance…no way jose…more please AllyHappy New Year 2 u 2
Damn that Eric!!! Can’t he take a hint! What’s wrong with him!!! Anyway Ally, thanks for the quick post!!! I adore this story. It’s the one I always look for. I was thinking, with all the fan fic awards, they should have a category devoted solely to B&T beginning stories, you would clean up…just my thought! Thanks for the post!!! Happy 2008!!!
This is one of my favorites at the moment. So sweet. But I wonder how they will handle the ex-boyfriend. Particularly how Tina will handle him at work. Hopefully she isn’t going to let him think there is another chance. Hope that there is another chapter soon.
Doesn’t sound like Mr. Man has much of a chance. Very poor timing on his part as Tina’s already signed the contract for the other team. If Tina’s smart she’ll turn the volume down on both the ringer and the answering machine and have her virginal way with Bette.
Well you certainly have started the new year off with a bang. Great chapter…that Eric, he never seems to take no for an answer in anyone’s stories!
Eric needs to go post haste.I keep falling in love with this story.
Eric needs to go AWAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
it’s very sweet that bette is opening up to tina and learning to relax a little. tina is definitely good for bette! please make ERIC GO to a distant land???
Great chapter. Love the kissing!
You clearly have a niche in writing Bette and Tina beginnings. This one is brilliant. I’ve been reading your stories long enough to know that things can be going smoothly, then you lower the boom, drama queen!! PPS
Not nice to leave us like that my friend lol. That was great and love to see they kiss, that was lovely. Hope you take eric out of the pic soon. Please post more, thanks!
Bette and Tina are so sweet and it is fun to read about them falling in love. However, the end part from Eric sounds potentially scary to our couple.
brilliantly done…i am so hooked…
I can’t help it..just need to let you now again that I’m so delighted everytime I see post from you Ally. You are just an amazing writer…and lovin how you play Bette and Tina. Just crazy about B&T beginnings and you never fail. Its just amazing! I can never get enough of your stories…TLW, LAP and AYNIL…now with Something So Right…just amazing…it’s like i’m on a first date everytime i read…im so lovin it!!!
I hope Tina wont get scared again and they continue this sweet making out moments. Hey Ally, in one word – Fabulous!!
As always wonderful Ally, you are doing a great job with thses two, looking forward for the next one.thanks
Oh no the man!!!! get rid of him quickly…great stuff pps. Happy new year.
I love your story. Please continue as soon as you can.
a starter or a sweet. hmmmm?????? what would i go for?? not ice cream for dinner, my mom would soooo disapprove. thx.