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Something so right – chapter nine
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Bette buzzed the door and was let into the apartment block by an elderly woman who was heading out with a poodle on a pink leash. Bette took the lift and arrived in a few minutes at Tina’s front door. The door was slightly ajar so Bette pushed the door open and stepped inside. She put the bag she was carrying on the sofa and went looking for Tina. The blonde was in the kitchen – all the ingredients for a stir-fry were prepared and on plates beside the oven. Tina was looking out of the window.
Bette stepped into the kitchen and immediately knew that something was wrong.
“Tina “ she said softly. Tina turned – she was crying. Bette had been upset when Tina had cried the first night when she had been coming onto her and Tina couldn’t cope. Seeing her now – several weeks later almost ripped Bette’s heart out – seeing Tina hurt actually upset Bette. If Bette needed any further proof that she was in love with Tina this was it .
Bette hurried across and took hold of Tina – she didn’t need to know what was wrong – she
just needed to hold the woman she was in love with.
“Hey sweetie “
Tina had been happily preparing dinner for them – she had taken some of her homemade sun blushed tomato and olive bread from the freezer as soon as she had got home. Then she had grabbed a coffee and sat down with her cook books trying to decide what to make for Bette. She was looking forward to cooking for Bette – she was looking forward even more to kissing Bette – it was a feeling like no other. It had only been when she had been preparing the ingredients for spicy beef stir-fry that she had relaxed enough to start thinking about the events of the afternoon. They had kissed – she had kissed Bette Porter and it had felt fucking fantastic.
She was a lesbian- she wanted women – she didn’t want to ever sleep with a man. Kissing Bette had made her realise just how deeply gay she was. For months she had thought about being gay – she had lain in bed in the early hours just thinking about her feelings. She was gay — if she had doubted it, if she had maybe thought that it was a phase that she would get out of – that had been blown away by actually kissing Bette.
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Always the Drama Queen. But in a good way. BTW, you didn’t answer my question about choosing the name of “Ella” for B & T’s baby in TLWing.
Azmama – sorry – i meant to drop you a PM. if Jennifer’s daughter is called Ella then it really is a coincidence. i have been planning this baby story for a couple of years and she was always going to be called Ella. it proves great minds think alike !! -i didn’t know about it until you told me Ally x
I’ve loved all your stories, Ally – but this one is truly my favourite, and it does prove that some things are worth waiting for… ;-)A very happy New Year to you!
ah very good…he doesn’t have a chance…no way jose…more please AllyHappy New Year 2 u 2
Damn that Eric!!! Can’t he take a hint! What’s wrong with him!!! Anyway Ally, thanks for the quick post!!! I adore this story. It’s the one I always look for. I was thinking, with all the fan fic awards, they should have a category devoted solely to B&T beginning stories, you would clean up…just my thought! Thanks for the post!!! Happy 2008!!!
This is one of my favorites at the moment. So sweet. But I wonder how they will handle the ex-boyfriend. Particularly how Tina will handle him at work. Hopefully she isn’t going to let him think there is another chance. Hope that there is another chapter soon.
Doesn’t sound like Mr. Man has much of a chance. Very poor timing on his part as Tina’s already signed the contract for the other team. If Tina’s smart she’ll turn the volume down on both the ringer and the answering machine and have her virginal way with Bette.
Well you certainly have started the new year off with a bang. Great chapter…that Eric, he never seems to take no for an answer in anyone’s stories!
Eric needs to go post haste.I keep falling in love with this story.
Eric needs to go AWAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
it’s very sweet that bette is opening up to tina and learning to relax a little. tina is definitely good for bette! please make ERIC GO to a distant land???
Great chapter. Love the kissing!
You clearly have a niche in writing Bette and Tina beginnings. This one is brilliant. I’ve been reading your stories long enough to know that things can be going smoothly, then you lower the boom, drama queen!! PPS
Not nice to leave us like that my friend lol. That was great and love to see they kiss, that was lovely. Hope you take eric out of the pic soon. Please post more, thanks!
Bette and Tina are so sweet and it is fun to read about them falling in love. However, the end part from Eric sounds potentially scary to our couple.
brilliantly done…i am so hooked…
I can’t help it..just need to let you now again that I’m so delighted everytime I see post from you Ally. You are just an amazing writer…and lovin how you play Bette and Tina. Just crazy about B&T beginnings and you never fail. Its just amazing! I can never get enough of your stories…TLW, LAP and AYNIL…now with Something So Right…just amazing…it’s like i’m on a first date everytime i read…im so lovin it!!!
I hope Tina wont get scared again and they continue this sweet making out moments. Hey Ally, in one word – Fabulous!!
As always wonderful Ally, you are doing a great job with thses two, looking forward for the next one.thanks
Oh no the man!!!! get rid of him quickly…great stuff pps. Happy new year.
I love your story. Please continue as soon as you can.
a starter or a sweet. hmmmm?????? what would i go for?? not ice cream for dinner, my mom would soooo disapprove. thx.