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Something so right – chapter nine
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“You are very nice – I won’t tell anyone that if you don’t want me too “
Bette smiled – Tina was good for her – she had made Bette face her flaws – and Bette admitted that one of her major faults was that she was too serious and rigid at times. If she was shedding that skin with Tina it would only happen if she hired fun movies and not terribly serious stuff with subtitles and not a hint of a laugh. Bette’s other reason for selecting the films that she had was that it was a excuse to listen to Tina’s gentle and beautiful laugh.
Tina touched Bette’s face and moved closer to kiss her. They embraced before Tina kissed Bette fully and passionately on her lips. Bette responded – demanding more for the first time during a kiss – she opened her mouth and slipped her tongue out to lick Tina’s lips. Tina took the hint and opened her mouth allowing Bette’s tongue to slide easily inside. The kiss went on for several minutes – Tina ended the kiss
“Fuck “
“You okay ? “ Bette was concerned
“Fuck in a good way “ Tina assured her
“That’s good – was it too much ? “
Tina stroked her hair from her face and smiled
“No – its not too much – its wonderful “
“If you have to slap me back I will understand “
“I don’t need to slap you back – I can let you know that I want you to stop without slapping you”
“Figure of speech “
Tina moved closer again and kissed Bette passionately – Bette sunk back into the embrace and for several minutes they lost themselves in the others arms. Bette’s hands had just rested on Tina’s ass and was squeezing her cheeks when the phone sounded. Bette moved away but Tina wouldn’t let her end the kiss. After a few minutes the answer phone picked up the call. A male voice cut through the intimacy of the moment
“Hey Tina – its me – I just called to tell you how much I love you. I have been such an idiot lately and you have been distant. I want you to know that I am not going to give up on you. We are meant to be together and I am never going to stop trying to get you back. I love you – bye – I will see you at work on Monday. “
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Always the Drama Queen. But in a good way. BTW, you didn’t answer my question about choosing the name of “Ella” for B & T’s baby in TLWing.
Azmama – sorry – i meant to drop you a PM. if Jennifer’s daughter is called Ella then it really is a coincidence. i have been planning this baby story for a couple of years and she was always going to be called Ella. it proves great minds think alike !! -i didn’t know about it until you told me Ally x
I’ve loved all your stories, Ally – but this one is truly my favourite, and it does prove that some things are worth waiting for… ;-)A very happy New Year to you!
ah very good…he doesn’t have a chance…no way jose…more please AllyHappy New Year 2 u 2
Damn that Eric!!! Can’t he take a hint! What’s wrong with him!!! Anyway Ally, thanks for the quick post!!! I adore this story. It’s the one I always look for. I was thinking, with all the fan fic awards, they should have a category devoted solely to B&T beginning stories, you would clean up…just my thought! Thanks for the post!!! Happy 2008!!!
This is one of my favorites at the moment. So sweet. But I wonder how they will handle the ex-boyfriend. Particularly how Tina will handle him at work. Hopefully she isn’t going to let him think there is another chance. Hope that there is another chapter soon.
Doesn’t sound like Mr. Man has much of a chance. Very poor timing on his part as Tina’s already signed the contract for the other team. If Tina’s smart she’ll turn the volume down on both the ringer and the answering machine and have her virginal way with Bette.
Well you certainly have started the new year off with a bang. Great chapter…that Eric, he never seems to take no for an answer in anyone’s stories!
Eric needs to go post haste.I keep falling in love with this story.
Eric needs to go AWAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
it’s very sweet that bette is opening up to tina and learning to relax a little. tina is definitely good for bette! please make ERIC GO to a distant land???
Great chapter. Love the kissing!
You clearly have a niche in writing Bette and Tina beginnings. This one is brilliant. I’ve been reading your stories long enough to know that things can be going smoothly, then you lower the boom, drama queen!! PPS
Not nice to leave us like that my friend lol. That was great and love to see they kiss, that was lovely. Hope you take eric out of the pic soon. Please post more, thanks!
Bette and Tina are so sweet and it is fun to read about them falling in love. However, the end part from Eric sounds potentially scary to our couple.
brilliantly done…i am so hooked…
I can’t help it..just need to let you now again that I’m so delighted everytime I see post from you Ally. You are just an amazing writer…and lovin how you play Bette and Tina. Just crazy about B&T beginnings and you never fail. Its just amazing! I can never get enough of your stories…TLW, LAP and AYNIL…now with Something So Right…just amazing…it’s like i’m on a first date everytime i read…im so lovin it!!!
I hope Tina wont get scared again and they continue this sweet making out moments. Hey Ally, in one word – Fabulous!!
As always wonderful Ally, you are doing a great job with thses two, looking forward for the next one.thanks
Oh no the man!!!! get rid of him quickly…great stuff pps. Happy new year.
I love your story. Please continue as soon as you can.
a starter or a sweet. hmmmm?????? what would i go for?? not ice cream for dinner, my mom would soooo disapprove. thx.