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    Something so right – chapter one

    Story written on November 30, 2007 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette heads out on a Friday night

     

    Alice turned and grinned at the slender and almost frail looking Shane McCutcheon. Shane was just 21 – she looked about 14. They had become friends only a few weeks ago but already Alice regarded the young woman as one of her best friends. Alice regarded Shane – she was wearing drain pipe black trousers and a tiny white vest – no bra – not that her breasts were big enough to need such a support garment. Alice offered Shane a bottle of beer.

     

    “Cheers Al “ Shane sat down – Alice glanced around the room and noticed that all of a sudden several pairs of eyes were on their table. Shane was adored and almost worshipped by so many women – she broke hearts because she was looking for fun and that did not include monogamy in that mix. Shane was already becoming a legend in West Hollywood – some rumours were that she had already slept with over a hundred women and she had only been in West-Ho for 15 months . Alice could see the attraction of the waif like Shane – but even after a few weeks she had seen enough to know that she wasn’t going to touch Shane with a barge pole.

     

    “So – where have you been all week – I have been out nearly ever night and not spotted you once “

    “Late shifts at the salon and at college on Wednesday and Thursday – hard work man”

    “Just work – no play ?”

    Shane regaled her with one of her winning smiles “I did not say that – I said that I had been working hard – I might have also been playing hard as well “

    “Name names “ Alice demanded

     

    “I don’t kiss and tell – that’s your territory “

     

    “Ah come on Shane – just a clue – what happened with that utterly hot blonde you went home with last Saturday ?”

     

    “It went “ Shane shrugged “Tell me what you are up to. How did it go with finding a full time job ?”

     

    “I have been working at a cash and carry warehouse as a clerk “

     

    Shane smirked – one of the highlights of a Friday was finding out what disaster had fallen on Alice in the week. Last week she had dropped a box of paper on her new bosses toe after only three hours – that was the record so far

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    1. Wow. I’m really intruiged my the start of this one. Definitely understand that you can’t post as much as you used to but i hope you get another chapter of this story out soon.

    2. I am sooo glad to see a TiBette story in the making… Thank you. This sounds great. I love the way Bette feels Tina is so special. Soon to be the love of her life. PPS

    5. I like it Bette was a little pushy but she is used to all those easy girls that just fall into her bed if she looks at them. Hope she stays and takls to Tina and tries to be a friend to her first.

    14. Ally i am so happy to see that you have posted a new story, well i didn’t read it yet, but i am going to right now, i just wanted to ask you, is it a short or long story? thanks love

    15. Good God Ally, how do you do it… your writing especially these Tibette beginnings are so vivid and wonderful. Well you know now that you will simply have to post another chapter pronto :-)Thank you!!!

    24. hey ally, this is a great start to what must be a wonderful story, since you are writing it. can’t wait for the next chapter. sorry that you are busier but hope all is well. you know youa re important to us :)

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