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Something so right – chapter one
“Did you last all week ?”
“Yeah – but I quit “
“Why ?”
“Not a lesbian in the whole building and in this neck of the woods I didn’t think that was possible “
“You quit a job just because there wasn’t a lesbian in sight – Alice – that’s what this place is for – so you can see all the lesbians that you want “
“Well that wasn’t the only reason I quit “
`“Okay – out with it “
“Well because it was a cash and carry I had to be at work by 7am “
“Oh – not a morning person “ declared Shane nodding in the direction of a sweet looking brunette who had walked past the table several times just to get Shane to notice her. Shane had actually noticed her about three seconds after she had worked in .She was just choosing to ignore her – Shane was already carrying out her weekly ritual for finding a woman – she liked women keen but not stalker types. She hadn’t seen everything that the club had to offer but she had taken note of one or two possible pick-ups already — just in case the rest of the club did not match up to her tastes.
“I could be if being in at 7am meant sharing a coffee with a nice tasty lesbian who told me her dreams and let me share her cookies “
Shane shook her head “ And you thought this Jodie Foster look-alike would work in a cash and carry warehouse in downtown LA ?”
“No – but maybe her sister would – it’s a dead end job “
“I thought you were just trying to make enough to cover your expenses while you did this evening course in creative writing and journalism “
“I am – next week I am working in the circulation department of the LA Sun -that’s got to be a step in the right direction “
“And full of lesbians I would hope “
Just as Alice was about to tell Shane about the dream she had experienced the night before where she seduced on a 20 foot long bed of newspapers by a ravishing Russian who didn’t speak English but knew all about the language of LOVE – the door to Liquid opened and the whole air of the place shifted.
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(9 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Wow. I’m really intruiged my the start of this one. Definitely understand that you can’t post as much as you used to but i hope you get another chapter of this story out soon.
I am sooo glad to see a TiBette story in the making… Thank you. This sounds great. I love the way Bette feels Tina is so special. Soon to be the love of her life. PPS
How the hell do you do that? Having me hooked with for pages? PPS! Pleeeaaaase!
Wow Ally nice start, I love it, you have great ideas there friend please carry on, we will be waiting for the next chapter.All my love
I like it Bette was a little pushy but she is used to all those easy girls that just fall into her bed if she looks at them. Hope she stays and takls to Tina and tries to be a friend to her first.
CON-TIN-UE!
Keep going Ally, like only you know how!
Oh I like… actually erase that… I love! Can’t wait for more!
You’re amazing. Your imagination is exhilirating. How do you come up w/all these different ideas? PPS.
Bette made Tina cry? What a smoothie.
Great beginning Ally. Love all your stories. Can’t wait for more!
Ally you did it again! what fantastic start! please keep going…. love ur stories!
great start. lets see where you take us this time. thanks.
Ally i am so happy to see that you have posted a new story, well i didn’t read it yet, but i am going to right now, i just wanted to ask you, is it a short or long story? thanks love
Good God Ally, how do you do it… your writing especially these Tibette beginnings are so vivid and wonderful. Well you know now that you will simply have to post another chapter pronto :-)Thank you!!!
God Ally I am a tibette beginnings fanatic, and knowing you…it’ll be one of the best Thankyou!!!
I love it!!…Especially, Bette as a demi-goddess….PPS
Woohoo another B&T beginning, like it my friend and please post more, thanks!
Ally, I so love this!!!! My god woman you are one of a kind!!!! Thank you PPS
Great start. Can’t wait for you to contiune.
I look forward to all your stories. Have a great weekend.
Seems that you have started another great B&T beginning. Please continue AllyE. Just how many of these beginnings do you have in mind?
You are a fountain of great stories. Thanks for another great start.
hey ally, this is a great start to what must be a wonderful story, since you are writing it. can’t wait for the next chapter. sorry that you are busier but hope all is well. you know youa re important to us :)