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Something so right – chapter one
“So – what the hell is she doing in a gay bar -is she ?”
“Well you do say that every woman isn’t gay until they are “
“That’s true “
“I need the bathroom – I’ll get some drinks on the way back”
Bette stood up and made her way through the crowd to the bathroom. The room was full
enough without lots of women wanting to stop and talk to Bette. Bette kept her smile fixed and made it to the bathroom in only twice the time it would take anyone else. Her trip to the bar was even slower – she kept her head down and made it to the bar. Once she reached the bar her charisma kicked into operation. She stood behind a couple of women and caught the bar woman’s eye – and was served in minutes. Just as she was heading back to her friends – that was when she saw her. Bette looked at the blonde who was talking to the tennis player just as the blonde turned her head and their eyes met.
Bette swallowed – for some reason her breathing was laboured. She could hear her blood pounding around her body. It was one of those moments she had seen so many times on the TV and in movies – time stopped. Bette managed a smile at the blonde who returned the smile. Bette still couldn’t stop staring at the blonde. Her brain seemed to have cut all channels of communication with her legs. She swallowed again and somehow managed to walk back to Shane and Alice. She sat down – handed out the bottles of beer and looked back at the blonde.
There was no two ways about it – Bette had to have that woman. Every other woman in the club might as well concentrate on other options – Bette had made her mind up. She was going home with the blonde. Alice was arguing with Shane about something that Bette couldn’t care less about. She was watching her target. She looked at Alice
“Why don’t you go and say hello to Dana ?”
“What ? No way – she’s famous “
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(9 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Wow. I’m really intruiged my the start of this one. Definitely understand that you can’t post as much as you used to but i hope you get another chapter of this story out soon.
I am sooo glad to see a TiBette story in the making… Thank you. This sounds great. I love the way Bette feels Tina is so special. Soon to be the love of her life. PPS
How the hell do you do that? Having me hooked with for pages? PPS! Pleeeaaaase!
Wow Ally nice start, I love it, you have great ideas there friend please carry on, we will be waiting for the next chapter.All my love
I like it Bette was a little pushy but she is used to all those easy girls that just fall into her bed if she looks at them. Hope she stays and takls to Tina and tries to be a friend to her first.
CON-TIN-UE!
Keep going Ally, like only you know how!
Oh I like… actually erase that… I love! Can’t wait for more!
You’re amazing. Your imagination is exhilirating. How do you come up w/all these different ideas? PPS.
Bette made Tina cry? What a smoothie.
Great beginning Ally. Love all your stories. Can’t wait for more!
Ally you did it again! what fantastic start! please keep going…. love ur stories!
great start. lets see where you take us this time. thanks.
Ally i am so happy to see that you have posted a new story, well i didn’t read it yet, but i am going to right now, i just wanted to ask you, is it a short or long story? thanks love
Good God Ally, how do you do it… your writing especially these Tibette beginnings are so vivid and wonderful. Well you know now that you will simply have to post another chapter pronto :-)Thank you!!!
God Ally I am a tibette beginnings fanatic, and knowing you…it’ll be one of the best Thankyou!!!
I love it!!…Especially, Bette as a demi-goddess….PPS
Woohoo another B&T beginning, like it my friend and please post more, thanks!
Ally, I so love this!!!! My god woman you are one of a kind!!!! Thank you PPS
Great start. Can’t wait for you to contiune.
I look forward to all your stories. Have a great weekend.
Seems that you have started another great B&T beginning. Please continue AllyE. Just how many of these beginnings do you have in mind?
You are a fountain of great stories. Thanks for another great start.
hey ally, this is a great start to what must be a wonderful story, since you are writing it. can’t wait for the next chapter. sorry that you are busier but hope all is well. you know youa re important to us :)