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Something so right – chapter twelve
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“Tell them that I am spoken for “ Bette replied taking Tina’s hand
Alice had been looking at Tina for a few minutes before she spoke
“So what magic powers do you have ?”
Tina smiled
“Alice “ Bette said warningly
“No – it’s a reasonable question – I have a lot of special powers Alice. But not everyone can see these talents of mine. What special powers do you have ?”
“Alice can spread a rumour faster than anyone else in America. Tell Alice – tell CNN – same difference “ Shane laughed
“So how did you snare Bette ? “
“Same way she snared me “
“You know her reputation ?”
Tina nodded
“It doesn’t bother you ?”
Tina kissed Bette’s hand “ No -there is no reason that it should – that’s in the past – all that matters is here and now -and here and now Bette and I are dating. Have you told them about our vacation ?”
“Yes -I think they are suitably jealous “
“Well I am -I have always wanted to go surfing there – they say the waves are fantastic “
“You a good surfer Shane ?”
“I am pretty good – lived in LA all my life and I love the sea “
“What about you Alice ?”
“Never been a surfer – too many damn creatures in the sea. I once worked at a hotel in Maui when I was about 19. Well I was dating this 6ft 7 in Polynesian guy and we were both drunk and fooling around – so we went in the sea to you know…. “
“Yes – we all know “ Shane raised her eyebrows in exasperation
“And he was a big lad in every way and then this was this basking shark and “
Shane and Tina burst out laughing – Bette was tempted to slap Alice. How many minutes had they all been together and Alice was telling her usual round of stories ?
But she gave in and grinned – at least the others seemed to be making an effort with Tina. And the blonde was doing great so far. Bette smiled at Tina – what a fantastic woman.
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Wow, I don’t even know if I can express how much I love this one. Love. Can’t wait for Hawaii. Glad Tina could handle Bette’s friends. I hope you keep updating this one a lot.. because I’m pretty much checking the site for it religiously.
awesome as always, loving how T seems to have grown into the T we know and love already!
This really is a fun story. I love how you write the interplay between all the girls. And Bette in love is so cute. Thanks for the update!
Surfs up, Moondoggie! Hang ten! Don’t for the sun block.
Goldilocks in a teeny-weeny black bikini. No wonder Bette was shaken. I love how this story is shaping up, Ally. Can’t wait for the Hawaii update. But please find time to update The L Wing, too. Please don’t jump to when Baby Ella is already six months old. Btw, did you know that JB’s real-life daughter’s name is also Ella? Thanks, Ally. PPS :>
“So what magic powers do you have ?” HAHAHA i love alice and her mouth! LOVE how assertive tina is!!!
Can’t wait for Hawaii. Bette is gonna die.
I’m addicted to this story !! PLease update soooooon !! :-)
…*thud* The bikini… *dies*
Hello AllyE, That was a superb addition to this most wonderful of series. I love that Tina held her own against Alice then pulled out the rabbit from the hat and shut Alice up. Great to see that Shane was Yoda-esk as she saw the cennection between Bette and Tina. Shane read very syllable on Bette’s face as Tina appeared. Not a word was spoken but Shane apprecated the depth of love shared between B & T. I just adore your magnificent melodrama. The group scene brought out the best in the gang. Thank you so much for everything you write. It is a genuine pleasure to open each new post with excitement and longing and then be devastated when it comes to an end. The hope of a new post soon always makes me smile again. So a big thank you for all that you create. Your Loyal Fan.
love this fun story. PPS
Ally, side stepping the whole “your a great writer issue” as to why we love this story….it’s Tibette in the beginning, at their finest, the “new love” and all that that means..hopes, dreams etc I think true Tibetter eat these beginning stories up…it’s only icing on the cake to have it come from you and knowing how well you do do things!!! Tks, Yes I love l-wing…but want more of this!! PPS
AllyE what can I say if your not just fantastic, you must be pretty close to perfect!!. How on earth do you do it your writing is just “thud” just past out where words failed me. Now I dont know which of your stories are my favorite. Hell what the heck they all are.I guess that Bette hands are going to be shaking some more when she removes the tiny black bikini that Tina will be wearing but then it should not take long to be remove. Great chapter please post soon.
that was fun. really want to see b in the bikini. thanks.
Love this,Love how Tina is handling Alice .Alice wont make much off of Tina. Bette in love is so beautiful. thanks
I didn’t mean to not complain about L-Wing because I do love it, but as everyone else said B&T beginings are the bomb and we just can’t resist them so all I can say is more, more, more. A little side trip to L-Wing wouldn’t hurt though ;)
Bring on Hawaii! Bring on Hawaii! Bring on Hawaii! Bring on Hawaii! Bring on Hawaii! Bring on Hawaii!
Can I just say that you rock! I love this story, and I’ll complain if I need to so that you’ll give us another L Wing update! I love all your stories–you’re an amazing writer!!
Just gets better and better Ally, definitely one of my favorite stories. Love your dialogue which is so perfect in all your writing along with the teasing, confident Tina. Bring on Hawaii and that oh-so-tempting string bikini!
yay! I LOVE this one.. I don’t care if you don’t update for a few days L wing.. I just love this story!!! I have to admit, I’m a Tee girl but I can’t take out of my mind the idea of Bette in a tiny bikini… *thud* Take care Ally, xx
Can’t wait for Hawaii!!
You go Ally, I can’t wait to see how you write Tina in that black bikini after the pool sean. I bet your words will put good visions in our heads. Since you brough it up I would really like to read a post from the L-wing too. Md Oh ya, Thank you.
wow!! that was great. I love Tina’s confidence. Bring on the action on the main island!!!
I think this story totally ROCKS and it gets better every chapter. I loved Alice’s reaction to Bette’s news and Tina’s ability to handle Alice was icing on the cake. I can’t wait for Hawaii.
That was good. Love B&T, if I were Bette, Im shaking too lol, damn Tina in that bikini is hot and can’t wait to see they on Hawaii. Alice is funny! Please post more, thanks!
This story is delicious!!! I got nervous when Bette admitted to Alice that she had not yet slept with Tina, unless I was sure that Tina would be ok with that. Buy boy, then Tina shocked me with her boldness…Love that. I also loved the bikini exchange…Tina in the bikini, now that’s a real treat. Just like your posts for us. Thanks, looking forward to you posting as quickly as your fingers can type.
Ally, I don’t complain about missing the L Wing because I don’t want to sound ungrateful for all the other wonderful stories you share with us. But for the record I miss the L Wing and Love & Pride quite a bit. Thanks for sharing!
I love the confidence that Tina has in this story. She is challenging Bette with her mind & body. Doesn’t get much better than that. Okay, Ally. Bring on the lei’s. LOL!
can’t wait for the next chapter! awesome. i miss the l wing as well. look forward to your next post.
Ummmm…..can’t really type anything b/c my hands are busy picking my tongue up off the floor…..Tina/Bette….BIKINIS :) PPS!
Oh abt other stories, I do love them all but I’m not pestering you to update them mainly because I’m so desperate for more of this one. Like TOTALLY DESPERATE. So it’s safe to say that I feel utterly conflicted, I want them all but I know you can’t be expected to spend 24-7 writing for us and hence have to choose wisely. Let’s just say, my desperate side won. So, more soon yeah, pretty please…
Oh my god! Thank you thank you thank you!! MORE please…
Although I love and read all your stories, I think this one is the best.Bring on Tina in a black bikini, she looked hot in her bikini on the show.
Hi Ally – Can’t wait for the Hawaii rendezvous – bring on the heat. Thanks for the update and keep them coming!!!