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Southern Comforts—Ch. 1
”Sister have you lost your mind” Tina scolded
”Oh Tina!! I have such wonderful news!! Thomas Marvin asked me to marry him and I said yes!!” Mary happily exclaimed clapping and showing off the ring that was freshly put on her finger.
Feeling jealous but unable to be happy for her sister Tina snapped back “Thomas Marvin. Hahaha. He doesn’t even have money sister. You will live poor and wretched and bare children that you can’t feed. Congratulations” Tina mocked and felt Mary’s hand grab her arm
”I have you know Tina that Thomas took over his father’s construction business and will be building us a house and I love him and he loves me. At least I’m not pining over a man that doesn’t want me” Mary retaliated causing Tina’s anger to boil but instead of hurling out insults she took her hand and slapped Mary across the face before storming through the doors of the main house.
Mary stood there stunned holding her cheek where Tina’s hand had imprinted itself. She cried before feeling a hand touch her shoulder.
”Excuse me but are you alright?”
Mary turned to look at the brunette standing next to her and was taken aback by the tailored suit the woman was wearing. Nothing like the dresses and petty coats every Southern woman wore.
”Yes. That was my evil sister Tina. She couldn’t handle the fact that I’m getting married and she will be an old maid because the man she wants is marrying someone else. To hell with her!” Mary angrily exclaimed as the woman helped her through the doors and spotted Tina at the top of the winding staircase talking to a man. She turned her attention back to Mary.
”I’m sorry but my name is Mary Kennard. And you are?”
”I’m Bette Porter. I’m from Pennsylvania”
Mary quickly jerked her arm away from Bette
”You are a Yankee. How did you get here? And who invited you?”
Bette chuckled and smoothed out her coat.
”I have business with your father” Bette answered and turned when she heard crying at the top of the stairs and saw Tina draped over the rail with her head laying on her arm. She took a step towards the stairs and stopped when she heard Mary speak
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Alicia says
More please, love it so far! I love when they don’t get along at first lol
SassyGran says
More please and soon!
The New Year looks interesting in this setting.
Sharon says
More More we want more!
BK says
waiting impatiently for Bette to tell Tina “frankly my dear, I don’t give a damn.” GWTW is one of my favorites. Thank you for this twist!
DumplinT says
Whoooo jrl !! What an intriguing story line!! Bette gonna have her hands full with spoiled little southern belle!!
Bibi28 says
I love this beginning!
Tina a little spoilt rich bitch and Bette as the perfect gentlelady. And Bette is certainly not afraid to speak her mind. I think we can expext a lot of fire between them!
Look forward to the next chapter!
DumplinT says
Bette gon tan Miss Tinas’ smart ass butt