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Stained – Chapter 16
After only seconds Tina was already missing the warmth of Bette’s hand, but before the door was even opened, Steve distracted her by starting a lecture.
"Tina, Tina, Tina… You’re late again and I don’t mean in the off-spring producing kind of way, because that would require you to be having sex and we all know you’re not getting any. And hello Eric!"
By the time the door was in fact opened and Steve could actually see who were at the door, the lecture and joke-at-the-expense-of-Eric in one – Steve never passed on an opportunity to make one – was already completed and the joker was shooting his ‘What are you gonna do about it?’ look in the general direction of Eric.
That’s when Steve noticed something peculiar.
"Hey, you’re not Eric…"
Tina rolled her eyes at him.
"That is very perceptive of you, Steve. Now can we…"
But Steve imperturbably continued.
"In fact, you don’t even look like Eric. You do, however, look a lot like…"
This time Tina was determined to shut him up.
"Let me introduce you. Steve, this is Bette. Bette, Steve."
Bette and Steve shook hands and the latter dryly stated:
"Yes, that would indeed explain the lack of similarities with a certain someone I’m delighted to learn has been replaced."
Tina thought it better to let the little jab at Eric slide. Steve had never made it a secret he didn’t like Eric. Tessa, Idzy and Kate shared his sentiments, but had always been a little more discreet about it. Their dislike of her ex-boyfriend had been a disappointment to Tina, because she valued the opinions of her friends and very much wanted their approval of the person she was with. That’s why Tina was a little nervous about introducing Bette to her friends. It was only their first date – and one could argue whether this actually qualified as a date – but Tina was already more involved emotionally than… well, than she ever had been with Eric, quite frankly. The fact that her friends usually gave her date a hard time didn’t help ease Tina’s nerves either.
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(58 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Oopsy, forgot to say that I, shameless as I am, stole the word ‘bi-curious’ from JustLoveB+T. Sorry, Captain Mom! ;-)
I think it’s going to be fun when all their friends get together. I like the way Bette shut them al up.
Oh wow! That chapter had me grinning so hard my face ached. Just wonderful writing. I love Tina’s crazy friends and the way that Bette dealt with them was classic. Just fantastic. I will return to this chapter the next time I am feeling down so I can be cheered up. Thanks for sharing you story with us.
i loved every word of this, thanks for posting
This chapter was like a ray of sunshine all bright and shiny. I just love your writing and I too could not stop smiling while reading this chapter. Please give us another chapter soon.
haaaaa good times noc-t
very sweet and I am enjoying this very much
“Oh no, you’re not getting off that easy! I want a birthday kiss.”…Well, now we know which of Tina’s friends has balls of steel!…now, back to the story…
So how did Tina finally get her jaw from slamming against the floor over and over? Maybe Tina needs the doctor to help her out (Dr. Noturnal). I can just see Steve and Alice together hooting and hollering with each other. Nocturnal you had me rolling on the floor with this chapter. This story is really brighten my spirits. Post when you can like in a few hours.
OMG I had forgotten about the sheep. Too bad no one got Kate a strap-on to use with the sheep. =O
Glad you posted nocturnal!
only three words.UR STory Rocks.
so cute! i can’t wait to read more! please post soon!!! =)
good story lil’sis… keep going!!!! :D
Hey Nocturnal! I’m new at commenting but not as reading your posts, and I’ve loved this story from the beginning! Well done, and please come back soon, we miss you! Okay, I can’t believe I am the first one to say this but: Am I right to presume that you might have been inspired by a scene of the movie “Notting Hill” with Hugh Grant and Julia Roberts? I loved that scene in the movie but I adore even more this chapter and the humor you put into it. BRAVO and THANK YOU!!!
great update..i wish Bette Porter came to my b-day party, or maybe i can get her cardboard figure and have fun like alice
hehehehehe.. that was one funny chapter Nocturnal.. can’t wait to read the next chapter.BTW you think U seen some funny porn titles, I worked in a video shop once, some of the one’s I have seen =)
Oh man this is so freaking funny, I love about the sheep. Bette is awesome and so charming to Tina’s friends. Ok post soon please, thanks!
it was a funny chapter, all Tina’s friends was atonish because of Bette! and Bette with her amazing charmed keep them quiet! take care
Hey Noc – my face hurts after laughing so much because of yours hilarious author’s note and a post that is freaking funny, great and sweet :o))) Tinas friends are totally weird and that is the best kind LOL and what a great way for Bette to make them shut up!!! I think that Kate, Steve and Alice will totally hit it of together :o)) More please…..
LOL… I didn’t make up that word Nocty, but don’t worry about it, I’m all for sharing :) And THANK YOU for sharing this chapter with us… Can’t wait for T to meet Alice… Oh and Kate and Alice LMFAOOOOOO Hopw you update soon!
yup, this is a keeper, first time read and it’s going on my favourites list…love the humour and the humourous Bette…more…
Believe it or not, I gave that same sheep to my brother for his 40th birthday. I love Bette. She is so cool. This story is great.
please post again soon….