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Stained – Chapter 3
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They were slowly making their way back to The Centre again. There was a comfortable silence between them. David felt his eyes slowly closing. Bette saw it and asked him: "Are big boys allowed to be carried around?"
"Yes, but only today." David mumbled.
Bette lifted him up and the moment his head hit her shoulder, he was sound asleep. Tina just melted when she saw Bette carrying David. It was so sweet.
Suddenly, they were at The Centre again. Tina had wished the building would have magically been placed 20 miles further away. She didn’t want this afternoon to end.
"Well, here we are. Let me take David from you." Tina said softly, trying not to wake the sleeping boy.
But when she lifted him from Bette’s arm, he woke up anyway. Sleepily he said: "Bette?"
"Yeah?" she replied softly.
"I’m sorry about your jacket."
Bette smiled and said: "Don’t worry about it, sweetie. I liked meeting you a lot better than I ever liked my jacket."
"Really?"
"Of course, silly!" Bette chuckled.
"Will you come see me again sometime?" David asked her, his voice full of hope.
"Sure thing."
"Maybe next Saturday?
"I’m kind of busy next Saturday. Could I come by the Saturday after that?"
"Can she, Tina?" David mumbled, but his eyes had closed again and he didn’t even hear Tina’s response.
"Of course she can. We would be happy to have her over." Tina knew Bette was way too busy to come see David or her again, but she loved that Bette had pretended, instead of throwing the invitation right back in David’s face. She had been very surprised Bette had had the time to spend this afternoon with them and she knew it would be unfair to expect even more of her. That didn’t make the sense of loss any less, though.
Just when Tina had build up the courage to tell Bette that she, too, really wanted her to come by again, the door to The Centre flew open and a handsome man walked over to Tina, gave her kiss on the lips and said: "Hey babe, I was wondering what was keeping you."
TBC…
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You did a great job being a fanfic writer. Please keep going.
Nooo, not that scum bag Eric!! At this point, I’m wondering if Tina is still straight. She had some mighty nice thoughts of Bette running through her head. I love that Bette is a huge actress, it’s very exciting. Very nice job. Can’t wait to see where you take this.
Love your story! En gefeliciteerd met je mondeling, een 10.. wow! :-)
LOVE this story!!!
ha well i was thinkin that friday would b good but after the man showed up…mayb not so much!
Hey you, I’ll give you a 10 for this story, but I guess that won’t get you into med school, will it? I really love it. More and longer please! Oh, and I think Bette loves competition and would love to kick this guy’s ass.
Let the drama begin.
WHat a great story! And you are definitely an excellent story teller. Please post again soon!
I typically don’t go for the non-traditional B&T beginnings, but I’m diggin’ this one and looking forward to reading more!
I like this beginning,it a wee bit different,why did the b/f show up. that sucks thanks so much for showing that actress are humans also. thanks
wonderful, bette is so cute with the boy…so tina has a b/f…not for long i hope
each chapter is better! and this is the 3 chapter i can’t imagine the next one! Bette is so sweet and she already fall for Tina! i can’t wait for the next and congrats for your 10!
Bette and Tina are cute, the way Bette with David is sweet. Now stupid boyfriend interrupt the good moment with Bette and Tina. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Wow! Well…I have to admit your comments made me blush…and then let out a giggle! Thank you for your wonderful and sweet compliments. Now, can I say that I am totally hooked on this story already?! I love your Bette…and I’m thinking that Tina isn’t as straight as the man who kissed her thinks she is!! Looking forward to reading what happens next! Thanks!
oh i’m in dreaming, keep it going
Fanfic is being taken over by the Brits and the Dutch. Pretty cool, eh?
Post soon.
I was floating on a cloud when that kiss popped the air out of me, just like a deflating a balloon. Thanks for letting us see the sweet side of Bette. Please come back with more!
Damn why does the guy always come in a screw up everything. I love Bette’s way of thinking. It was funny about the housebroken comment. I guess that is why I have a pet cat. They don’t usually need to be housebroken. This is such a cute story. At least you are willing to write, I have trouble even reading (and I even speak and read in English).
This is really good…please post soon and congrats on your exam…
Do’h! Of COURSE her boyfriend had to show up! DAMN! This is a great beginning, please post again soon! Congrats on you exam!
No need to be shy in Fanfiction Land. Some people here wouldn’t believe I’m quite shy as well. I’m glad a 10 is good because when you said that, at first I thought, “Uh, isn’t that a big fat fail?” Yeah, I’m used to a 100-point system. =p Bette’s walls are starting to melt like ice cream I bet. Let’s see if she feels a touch of jealousy when she sees this dude kiss Tina.