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Stained – Chapter 3
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"Yeah, Dr. Phil tried to tell me that once, too. He was only trying to get into my pants, though."
And with that Bette guided them back to safer places, lightening the mood again. Humor had always worked as a shield for her and once again, it wasn’t failing her.
Tina smiled at Bette’s comment. She knew what Bette was doing and although a part of her really wanted to get to know the Bette behind the mask, another part of her was glad Bette had steered them back to lighter conversation, because even though she was a lot more in touch with her feelings than Bette, she had never felt such a connection to anyone. Had Bette felt it too or was it just how she was with everybody?
‘Don’t be silly!’ Tina told herself. Of course the feeling wasn’t mutual! Bette was after all an actress. She could manipulate her own feeling and probably also those of the people around her. She could elicit the exact response she wanted out of you. The woman had an infinite amount of adoring fans and Tina was just becoming one of them.
"Well, I have always suspected Dr. Phil of being a player!"
"Yes, very smooth with the ladies, that one. I think it’s the moustache that does it." Bette chuckled.
"Either the moustache or the balding thing." Tina laughed.
They had been walking for quite some time now and David, who had tirelessly been running in front of them, was beginning to show signs of fatigue. He was still getting used to going without his nap and couldn’t suppress the big yawn he felt coming.
"Looks like someone missed their nap." Bette commented.
"I don’t need a nap," David stated stubbornly. "I’m a big boy. I’m already this old." he said, while proudly holding up two fingers of one hand and three of the other.
"My, my, aren’t we feisty today." Bette smiled.
David let out another massive yawn. Being a big boy was certainly hard work. He was no longer running ahead and while yawning again, grabbed Bette’s hand.
Tina was once again amazed at how much the usually shy boy seemed to like and trust Bette.
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You did a great job being a fanfic writer. Please keep going.
Nooo, not that scum bag Eric!! At this point, I’m wondering if Tina is still straight. She had some mighty nice thoughts of Bette running through her head. I love that Bette is a huge actress, it’s very exciting. Very nice job. Can’t wait to see where you take this.
Love your story! En gefeliciteerd met je mondeling, een 10.. wow! :-)
LOVE this story!!!
ha well i was thinkin that friday would b good but after the man showed up…mayb not so much!
Hey you, I’ll give you a 10 for this story, but I guess that won’t get you into med school, will it? I really love it. More and longer please! Oh, and I think Bette loves competition and would love to kick this guy’s ass.
Let the drama begin.
WHat a great story! And you are definitely an excellent story teller. Please post again soon!
I typically don’t go for the non-traditional B&T beginnings, but I’m diggin’ this one and looking forward to reading more!
I like this beginning,it a wee bit different,why did the b/f show up. that sucks thanks so much for showing that actress are humans also. thanks
wonderful, bette is so cute with the boy…so tina has a b/f…not for long i hope
each chapter is better! and this is the 3 chapter i can’t imagine the next one! Bette is so sweet and she already fall for Tina! i can’t wait for the next and congrats for your 10!
Bette and Tina are cute, the way Bette with David is sweet. Now stupid boyfriend interrupt the good moment with Bette and Tina. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Wow! Well…I have to admit your comments made me blush…and then let out a giggle! Thank you for your wonderful and sweet compliments. Now, can I say that I am totally hooked on this story already?! I love your Bette…and I’m thinking that Tina isn’t as straight as the man who kissed her thinks she is!! Looking forward to reading what happens next! Thanks!
oh i’m in dreaming, keep it going
Fanfic is being taken over by the Brits and the Dutch. Pretty cool, eh?
Post soon.
I was floating on a cloud when that kiss popped the air out of me, just like a deflating a balloon. Thanks for letting us see the sweet side of Bette. Please come back with more!
Damn why does the guy always come in a screw up everything. I love Bette’s way of thinking. It was funny about the housebroken comment. I guess that is why I have a pet cat. They don’t usually need to be housebroken. This is such a cute story. At least you are willing to write, I have trouble even reading (and I even speak and read in English).
This is really good…please post soon and congrats on your exam…
Do’h! Of COURSE her boyfriend had to show up! DAMN! This is a great beginning, please post again soon! Congrats on you exam!
No need to be shy in Fanfiction Land. Some people here wouldn’t believe I’m quite shy as well. I’m glad a 10 is good because when you said that, at first I thought, “Uh, isn’t that a big fat fail?” Yeah, I’m used to a 100-point system. =p Bette’s walls are starting to melt like ice cream I bet. Let’s see if she feels a touch of jealousy when she sees this dude kiss Tina.