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Stained – Chapter 3
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"Next please." Bette heard the ice cream man say.
"Tina, do you want something too?" Bette asked Tina.
"Ehh, I… ehhh…sure." Tina was repeating herself. ‘God, I better practice a new sentence; you can only use ‘ehh, I… ehhh…sure’ so many times.’
"We’ll have three cones, two with peach and one with…? Bette looked at Tina again.
"Chocolate, please." Tina told the ice cream man, avoiding Bette’s eyes. She could deal with ice cream men. Bette, however, was a completely different matter.
David was ecstatic. This had certainly turned out nicely. Not only did he get to make a new friend, he had also eaten more than one ice cream today… and his mom never let him eat more than one ice cream. He might not have been able to finish his first, but he had eaten part of it. Maybe he should spill this ice cream all over someone, too.
As David contemplated spilling his ice cream accidentally on purpose all over Tina, Bette put on her sunglasses again.
"I apologize for the sunglasses. I know it’s not very polite, but I feel rather exposed without them."
Bette really hoped Tina wouldn’t make her explain. She loved her job, she really did, but she could do without the whole fame thing. She hated getting stared at and she detested having her private life out in the open.
"It must really suck to be followed around and stared at all the time." Tina said softly.
"Yes, it kinda does, actually." Bette answered, grateful that Tina didn’t seem to judge her for it. She wanted Tina to understand.
"Most people just think I’m ungrateful. I do feel a little guilty about not wanting all the attention. I mean, there are so many people out there who dream of making it in Hollywood. Truth is, it is overrated. It’s all fake. Everybody just wants a piece of you. A piece of what you represent, actually. They don’t give a shit about who you really are. The only reason I put up with it is that I love acting. It is a tough business and fame means work. But in the end, I didn’t sign up to be public property, I just want to act. And I wish people would just let me do that without digging into my private life."
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You did a great job being a fanfic writer. Please keep going.
Nooo, not that scum bag Eric!! At this point, I’m wondering if Tina is still straight. She had some mighty nice thoughts of Bette running through her head. I love that Bette is a huge actress, it’s very exciting. Very nice job. Can’t wait to see where you take this.
Love your story! En gefeliciteerd met je mondeling, een 10.. wow! :-)
LOVE this story!!!
ha well i was thinkin that friday would b good but after the man showed up…mayb not so much!
Hey you, I’ll give you a 10 for this story, but I guess that won’t get you into med school, will it? I really love it. More and longer please! Oh, and I think Bette loves competition and would love to kick this guy’s ass.
Let the drama begin.
WHat a great story! And you are definitely an excellent story teller. Please post again soon!
I typically don’t go for the non-traditional B&T beginnings, but I’m diggin’ this one and looking forward to reading more!
I like this beginning,it a wee bit different,why did the b/f show up. that sucks thanks so much for showing that actress are humans also. thanks
wonderful, bette is so cute with the boy…so tina has a b/f…not for long i hope
each chapter is better! and this is the 3 chapter i can’t imagine the next one! Bette is so sweet and she already fall for Tina! i can’t wait for the next and congrats for your 10!
Bette and Tina are cute, the way Bette with David is sweet. Now stupid boyfriend interrupt the good moment with Bette and Tina. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Wow! Well…I have to admit your comments made me blush…and then let out a giggle! Thank you for your wonderful and sweet compliments. Now, can I say that I am totally hooked on this story already?! I love your Bette…and I’m thinking that Tina isn’t as straight as the man who kissed her thinks she is!! Looking forward to reading what happens next! Thanks!
oh i’m in dreaming, keep it going
Fanfic is being taken over by the Brits and the Dutch. Pretty cool, eh?
Post soon.
I was floating on a cloud when that kiss popped the air out of me, just like a deflating a balloon. Thanks for letting us see the sweet side of Bette. Please come back with more!
Damn why does the guy always come in a screw up everything. I love Bette’s way of thinking. It was funny about the housebroken comment. I guess that is why I have a pet cat. They don’t usually need to be housebroken. This is such a cute story. At least you are willing to write, I have trouble even reading (and I even speak and read in English).
This is really good…please post soon and congrats on your exam…
Do’h! Of COURSE her boyfriend had to show up! DAMN! This is a great beginning, please post again soon! Congrats on you exam!
No need to be shy in Fanfiction Land. Some people here wouldn’t believe I’m quite shy as well. I’m glad a 10 is good because when you said that, at first I thought, “Uh, isn’t that a big fat fail?” Yeah, I’m used to a 100-point system. =p Bette’s walls are starting to melt like ice cream I bet. Let’s see if she feels a touch of jealousy when she sees this dude kiss Tina.