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    Subtleties * Chapter 13

    Story written on December 30, 2010 by scaf.
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    Bette turned to face the young artist and smiled, “You’re a hit.”

    "It’s almost nine."

    "I am so sorry, Ms. Kennard.  There was an accident and I can’t seem to get around the traffic.  The snow we had isn’t helping either."

    "Maybe I should just get out and walk."

    "But we’re over 15 blocks away and you’re not necessarily prepared for that kind of hike in that dress."

    Tina furrowed her brow and opened her door, "I’ve hiked in more perilous conditions, I assure you."

    "Please, Ms. Kennard.  Ms Porter will kill me if she finds out you had to walk that far."

    Tina looked at the young man.  As angry and as frustrated as she was, she still felt sorry for the boy, for essentially that’s what he was.  He couldn’t be more than twenty–one.

    "What do you suggest, then?"  Tina groaned.

    "Give me about ten minutes to see our way through this, just until the next cross street.  Then we should be golden."

    Tina nodded and threw up her hands, garnering a smile from the young driver.  She pulled her light jacket tighter around her formfitting dress.  A dress she had been excited to buy.  I dress that left very little to the imagination, yet somehow remained tasteful.  A dress that was undoubtedly going to remind Bette of their previous evening’s escapades. The blonde kicked off her four inch heels and sat back into the soft leather seats.  She hoped that Bette’s opening was every bit s successful as she knew it would be , but hoped even more that she would be there in time to see it.

     

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    Bette made a bee line for her desk the minute she reached her office.  As she fumbled in her bag for her blackberry, she heard a slight knock at the door,

    "Thank God, Tina.  I was so worried.  Where have you…"  Bette’s question hung, half asked, in the dimness of the room.  Jodie’s form was backlit from the lighting in the hall.  Bette’s breath caught in her throat. 

    "What are you doing here?  What do you want?"  The harshness of tone did not escape her hearing impaired ex.  Jodie interpreted the change in mood from the change in Bette’s expression.   A look of relief had turned swiftly into one of anger and disgust.

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    3. Tina is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!. That was the most effective dismissal I’ve ever read about or seen, and I’ve actually seen a few in my time. That was priceless. However, I don’t think we have seen the last of jodi but, if she has any sense at all, she will walk away and stay away. Tina will tear her apart if she tries anything else. This was a great chapter, loved it. Thanks for posting.

    5. This is one of my favorite stories of all time. Great characterizations with open, powerful personalities who definitely know who they are. No wishy washy attitudes allowed here. :-)

    8. That was absolutely brilliant. I am glad that Tina took being late in stride, and her timing was perfect, just like herself. The kiss to Bette in front of Jodie was priceless. Yes they have admitted their love for one another.

    9. and jodie has left the building… loved that… so glad tina didn’t take that any other way… when jodie siad bye and tina said bye… i was hoping she would of added… “(Don’t) let the door hit you in your ass on your way out”… love this story… pps

    13. YES go Tina way to lay claim to your woman. This Jody is so full of herself I love the way you described the scene. I can see Bette’s expression so well awesome writing thanks for sharing

    17. This was such an excellent update and of course the ending was just awesome. Love this storyu Scaf! Happy New Year and thank you for giving us wonderful stories like these!

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