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    Subtleties * Chapter 13

    Story written on December 30, 2010 by scaf.
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    Bette turned to face the young artist and smiled, “You’re a hit.”

    "How are you?"

    "None of your business."

    Jodie stepped into her office and within inches of the furious brunette.

    "Please go."  Bette begged.  She didn’t have the strength for another fight.  Another argument she’d never win because Jodie was always right.  Bette’s thoughts went to Tina.  What if she came in?  Wheat would she think?

    "You look amazing," Jodie signed.

    Bette’s face went blank; after a short pause, she couldn’t help but burst out in incredulous laughter, "You’ve got be fucking kidding me."

    "What?"

    "What?!  Frankly, I’m…I’m fucking flabbergasted.  That you can walk in here and have the balls to tell me I look good after all the years you treated me like shit.  The affairs….And now this fucking tome – this pile of shit that you publish.  Bev?  Really?  You don’t even have enough fucking imagination to alter your names effectively.  Or was the humiliation on purpose?  You just had to have the last word – so what if it was all a fucking lie.  You disgust me."  Bette spoke as she signed, her hands slapping out a furious rhythm. 

    Jodie stared, nonplussed; her arrogance more apparent with every tic of the clock.

    "I miss you."

    "Fuck you," the gallery owner felt the tears sting her eyes.  No…no…no.  Not now. Not in front of her.

     

    "I know I made some mistakes.  Maybe I let you down.  But you were claustrophobic.  You wanted too much."

    "Too much?  Monogamy?  Respect?  Affection?  You know what’s too much?  The fact that I took all of your shit for as long as I did.  I’m not that woman anymore.  I’m not trying to punish myself.  For the first time in my life I am happy.  And it feels good."

    Jodie watched the brunette stand tall before her.  Bette was strong and angry and it was obvious there was no winning her back,

    "Bette…" the artist reached out and grabbed Bette’s arm as the gallery owner attempted to walk away.  The minute Jodie’s hands were upon her, the gallery owner wrenched her arm away with as much force as she could muster.

    "Don’t you dare touch me."

     

    ***

     

    Tina scrambled into the gallery nearly toppling over James in the process,

    "Oof," James groaned as she came around the corner.

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    3. Tina is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!. That was the most effective dismissal I’ve ever read about or seen, and I’ve actually seen a few in my time. That was priceless. However, I don’t think we have seen the last of jodi but, if she has any sense at all, she will walk away and stay away. Tina will tear her apart if she tries anything else. This was a great chapter, loved it. Thanks for posting.

    5. This is one of my favorite stories of all time. Great characterizations with open, powerful personalities who definitely know who they are. No wishy washy attitudes allowed here. :-)

    8. That was absolutely brilliant. I am glad that Tina took being late in stride, and her timing was perfect, just like herself. The kiss to Bette in front of Jodie was priceless. Yes they have admitted their love for one another.

    9. and jodie has left the building… loved that… so glad tina didn’t take that any other way… when jodie siad bye and tina said bye… i was hoping she would of added… “(Don’t) let the door hit you in your ass on your way out”… love this story… pps

    13. YES go Tina way to lay claim to your woman. This Jody is so full of herself I love the way you described the scene. I can see Bette’s expression so well awesome writing thanks for sharing

    17. This was such an excellent update and of course the ending was just awesome. Love this storyu Scaf! Happy New Year and thank you for giving us wonderful stories like these!

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