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Subtleties * Chapter 13
"Oh my God, I’m sorry," Tina stammered. "I’m not late am I? I mean, I know I’m late but the driver…" Tina looked up at James and smiled "I sound like a crazy person, don’t I?"
"Sort of, yeah" he laughed.
Tina looked over his should and out at the crowd, "Wow"
"Yeah, the young man nodded, "Tonight has been unbelievable. Bette and Tricia will be the talk of the town. Porter really outdid herself."
"She’s amazing," Tina agreed.
"I’m sorry; you’re Ms. Kennard, right? We met a while back when you came by to visit Bette."
"Tina, please. And I’m assuming your James?"
"Correct." The pair shook hands. "So are you the reason my boss has been walking around with a goofy smile?"
Tina laughed, "I might have something to do with that."
"Well whatever you did last night, keep doing. Usually she’s a nervous wreck getting ready for these things but she was the calmest I had ever seen her"
Tina blushed.
"She didn’t even yell. Not once. You have no idea…"
"Um, James?"
"Yeah?" James was finding it difficult not to stare at the blonde and her dress.
"Do you happen to know where Bette is?"
"Oh, right. Ha ha. Sorry. She was out on the floor earlier but I think I saw her head back toward her office. You know where it is, right?"
"Yes, thank you." Tina flashed a grateful smile and headed towards the back. As she passed through the crowd, she received more than her fair share of enamored and lustful gazes; however there was only one woman that mattered at the moment.
Rounding the corner, she heard what sounded at first like a one sided argument; as Bette’s office came into view, she saw that the brunette wasn’t alone at all.
She could see from where she stood that Bette was visibly upset. And as the argument continued, Tina instantly knew who the other woman was. The blonde was furious. Why on earth with Jodie do something like this on tonight of all nights? Because it was a way for her to maintain the upper hand over Bette. Like fuck she will, Tina swore under her breath. Not tonight.
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"Bette, I’m so sorry I’m late."
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(57 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
Awww. the ending was brilliant. Lets hope jodie doesnt come back for more because Tibette will be ready to rumble.
Thank you for this treat. I was just thinking of this story and, bam!, a new chapter comes up :)
Tina is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!. That was the most effective dismissal I’ve ever read about or seen, and I’ve actually seen a few in my time. That was priceless. However, I don’t think we have seen the last of jodi but, if she has any sense at all, she will walk away and stay away. Tina will tear her apart if she tries anything else. This was a great chapter, loved it. Thanks for posting.
Great story! Tina did the perfect take-down.
This is one of my favorite stories of all time. Great characterizations with open, powerful personalities who definitely know who they are. No wishy washy attitudes allowed here. :-)
WAY TO GO TINA!!!!! Great Chapter!!! Love this story!!! Thank you Happy New Year!!! PPS
you go, Tina…jodi better be gone for good…thanks for another great chapter
That was absolutely brilliant. I am glad that Tina took being late in stride, and her timing was perfect, just like herself. The kiss to Bette in front of Jodie was priceless. Yes they have admitted their love for one another.
and jodie has left the building… loved that… so glad tina didn’t take that any other way… when jodie siad bye and tina said bye… i was hoping she would of added… “(Don’t) let the door hit you in your ass on your way out”… love this story… pps
Amazing just amazing. Thank you scaf. Have a happy and safe new year:)
This Tina you have created seems like the perfect girl. Address and telephone number please!
Thanks for the wonderful update. I love this story!
YES go Tina way to lay claim to your woman. This Jody is so full of herself I love the way you described the scene. I can see Bette’s expression so well awesome writing thanks for sharing
That was great and love B&T together and like the way Tina kick jodi ass lol. Please post more, thanks! Happy New Year my friend!
Bravo Tina!Great update.Happy New Year.
Perfect handling of Jodie. Great chapter. Thanks.
This was such an excellent update and of course the ending was just awesome. Love this storyu Scaf! Happy New Year and thank you for giving us wonderful stories like these!