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Summer Vacation. Chapter 13
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It was the elephant … in the room, or park or whatever, the monster subject they both seemed to avoid like the plague. Even yesterday, thought Tina … when she had gone to visit her, they’d talked around the subject discussing virtually anything else … yet all Tina could do was stare at her as she talked, marvelling at how much she seemed like Bette, now that she knew …
Their skin tone was different, obviously. Where Bette’s was caramel Lottie’s was fair and freckled in places like around her nose and hairline, but her hair was dark like chocolate and her curls fell like waves around her face in a that similar way to Bette’s. It was more than a look though, it was the same deep rolling chuckle of delight, the way her eyes danced and became animated as she spoke, the way her smile seemed to control her eyes and nose, bringing her expression together and drawing the viewer in. Tina paused, finding herself thinking suddenly of Bette’s mother, ‘their’ mother and imagining how incredibly beautiful she must have been.
“ … don’t you think …?” asked Lottie, not aware that Tina hadn’t heard a word she’d said,
“Huh?” said Tina,
“Alice is doing better … without Lisa … don’t you think?” Lottie repeated,
“Oh yeah …” agreed Tina, caught off guard, realising that under normal circumstances she would never have committed herself to giving such an open opinion like that,
Lottie smiled, still getting used to the fact that she cared about these people, and Alice … their friends … so much,
“Lottie …” said Tina as she circled to face her, her tone turning serious, “yesterday you said you would talk to Bette … so how about if she came by the hotel later?” Tina asked
Lottie nodded slowly,
“She’ll bring dinner …” Tina added, suddenly uncomfortable by Lottie’s silence,
Tina hung on for a better response, in the absence of further conversation they both ate some more of their lunch …
“Is she mad …? Lottie asked quietly, not sure if she really wanted an answer,
“No …” replied Tina quickly, “No … no way, no she’s not mad,” she added, placing a gentle touch on Lottie’s arm to quell her fears, “Lottie … she’s shocked … this is a big shock” continued Tina, “but she’s not mad … certainly not at you …”
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What does he need to talk to Bette. I’m guessing that is has to do with Lottie and Bette and her inheiring some thing from her Mother. If its picture her Mother Painted or just pictures of Bette when she was a baby with her Mother Just post soon. Waiting is hard thanks
This is so good. Very detailed and interesting. I like the way you go back and forth developing all the sub stories. PPS.
Damn this is a good story. I wonder if Melvin knew? That would be some shit! Post soon!
Wow, this is getting very interesting. So Bette’s and Lottie’s mom was an artist. I wonder what is in store for both Bette and Lottie in the things left them by their mother.
Heat, a bit of humor, intrigue… this chapter had a bit of everything. Delightful story, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks!
Man that was alot…but I want more…they have alot to talk about.
OMG you can’t stop there. This story is so Good. PPS
Hey there I am so into this more soon huh? haven’t been driven in the past week..had a virus knock me down…remember, more soon
Please further write fast. I can hardly wait as the conversation goes on between Bette and Lotti. Around whether Bette flies to the lawyer to Virginia. And what has to say to it. PPS
Ok, this was nice and long, but I still need answers. Write faster, please (but no pressure).
This is such a touching story. Can’t wait for the following up. Thanks.
A wonderful story, you know just when to cut it off w/out giving us too much angst…I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter….
im sooo glad you posted tonite! sweet jesus she told bette… getting really good MORE-MORE!anytime for a nc-17..lol p.p.s.
caught up on the story….and love it
God, this story is so intense, it’s kind of draining… I mean that in the best way possible… Incredible. Thank you.
Oooo this story keeps getting better and better, really great post…and you’re right, I’m not complaining about the NC-17’s LOL!! Tina should know Alice by now, so I’m a bit surprised she couldn’t fool her – it should have been Bette and Lottie telling Alice about this, but apart from that I really loves this story. So post more and very soon please :o))
Oh forgot to say….what is Jo up to, who was that girl she was dancing with and why didn’t she call sweet Lottie back??? I hope they can become a couple soon, they’re sweet and good together.
This is so good and cant wait to see more!