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Summer Vacation. Chapter 13
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Lottie let that information sink in, feeling a stillness wash over her at the thought that Bette wasn’t angry, that perhaps … just perhaps … she might be willing to listen,
“Good …” spoke Lottie finally, “because I really didn’t want to upset her or make her mad …” she added, “that’s not what I want …”
“What do you want?” asked Tina, interested,
Lottie shrugged, “I don’t know …” she answered honestly, “I guess I never thought through past the ‘telling her’ part,” she paused, “getting through that bit was hard enough …”
Tina put down her sandwich and moved to slip one arm around Lottie’s shoulder, remembering how she’d fainted, how ill she had looked the last couple of days compared to how much better she looked now, it was a move meant to comfort her,
“Sorry …” muttered Lottie, pulling away, “please … don’t …” she mumbled, shaking her head as Tina drew her arm back in, casting her a questioning glance,
The expression Tina saw then scared her, she suddenly felt the enormity of their situation and felt afraid for Bette, afraid for their conversation, afraid for the facts Bette might learn,
“Just talk to her …” said Tina, feeling exasperated “now that she knows … she deserves to know the truth …”
Lottie glanced at her, knowing that Bette still held the folder and the documents it contained. She wondered if they had looked through it, and so if Tina was really baiting her, she felt her anxiety building … the coming afternoon would either drag into days or be over in what felt like seconds … and then Bette would be there, face to face with her, wanting answers,
“I left my folder at your house …” Lottie added, mumbling and refusing to meet Tina’s stare “can you ask Bette to bring it …”
As the evening traffic in town began to finally dissipate Bette pulled up alongside the entrance to The Renaissance hotel, a big bag of take-out from her favourite chinese restaurant sat balanced in the foot well of the passenger seat. She stepped out gracefully, walking around the car to retrieve the bag of food before handing her keys to the valet, along with a look which ensured he would take excellent care of her baby …
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What does he need to talk to Bette. I’m guessing that is has to do with Lottie and Bette and her inheiring some thing from her Mother. If its picture her Mother Painted or just pictures of Bette when she was a baby with her Mother Just post soon. Waiting is hard thanks
This is so good. Very detailed and interesting. I like the way you go back and forth developing all the sub stories. PPS.
Damn this is a good story. I wonder if Melvin knew? That would be some shit! Post soon!
Wow, this is getting very interesting. So Bette’s and Lottie’s mom was an artist. I wonder what is in store for both Bette and Lottie in the things left them by their mother.
Heat, a bit of humor, intrigue… this chapter had a bit of everything. Delightful story, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks!
Man that was alot…but I want more…they have alot to talk about.
OMG you can’t stop there. This story is so Good. PPS
Hey there I am so into this more soon huh? haven’t been driven in the past week..had a virus knock me down…remember, more soon
Please further write fast. I can hardly wait as the conversation goes on between Bette and Lotti. Around whether Bette flies to the lawyer to Virginia. And what has to say to it. PPS
Ok, this was nice and long, but I still need answers. Write faster, please (but no pressure).
This is such a touching story. Can’t wait for the following up. Thanks.
A wonderful story, you know just when to cut it off w/out giving us too much angst…I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter….
im sooo glad you posted tonite! sweet jesus she told bette… getting really good MORE-MORE!anytime for a nc-17..lol p.p.s.
caught up on the story….and love it
God, this story is so intense, it’s kind of draining… I mean that in the best way possible… Incredible. Thank you.
Oooo this story keeps getting better and better, really great post…and you’re right, I’m not complaining about the NC-17’s LOL!! Tina should know Alice by now, so I’m a bit surprised she couldn’t fool her – it should have been Bette and Lottie telling Alice about this, but apart from that I really loves this story. So post more and very soon please :o))
Oh forgot to say….what is Jo up to, who was that girl she was dancing with and why didn’t she call sweet Lottie back??? I hope they can become a couple soon, they’re sweet and good together.
This is so good and cant wait to see more!