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Summer Vacation. Chapter 13
Lottie sat by the phone, knowing it would ring to warn her of Bette’s imminent arrival, the room was clean and tidy and the coffee was on. She’d gone over and over the list of things in her mind which she needed to say, then instantly … she realised they were all forgotten. She got up off the bed to draw the blinds, pausing in front of the window to take in the rush of LA, the bustle, deciding as an after thought to leave the blinds open … keeping the backdrop of the evening sky …
Bette hovered by a low table in the lobby, not quite ready to announce her arrival. She wished that Tina had been able come, knowing that in certain situations Tina’s strength would hold out where her own would falter. She knew that Tina would know the right things to say and in the right way without inadvertently upsetting Lottie, or making out like she was the one being blamed. She took a deep breath, smoothing down her suit and picking up her bag and the food before striding confidently towards the front desk …
“Hey TK … what’s up …” rushed Alice, quite obviously recovering her breath, “you rang …?”
“Hey Al,” laughed Tina, “where the hell are you?”
“Been to Yoga with Helena …” mumbled Alice as she waved goodbye to Helena across the parking lot, “she’s trying to take my mind of Lisa” added Alice in a way that suggested she would have much rather they’d gone to a strip bar,
Tina chuckled, “Well that’s what friends are for …”
“So what’s up?” asked Alice, “your message sounded urgent …”
“Oh it’s nothing …” reassured Tina, now that Bette had left she’d realised she was secretly relieved that Bette was forced into going alone, “I was just gonna go somewhere with Bette … but it’s no big deal … I’ve stayed home with Angie …” she added,
“Really?” said Alice, surprised at Tina’s willingness for Bette to have gone somewhere alone, “cos I could come over …”
“No it’s fine Al,” urged Tina, not really wanting to get into it, “it’s fine …”
Only Alice knew it wasn’t really fine, if only because Tina had stressed it was fine in one way or another at least three times …
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(35 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
What does he need to talk to Bette. I’m guessing that is has to do with Lottie and Bette and her inheiring some thing from her Mother. If its picture her Mother Painted or just pictures of Bette when she was a baby with her Mother Just post soon. Waiting is hard thanks
This is so good. Very detailed and interesting. I like the way you go back and forth developing all the sub stories. PPS.
Damn this is a good story. I wonder if Melvin knew? That would be some shit! Post soon!
Wow, this is getting very interesting. So Bette’s and Lottie’s mom was an artist. I wonder what is in store for both Bette and Lottie in the things left them by their mother.
Heat, a bit of humor, intrigue… this chapter had a bit of everything. Delightful story, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks!
Man that was alot…but I want more…they have alot to talk about.
OMG you can’t stop there. This story is so Good. PPS
Hey there I am so into this more soon huh? haven’t been driven in the past week..had a virus knock me down…remember, more soon
Please further write fast. I can hardly wait as the conversation goes on between Bette and Lotti. Around whether Bette flies to the lawyer to Virginia. And what has to say to it. PPS
Ok, this was nice and long, but I still need answers. Write faster, please (but no pressure).
This is such a touching story. Can’t wait for the following up. Thanks.
A wonderful story, you know just when to cut it off w/out giving us too much angst…I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter….
im sooo glad you posted tonite! sweet jesus she told bette… getting really good MORE-MORE!anytime for a nc-17..lol p.p.s.
caught up on the story….and love it
God, this story is so intense, it’s kind of draining… I mean that in the best way possible… Incredible. Thank you.
Oooo this story keeps getting better and better, really great post…and you’re right, I’m not complaining about the NC-17’s LOL!! Tina should know Alice by now, so I’m a bit surprised she couldn’t fool her – it should have been Bette and Lottie telling Alice about this, but apart from that I really loves this story. So post more and very soon please :o))
Oh forgot to say….what is Jo up to, who was that girl she was dancing with and why didn’t she call sweet Lottie back??? I hope they can become a couple soon, they’re sweet and good together.
This is so good and cant wait to see more!