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Summer Vacation. Chapter 13
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Lottie jumped as the phone rang, it didn’t matter that she’d been expecting it, somehow it still managed to surprise her, perhaps because she’d wondered if Bette would really show,
“Hello …? … yes that’s fine … yes … uh huh … please show her up …”
She straightened herself out, taking a deep breath to calm her nerves, it was awkward … so very very awkward … what were they supposed to say to each other, what did you say to someone in a situation like this, where did they go from here?
She paused by the door, hoping that maybe Bette would know …?
Or maybe not … she waited for the gentle knock at the door, reaching for the latch to open it …
“TK you’re hiding something …” noted Alice, as she let herself into her car,
“No I’m not!” replied Tina indignantly, hoping to stave off the Alice inquisition,
“Hmn …” mumbled Alice, not convinced, “where’s Bette gone to then?”
“Out …” replied Tina, knowing full well that her deliberate attempt at not elaborating would only fuel Alice’s efforts,
“Well that’s interesting … out where …?” replied Alice sarcastically,
Tina paused briefly, “To see Lottie …” she answered, deciding on the truth, knowing full well that Alice understood there were very few places Bette would willingly chose to go alone without Tina,
“Oh good …” said Alice, recalling her advice to Lottie from the previous night, “she listened then …” she added, her last words having the effect of sending a rush of panic through Tina at the very idea that Lottie might have told Alice before Bette got the chance to,
“What?” asked Tina, very confused,
“We talked last night …” explained Alice, “and I told her she should talk to you or Bette about it … isn’t that why you wanted to go too …?” Alice added, beginning to wonder if she and Tina were on the same page …
Tina remained silent, still slightly stunned …
“Hi …” said Lottie quietly as she held open the door for Bette. She had an air of notability, like she’d just come straight from the office, still dressed in a business suit looking smart and formidable, but her expression was kindly … and nervous as hell,
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What does he need to talk to Bette. I’m guessing that is has to do with Lottie and Bette and her inheiring some thing from her Mother. If its picture her Mother Painted or just pictures of Bette when she was a baby with her Mother Just post soon. Waiting is hard thanks
This is so good. Very detailed and interesting. I like the way you go back and forth developing all the sub stories. PPS.
Damn this is a good story. I wonder if Melvin knew? That would be some shit! Post soon!
Wow, this is getting very interesting. So Bette’s and Lottie’s mom was an artist. I wonder what is in store for both Bette and Lottie in the things left them by their mother.
Heat, a bit of humor, intrigue… this chapter had a bit of everything. Delightful story, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks!
Man that was alot…but I want more…they have alot to talk about.
OMG you can’t stop there. This story is so Good. PPS
Hey there I am so into this more soon huh? haven’t been driven in the past week..had a virus knock me down…remember, more soon
Please further write fast. I can hardly wait as the conversation goes on between Bette and Lotti. Around whether Bette flies to the lawyer to Virginia. And what has to say to it. PPS
Ok, this was nice and long, but I still need answers. Write faster, please (but no pressure).
This is such a touching story. Can’t wait for the following up. Thanks.
A wonderful story, you know just when to cut it off w/out giving us too much angst…I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter….
im sooo glad you posted tonite! sweet jesus she told bette… getting really good MORE-MORE!anytime for a nc-17..lol p.p.s.
caught up on the story….and love it
God, this story is so intense, it’s kind of draining… I mean that in the best way possible… Incredible. Thank you.
Oooo this story keeps getting better and better, really great post…and you’re right, I’m not complaining about the NC-17’s LOL!! Tina should know Alice by now, so I’m a bit surprised she couldn’t fool her – it should have been Bette and Lottie telling Alice about this, but apart from that I really loves this story. So post more and very soon please :o))
Oh forgot to say….what is Jo up to, who was that girl she was dancing with and why didn’t she call sweet Lottie back??? I hope they can become a couple soon, they’re sweet and good together.
This is so good and cant wait to see more!