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Summer Vacation. Chapter 16
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“Suite Seventeen …” The porter remarked as he opened up the door for them, “one of our finest”
Tina stood back open mouthed as he swung back the double doors, revealing to her eyes the very finest hotel room she had ever stayed in, grander than any honeymoon suite or anything Helena had ever booked for them,
“Wow …” she whispered,
“Thank you, that will be all …” Lottie said to the porter, slipping him a tip, she followed Tina into the hallway of their suite, realising it was useless to pretend anymore,
“I’m sorry …” Lottie said, “they always do this …”
“Sorry?” asked Tina, “why are *you* sorry, this is amazing …”
Lottie’s gaze followed her as she wandered around, taking in the beautiful room, she disappeared off to the right, finding herself in a gigantic sitting room,
“Oh my God … this place is huge …” Tina called, “Bette has to see this”
Lottie sat down on her suitcase, too weary and fed up to even make it to a chair,
Tina wandered right through, passing by a small galley kitchen with a fridge and tea and coffee, there were what looked like crystal glasses in the cabinet, she opened the fridge, surprisingly ‘un’-surprised to find a bottle of expensive champagne,
“I think I’m catching on Lottie …” Tina muttered to herself, knowing she was well out of earshot,
She carried on through, opening the door on the first bedroom she found, it was large and had two beds, next door was a large bathroom with a sunken bath, and a shower which all four of them could have easily fit inside. Tina carried on down the hallway, coming to the last door on that side which opened out into a cosy snug with a large corner leather sofa, she smiled, enjoying the comfortable darkness of the room.
Back across the corridor was another door which revealed an enormous bedroom complete with a gigantic four-poster bed, floor to ceiling windows displayed the sights of the city of Richmond, Tina smiled to herself, perhaps this would put a smile on Bette’s face. She wandered through, laying her hand softly across the bed linen, feeling the cool silk as it ran beneath her fingers, she glanced around, noticing another three doors leading from the bedroom. The first lead into a closet, if it could really be called that when it was the size of their bathroom at home, the next opened out into the most stunning bathroom, Tina sighed, overwhelmed by the beauty of the mosaic tiles and dark black granite, she re-entered the bedroom … intrigued about the third door …
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Yay…another great chapter, love this story! BUT PLEASE DON’T LET LOTTIE AND ALICE HOOK UP – Lottie and Jo is much better, they just need to talk :o)) Hope Bette can help Lottie about these jerks who are running her life – nobody tells a Porter what to do!!! LOL. Oh and have a great weekend, it sounds like something exciting is happening :o))
Lottie and Alice… hopefully they’re just feeling a good friendship blossoming. Whoa, how rich *is* their mother’s family? I’m starting to wonder if Bette was never notified cos they cut their mother out after she married Melvin… hmmm. I love this story, sofa, one-pagers or not, post soon!
This is some story: always amazed where this is taking us. Just bright in designing the characters with love and emotion. Post soon because this is very addictive.
u say scary and u will find me saying….interesting!!!! NPP!!!!
also…is the families money drug related????
Another awesome chapter. Can’t wait to find out what the deal is with the family. PPS
Another GREAT chapter…p.p.s.
Ok, so, I actually feel badly for Lottie… And I will never see a fraction of what she has. As for Bette and Tina, no one needs to worry about them; I think Bette’s got enough alpha to kick anyone’s @$$, and Tina’s ferocious in her own right. Great stuff!
wow .. that turned out as one scarily long page …
Lol @ vam … I’m english! he’s just one person, and he happens to be pompous, promise to rectify it ….
I love this story – but what’s with anti-English vibe in “his pompous English ass”? It’s bad enough that Hollywood always characterises us as the “bad guy”!
Great story, and yep was a long page but great writing looking forward to what happens next.
Sofa, You can bust with more “one scarily long pages” as far as I’m concerned. this story has be so intrigued! Can you give us one more before the weekend? Please!
Poor Lottie, rich and unhappy. Those two words should never go together. Bette needs to step in a get these trustee under control instead of having them trying to control her and Lottie. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
I LOVE this story, and I LOVE how you write. I don’t want this to end and I’ve already got plans for you to continue writing whatever you need. Cause I’m totally hooked on reading!!!
Okay, i’m not gonna even start on what I think about your writing of B&T… Let’s just say that you’re doing the best job ever to actually put into words that a-fucking-mazing chemistry of theirs!!! We feel it in every single little bit you write about them… from the tiniest touch or glance to the most intense and passionate love encounter! Chemistry and togetherness… It’s all there! Oh, and I have a hunch that now that Bette is in the game, Lottie’s worries about that “no control” thing are about to see an end. To Bette no liking to be told what to do, add the fact she’s very very protective of her loved ones, and that now includes Lottie. Can’t wait to see Bette in action (with a behind the scene Tina, of course…)… Oh, and about that 4-poster bed…!!! ;)
I always look forward to this story. Can’t wait to see what Roger has in store for the sisters and how this is going to effect Tina and Angelica. Tina is so understanding and she is showing Lottie that. This is what makes Bette and Tina such a wonderful couple. They compliment each other.
Yes! Bring AlphaBette on! I can’t wait to read about the dinner and Bette taking charge and taking care of Roger…PPS!!
Excellent chapter but it was one page that never seemed to end. But that was good.PPS.
Bette and Tina could handle the Queen of England So Roger might have his had full with Bette. She is not a country Hick If her says anything to Tina his a** is grass and Bette will be the mower. Lottie is a little young but she will get so lessons fron one Ms Idont take any shit fron anyone PORTER Thanks so much for posting
great great story but there’s some big grey thing blotting out a couple of important conversations so I don’t understand what happpened…help???? soon please
Good chapter. Poor Lottie!
Angelica is adorable.
Lottie is lovely.
I love how you have Tina and Angel dealing with Bette who they both obviously adore and she them.
Enjoying the ride and looking forward to where you are taking me!