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Summer Vacation. Chapter 19b
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“Done what?” teased Jo, “sat and had a glass of wine with me …?”
Lottie grinned, “No … well … I’ve done ‘that’ …”
“Well then …”
Jo reached for her hand once again, pulling her to follow, Lottie followed her, dazed, confused by how warm it felt, confused by how right it felt to want to slip her fingers in between Jo’s and hold on tighter,
Jo grinned as she felt Lottie’s fingers slide between her own, she stopped suddenly, pulling Lottie to stand beside her, right in front of a large square black and white print which hung on the wall above where there’d once obviously been a fireplace,
“I took that …” said Jo, grinning sideways at Lottie as she perused the print hanging in front of her, it was unmistakeably L’Arc de Triomphe in the far distance,
“Where did you take it?” asked Lottie, in awe,
Jo smiled at her, loving how she’d found another thing that managed to produce that killer smile,
“One of Anna’s friends rented this grungy, dirty little one bed flat on the top floor of a building part way up the Champs Elysées, it cost her an absolute fortune, but it came with this amazing little rooftop terrace … totally worth it,” said Jo, her eyes glistening at the memory,
Lottie couldn’t decide which was more beautiful, the photograph, or the look on Jo’s face when she told it’s story, she closed her eyes gently, realising she wanted to picture everything Jo had captured on camera in her minds eye …
“What are you doing?” whispered Jo, leaning in closer, the urge to kiss her grew the moment she’d closed her eyes, it made her seem so vulnerable and yet available at the same time, like she was taking the opportunity to show Jo that she really did trust her,
“I’m picturing it …” said Lottie, “carry on …”
Jo grinned, slipping one arm gently behind Lottie’s back on the pretence of bringing herself closer to Lottie’s ear so that she could continue to whisper,
“It was barely bigger than the space we’re standing in, but on warm summer nights we’d all gather up there with wine … and bread and cheeses … and sit and watch the world go by, right in the middle of all the hustle and noise and yet completely removed …”
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Yes! continue for sure. Although I’m intrigued with lottie/jo, more Bette/Tina please :D
OMG, we need more. Gotta love Angie. Tina bet with her daughter too funny.
You have to ask??? Of course, you *must* continue, I love this story… Lottie and Jo, Bette and Tina Mk II? I wonder if Al is jealous? I hope she can find someone, cos it looks like Lisa was a bad fit for her. Anyway, I look forward to every post from you, and getting two tonight was a treat. Please post more as soon as! Thanks, sofa
CONTINUE WOMAN!!! Tina with Angie, and Bette was way funny and adorable…..up next the continuation of Bette and Tina on the sofa and …..me thinks it’s too soon for Jo and Lottie to sleep together.
Lottie and Jo are so adorable. Almost like a mini Bette and Tina only this time Lottie is more like Tina instead of like her sister Bette. Bette and Tina are still very much in love and you can see when they are alone or with their friends. Can’t wait for the birthday party and when Bette must tell her father about her baby sister.
Oh you tease! Damn!Post soon!
YES! YOU CAN TLEAVE US HANGIN WOMEN… LOVE THIS,AND THE FIRST KISS HOW SWEET.P.P.S.
OH, HELL YES! (please excuse my exclamation)
Sigh… that was beautiful. And I swear, you’re fishing with that ‘tbc?’ BS. ;)
First kiss with a woman, so different yet so beautiful,soft and gentle thanks.
Yes! Please continue. I love how you write Angie and how you are able to subtly show both B & T’s personalities within her. Very intrigued with Lottie and where life will lead her now that she has all these new people in her life. I love your writing. Yes, definitely more! Please!
Yehaaa!!! Awwwwwww loved it :o)) But how can you ask if you should continue???? Of course, the sooner the better – this story is amazing.
Loving this story! More please ;-)
“Fuck …!” said Tina again, “now I owe Angie five bucks …” I loved this line!
Love about Tina and Angie’s bet. Lottie and Jo is hot!
wtf do u mean by to be continued? are u a sadist or something…tease…i’m waiting for the ‘moment’ u know the one!!!!! now hurry up and deliver….
Hey sofa! I’m back and finally I get to read this two-parter! Great!!! I really like Lottie’s story, especially as it seems that it’s a first for her and she’s falling for “hottie” Jo Sparkes! You describe all these emotions very well. And it’s quite realistic that you have her wonder if her interest in Alice and more especially Jo is linked to her new environment. I think that’s a question that I’d have asked myself. But it seems obvious that this “thing” she has for Jo is real. Okay, I kinda want to ask more of Tibette, so I will, but I don’t in fact feel that deprived, cause I think it’s very realistic that they have a “normal” life where they’re not constantly lovey dovey, but still have these daily tender and loving “moments”, just like in the last two chapters. Of course, a little bit more once in a while doesn’t really hurt either… Hihihi! ;) Anyway, love this as usual! Thanks and please come back soon!
So glad you obviously did continue!