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Summer Vacation. Chapter 19b
Bette sat up quickly, “You bet against our daughter!?!?” she exclaimed,
Tina looked remorseful, leaning in to kiss Bette in the hope of a reprieve, she began to plead her case … “Of course I bet against her … it was the only way to shut her up!!”
Bette topped her and had her pinned back against the couch in a matter of seconds, “You … are … so … bad …” she scolded,
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“Well, this is me …” said Jo as Lottie pulled up outside the familiar building of Jo’s apartment,
Lottie nodded, unsure whether or not to shut off the engine,
“You wanna come in for a bit?” asked Jo, keeping it casual, she was aware that since they’d left the restaurant a short while before Lottie had failed to make eye contact with her once,
Lottie shrugged, looking at her properly for a brief moment, “I dunno …”
“Come on …” said Jo persuasively, “It’s still early, besides … I have something I want to show you …”
“Okay …” said Lottie, giving in to her intrigue,
“You want red or white?” yelled Jo from the kitchen as Lottie went to use the bathroom,
“Um … whatever … you choose”
Lottie sat herself down on the edge of the bathtub, trying to regain some semblance of composure, since leaving the restaurant every little thought in her mind from their date, and the day, and every moment they’d ever spent together before then had come crashing to the forefront of her mind, making her feel light headed and dizzy.
She splashed her cheeks with cold water, not caring much that it removed her ‘barely-there’ make-up, she took a deep breath, forcing her thoughts to calm down,
“It’s just Jo … it’s just her house … you’ve been here before …”
Jo knocked quietly on the door, “You okay in there?”
“Uh huh … yeah” Lottie mumbled, releasing the catch on the door,
Jo leant against the doorway, holding a single glass of red wine in one hand, she saw a great deal of fear in Lottie’s eyes, combined with the fact that she truly wanted to be there,
“I’m a little nervous …” Lottie admitted, “I’ve never done this before …”
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(38 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Yes! continue for sure. Although I’m intrigued with lottie/jo, more Bette/Tina please :D
OMG, we need more. Gotta love Angie. Tina bet with her daughter too funny.
You have to ask??? Of course, you *must* continue, I love this story… Lottie and Jo, Bette and Tina Mk II? I wonder if Al is jealous? I hope she can find someone, cos it looks like Lisa was a bad fit for her. Anyway, I look forward to every post from you, and getting two tonight was a treat. Please post more as soon as! Thanks, sofa
CONTINUE WOMAN!!! Tina with Angie, and Bette was way funny and adorable…..up next the continuation of Bette and Tina on the sofa and …..me thinks it’s too soon for Jo and Lottie to sleep together.
Lottie and Jo are so adorable. Almost like a mini Bette and Tina only this time Lottie is more like Tina instead of like her sister Bette. Bette and Tina are still very much in love and you can see when they are alone or with their friends. Can’t wait for the birthday party and when Bette must tell her father about her baby sister.
Oh you tease! Damn!Post soon!
YES! YOU CAN TLEAVE US HANGIN WOMEN… LOVE THIS,AND THE FIRST KISS HOW SWEET.P.P.S.
OH, HELL YES! (please excuse my exclamation)
Sigh… that was beautiful. And I swear, you’re fishing with that ‘tbc?’ BS. ;)
First kiss with a woman, so different yet so beautiful,soft and gentle thanks.
Yes! Please continue. I love how you write Angie and how you are able to subtly show both B & T’s personalities within her. Very intrigued with Lottie and where life will lead her now that she has all these new people in her life. I love your writing. Yes, definitely more! Please!
Yehaaa!!! Awwwwwww loved it :o)) But how can you ask if you should continue???? Of course, the sooner the better – this story is amazing.
Loving this story! More please ;-)
“Fuck …!” said Tina again, “now I owe Angie five bucks …” I loved this line!
Love about Tina and Angie’s bet. Lottie and Jo is hot!
wtf do u mean by to be continued? are u a sadist or something…tease…i’m waiting for the ‘moment’ u know the one!!!!! now hurry up and deliver….
Hey sofa! I’m back and finally I get to read this two-parter! Great!!! I really like Lottie’s story, especially as it seems that it’s a first for her and she’s falling for “hottie” Jo Sparkes! You describe all these emotions very well. And it’s quite realistic that you have her wonder if her interest in Alice and more especially Jo is linked to her new environment. I think that’s a question that I’d have asked myself. But it seems obvious that this “thing” she has for Jo is real. Okay, I kinda want to ask more of Tibette, so I will, but I don’t in fact feel that deprived, cause I think it’s very realistic that they have a “normal” life where they’re not constantly lovey dovey, but still have these daily tender and loving “moments”, just like in the last two chapters. Of course, a little bit more once in a while doesn’t really hurt either… Hihihi! ;) Anyway, love this as usual! Thanks and please come back soon!
So glad you obviously did continue!