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Summer Vacation. Chapter 23
Tina checked Bette’s back, “They got you good babe,”
Bette nodded, “You too …”
Angie’s friends grinned at Rosie, “She’s the only one they didn’t get!”
Bette rubbed Rosie’s head affectionately, “The littlest one wins out!”
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“What are they doing?” said Alice, straining to see,
“Looks like they’re checking out their war wounds,” said Lottie, picking up on the green dots on Bette’s suit as she turned full circle in front of Tina,
Alice laughed, “They’re on the run from Shane,”
“Lottie …” whispered Angie’s friend Molly, pointing to the left of them, “over there!”
They turned to see Kit, leading her group around to the side of them, with Dana cowering somewhere near the back behind the four boys,
Alice chuckled, “Ooh … this should be interesting,”
Bette’s team fell silent, becoming invisible at once amongst the trees as Kit, Dana and the boys wandered foolishly down the hill and towards a clearing,
The four boys strutted boldly, carrying their plastic velcro-filled guns with the air of a GI Joe,
Angie giggled, “Silly …”
They watched from their vantage point as Kit and her team paused, listening for any tell tale signs that they had company,
“I hate this …” muttered Dana, “I hate surprises …”
Alice turned to Lottie grinning, “I wanna get a closer look,”
Lottie shook her head, “They’ll see you …”
Alice, as usual, wouldn’t listen, “Nah … they wont”
Angie and Lottie shrugged as she moved a bit closer down the hill, ducking behind smaller and smaller trees on her way,
Kit and her team spread out, taking a look around,
“A Ha!” yelled Bette, leaping out from behind a tree and spraying Kit with blue bullets before disappearing again as fast as she’d come,
Dana and the boys rushed over, guns at the ready, following in the direction Bette’s ammo had come from,
Angie snickered, nudging Lottie’s arm to look where she was pointing,
Lottie grinned, watching as Tina, Wilson, Rosie and another couple of Angie’s friends crept silently behind Kit’s gang, guns poised and ready,
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(30 votes, average: 3.80 out of 5)
Great job on the paintball! I pictured everything so clearly! this convo with dady Melvin should be interesting! Post soon!
i love paintball games they are soo much fun even for the big kids too. i feel drama comin with melvin and he well love lottie after he thinks about and absored it. p.p.s..for your info you signed a 2 yr.contract with this fanbase,and it will not be BROKEN!
I love paint ball. It doe wash off easy. Love that Tina and Bette are together On Lottie. Melvin is a whole new ball game. thanks
I loved this chapter. The paint ball game was awesome. I can’t wait for the next one. I hope to have a gillian chapter done in the next couple of days. PPS
i am now all caught up… loved this… too bad IC doesn’t see it our way… thanks for the fun and the love between all these ladies…
Oh god I laughed so hard with the paint ball game. It made me want to go out and have my own game. Alice cracks me up with her leadership skills. It sounds like they all had fun painting each other with the different colored balls. The party and gift giving was also fun and funny. I can understand the tension that both Tina and Bette feel. Lisa is Tina’s co-worker and she is afraid for her and then there is Melvin and how will he react to Maxine having another child.
I loved the paintball. Such an enjoyable chapter. I don’t think Bette should worry so much about Melvin and Lottie. Once Melvin sees Lottie he’ll figure it out.
That paintball-inspired game was a total riot! I knew Alice would lose, she planned too hard to do anything but get a pummeling… Lottie certainly is falling in something with Jo, she’s infatuated at any rate. Lottie counting the freckles was too cute. I wonder what Melvin’s going to make of her? And I’ve been wondering when Bette would start to feel overwhelmed. And now she’s got Melvin to deal with on top of that… hopefully Tina can get her through it. Great chapter, sofa. Thanks
wonderful birthday for angie, wondering how things will pan out with Melvin,pps
Great job, as usual. And the paintball was SO FUNNY! I adore competitive Bette! :)
The paintball game is fun and Alice is so funny!