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Summer Vacation. Chapter 25
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Alice groaned as Lottie’s cell rang out, breaking the quiet silence of her peaceful Sunday morning, she kicked Lottie’s legs, encouraging her to find it and please shut it off,
Lottie groaned, if Alice hadn’t encouraged her to drown her sorrows in several bottles of beer she’d be a lot happier to move quicker,
“What?” she grumped at Alice, avoiding Alice’s kicking legs,
Alice stumbled from the bed and returned with the offending object, still buzzing away in her hand, she threw it at Lottie, “Your phone”
Lottie flipped it open and placed it groggily against her ear, “Hello?”
Jo paused for a second before answering, “Hi? … erm … Lottie?”
Lottie sat up straight, collecting herself, she checked the callers name again, “Jo … hi”
Alice chuckled, playfully swatting Lottie with a cushion, “We have to stop making a habit of this,” she whispered,
Lottie glared at her,
“I … um … I wanted to make sure you were alright” Jo admitted, a hint of concern in her voice, “you left me one or two drunken messages last night …”
Lottie flushed with embarrassment, remembering that after their visit from Bette and a few more beers Alice’s streak of good advice had come to an abrupt halt when she’d suggested putting a call in to Jo,
She rolled her eyes at Alice, “I’m really sorry Jo … we were um … a bit drunk”
Jo laughed, “You don’t say … I take it you’re still at Alice’s”
Lottie sighed, “Yeah …”
Jo grinned to herself, not failing to pick up on the hesitation in Lottie’s voice, obviously concerned that this would bother her,
“Tell her she’s a bad influence” said Jo, with enough levity to make Lottie sigh with relief,
Lottie turned on Alice, pointing her finger accusingly, “She says *you’re* a bad influence!”
Alice shook her head, clearly denying everything,
“Are you okay?” Jo asked, as Alice left them alone in search of water,
Lottie sighed, “Yeah …” she replied, twirling her fingers around in the blankets on Alice’s bed, “things didn’t exactly go to plan yesterday with Bette …”
“What happened?”
Lottie stopped for a moment, what did happen? In the cold light of day it seemed a lot less of an issue that Bette made the whole day about her, it *was* about her, they were telling ‘her’ father. She rubbed her head, soothing away the throbbing ache that was brought about by a good mix of anxiety and dehydration, remembering that she’d drunk last night and her morning meds were all the way across town, stupidly.
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two a day. thanks for this
ok so am waiting…when’s the next one gonna b up…huh..huh??? this one was sweet, got all the basis covered. for a while there I thought that u’d have someone at Jo’s apartment. *wipes forehead* NPP!!!
Lottie and Jo really are adorable… thank the stars Bette and Lottie finally got together and found some common ground and had a *real* talk. I hope this is the start of them becoming really close. Well as close as they can be, with the age gap. …Oh to have been a fly on the wall when Melvin walked in on Miss Pieszecki… I get the giggles just thinking about that. Great chapter, sofa, thanks!
2for2 love it…im glad bette comin around with lottie..p.p.s.
I get so into your writing….I hate to scroll down and come to the end, but, alas! there is always the anticipation of more… Love how Lottie is slowly, but surely getting the family she so clearly wants, but doesn’t everyone… wonderful….
Awesome. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Something tells me Bette isn’t going to let her little sister remain in a premed program. I loved it. PPS
What a great story. FResh and delicious.
I so love this story!!!! Bette and Lottie are so alike its funny. But I am glad they are becomming close. Thank you PPS
The second coming of Bette and Tina starring Lottie and Jo as the star crossed lovers. Alice is still Alice. You know that she will always be there for you. I like how you have written Melvin and how he has mellowed. The whole extended family is what I would strife to have in my own life.
Hey, let them think whatever they want, PC. Awesome and totally sweet, as always.
I love love this story, you know that don’t you…all the characters are great including Melvin-what a surprise???? My fav is Lottie; my fav couple?…well, thats not hard but Lottie and Jo are shaping up to give em a run for their money huh??? Catch you next week.
i READ this and i loved it, and then i skipped to another story of yours–and forgot to comment. your nc17 is faaaantastic. heh;) you make me LIKE tina and bette together which is a HUGE feat my friend. good work, and keep it up. very cute…
Oh BTW, forgot to say – don’t skip the night, wanna read about Lottie/Jo :o))
Awww I love this story – loved the Bette/Lottie talk which was needed, love your Tina and looove Lottie/Jo – so fucking cute :o)) More, more, more of this story, pleeeaaaase (okay I just begged I think LOL)
Love this, love this, love this! Even better without the sniffing and all those tissues around!… “Promise me this will never stop”… such a great line…. I’m glad that Bette and Lottie finally “really” talked. I think that Bette should offer Tina her mother’s ring. It would be symbolic and right the wrong…. Anyway, thanks for this chapter, I just came back from a vacation and found it… It was a great surprise! ;)
That was wonderful!