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Summer Vacation. Chapter 25
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Angie wrapped her arms around her Aunt’s waist, “Hi Aunt Alice, did you bring me a smoothie?”
Alice leafed through the bags pulling out a caramel coloured drink for her niece, “Courtesy of Kit,” she mumbled, grossed out by Angie’s favourite drink,
Angie turned and headed out towards her Grandpa on the decking, “Grandpa,” she called, “I have a peanut butter and banana smoothie from Aunty Kit, would you like some?”
Tina leant across to whisper in Alice’s ear, “Think they’re talking yet?”
Alice shrugged, she raised her glasses to look Tina in the eyes, “If she’s anything like me she’ll not be capable of much …”
Tina chuckled, not entirely convinced of who was a worse influence on who, Alice and Lottie were both just as bad as each other,
“Bette …?” Tina called, “Lottie …? … you guys come and have some food?”
Lottie followed Bette inside, their conversation somewhat stilted after brief apologies at the door, Bette seemed calmer and less demanding, as though she’d accepted she couldn’t control the way Lottie felt about things,
Tina passed them both a coffee and urged them outside, eager to get some food into Alice and Lottie to see if it would perk them up. She grinned at Bette, knowing that Bette secretly loved Alice with a hangover, she was so much easier to tease,
“So …” said Bette, as they took their seats outside on the decking, “Daddy … you remember Alice?”
Melvin coughed a little and avoided Alice’s gaze, “Of course,” he replied, extending his hand, “Miss Pieszecki”
Tina grinned, after all this time he still couldn’t bring himself to call her by her first name, not after catching her in her birthday suit!
Alice retuned his sombre greeting, “Melvin …”
Lottie glanced at Angie, who shrugged back, neither of them getting it,
“So,” said Melvin, attacking his breakfast with vigour, he turned to Lottie, “I trust you are feeling better today?”
Lottie blushed, ironically she felt physically much worse, but still, “Yes,” she replied, “thank you … I’m sorry about missing dinner” she said, as much to Bette and Tina as to Melvin himself,
Tina jumped in, patting her on the back firmly, every pat radiating through Lottie’s hungover body like a bomb going off, “It’s fine, we’re just glad you’re feeling better, that’s all”
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two a day. thanks for this
ok so am waiting…when’s the next one gonna b up…huh..huh??? this one was sweet, got all the basis covered. for a while there I thought that u’d have someone at Jo’s apartment. *wipes forehead* NPP!!!
Lottie and Jo really are adorable… thank the stars Bette and Lottie finally got together and found some common ground and had a *real* talk. I hope this is the start of them becoming really close. Well as close as they can be, with the age gap. …Oh to have been a fly on the wall when Melvin walked in on Miss Pieszecki… I get the giggles just thinking about that. Great chapter, sofa, thanks!
2for2 love it…im glad bette comin around with lottie..p.p.s.
I get so into your writing….I hate to scroll down and come to the end, but, alas! there is always the anticipation of more… Love how Lottie is slowly, but surely getting the family she so clearly wants, but doesn’t everyone… wonderful….
Awesome. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Something tells me Bette isn’t going to let her little sister remain in a premed program. I loved it. PPS
What a great story. FResh and delicious.
I so love this story!!!! Bette and Lottie are so alike its funny. But I am glad they are becomming close. Thank you PPS
The second coming of Bette and Tina starring Lottie and Jo as the star crossed lovers. Alice is still Alice. You know that she will always be there for you. I like how you have written Melvin and how he has mellowed. The whole extended family is what I would strife to have in my own life.
Hey, let them think whatever they want, PC. Awesome and totally sweet, as always.
I love love this story, you know that don’t you…all the characters are great including Melvin-what a surprise???? My fav is Lottie; my fav couple?…well, thats not hard but Lottie and Jo are shaping up to give em a run for their money huh??? Catch you next week.
i READ this and i loved it, and then i skipped to another story of yours–and forgot to comment. your nc17 is faaaantastic. heh;) you make me LIKE tina and bette together which is a HUGE feat my friend. good work, and keep it up. very cute…
Oh BTW, forgot to say – don’t skip the night, wanna read about Lottie/Jo :o))
Awww I love this story – loved the Bette/Lottie talk which was needed, love your Tina and looove Lottie/Jo – so fucking cute :o)) More, more, more of this story, pleeeaaaase (okay I just begged I think LOL)
Love this, love this, love this! Even better without the sniffing and all those tissues around!… “Promise me this will never stop”… such a great line…. I’m glad that Bette and Lottie finally “really” talked. I think that Bette should offer Tina her mother’s ring. It would be symbolic and right the wrong…. Anyway, thanks for this chapter, I just came back from a vacation and found it… It was a great surprise! ;)
That was wonderful!