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Summer Vacation. Chapter 32
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“Not that I’m complaining,” began Helena, “but I was planning on cooking,”
Lottie registered the enormous amount of grocery bags, the additional wine and chocolates and it registered, “Oh my god, I’m sorry … I should have waited till you got home before starting this,” she continued, rapidly throwing things back into the various cupboards they’d come from, “It’s just that cleaning calms me,”
“What’s up?” asked Helena, pulling up a stool on the other side of the counter,
Lottie sighed, “Jo … she barely said a word to me, and Angie was miserable too, all in all, not much fun,”
Helena smiled sadly, “Sorry,”
Lottie shrugged, “Oh well, it’ll all sort itself out I’m sure,”
Helena admired her optimism, it was generally quite charming, she seemed to have it in abundance and it was clearly one quality which defined her from Bette, who, to say was lacking in optimism was somewhat of an understatement.
“Um … Lottie?”
“Yeah …?”
“Thing is,” Helena began, feeling the blush rising in her cheeks, “I’d sort of planned on you being busy this evening,”
Lottie looked on intrigued, sensing where Helena was going she was prepared to make her sweat for it, “Oh yeah?”
Helena nodded, “Yeah … and I was wondering, if maybe …”
“I could make myself scarce?”
Helena shrugged, turning on her best doe eyes, “Could ya?”
“Depends,” Lottie replied, with a sly grin, “on whether or not you’re gonna tell me who’s coming over,”
Helena smirked, “As if you don’t already know!”
“You’re gonna have to tell me,” Lottie teased, “or else I might just have to stay in and snuggle up with a movie,” she added, pulling off the rubber gloves and throwing them back under the sink,
“It’s Alice,” admitted Helena, “Alice is coming over for dinner and we’re going to “talk” … happy?”
Lottie grinned and began to walk upstairs to change, she turned halfway, looking back at Helena, “Very,”
~
“Who was that?” Tina asked as Bette walked back from answering the phone,
“Lottie, she wanted to know if she could interrupt family night, apparently Helena has plans,” Bette replied with a subtle wink,
Tina grinned, “Hear that Angie, Lottie’s coming over,”
Angie looked up from her study of the DVD collection, “Great.”
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hey, i’m first! *squeals with delight* that was great hun, super duper great. i was kinda enthralled…so much so that i have neglected my work for half an hour, re-reading your story twice. ok, so helena and alice..very subtle which made it all the more yummy…i like them together, and its good to go into that “why start, we got hurt once before, blahblah” angst that everyone goes through. people avoid shit cuz of those convos and i say ‘hooey!’ so i’m glad they’re going there! and jo and lottie…lottie should call the girl. i like that you’re going into that as well–those communication subtleties that are layered and different among women…we can all play those parts, we can all be emotionally clueless…the best is when the group jumps on lottie about that. i cracked up. i also cracked up at dana’s preggers breast fetish…hilarious…keep up the story, i furkin’ love it:) xo, pps, when you get some time off work darlin’
Very nice! I really liked that lunchtime round table discussion. Re: Jo, As hb said, Lottie needs to just pick up the phone. Al + Hels, I still like! And I wonder what trouble is coming from Mr. Lottie’s Dad. (can’t remember their last name?) Glad you had the time to post, more when you can, sofa, ta!
YAY YOU’RE BACK AND I HOPE YOUR PRESENCE WILL ONCE AGAIN BE A REGULAR ONE!!! I had forgotten about this story, however now I am truly happy to be reminded about it once again. Lottie’s dad..hmm drama to come I feel the winds changing. Jo and Lottie have gotta to make up, with both of them meeting half way, cause as I see it neither of them is wrong. NC17 with Al and H to come, (prefer NC17’s with B & T any day though). I love how Tina comes in and reprimands them from there fights and such, its cute. PPRS!!!!!
I can’t wait to see how Lottie’s father behaves. It seems like so much of her life is clothed in mystery. PPS!
Well this chapter surely had Lottie at the center of a lot of drama. Entertaining all around. Love the scene at the planet as they all ganged up on Lottie. Can’t wait to see Lottie’s dad’s reaction to her new life.
Yeah, Lottie’s avoidance lost her her chance to have some control over her situation (with her father and Jo) and now the shit is hitting the fan at the same time as her father is knocking on the door. It remains to be seen if his presence will be as traumatic as Lottie feared. Also remains to be seen if Jo or Lottie will step up to the plate (an Americanism) in regards to their issue(s). I like to use parentheses and you like asteriks. To each his (or her) own.
oooo! This should be good! I am thoroughly enjoying your story, especially the new characters you have created! One request: Can you write a scene with Sharmen? Post soon!
Hey there Sofa! Brilliant chapter. Always love the group scenes… can just imagine Dana drooling over the baby breasts! Your dialogue is so much better than what the show provides. Interested to see the fallout over the arrival of Lottie’s father… I sense drama in the works. By the way, if it’s positive reinforcement you desire, I am only too obliged to beg for chapters!!
Me too Sofa, I’ll beg, I love this story, you just suck up into being one of the family. Thanks good job, can’t wait for next chappy, please do so soon, there is weekend coming up. Md
Perfect!!!!! Great!!!!! and the cliffhanger!!!!! u better hurry up and post the follow up….
So Lottie’s dad has graced his daughter’s life. I hope that he will not freak out while in Bette and Tina’s home. When he sees Bette will he see her mother in her as he see her in Lottie? I love Alice and Helena together. Besides Bette and Tina I would like to see those two together in the upcoming season.
That was awesome!
Sofa your story and storytelling just gets better and better. I love the subtle parallels between Lottie and Bette, they are sisters afterall, right?! You have the dynamics of these characters down so well that the dialog and their interactions, their quirks (pregnant breasts?! LOL) come totally to life on the page. i hope you never get tired of giving us your version of the girls, I don’t know if I’d survive!! LOL. PPS