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Summer Vacation. Chapter 32
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“Angie!” Bette scolded, “that’s not nice, what’s going on?”
Angie scowled, “Nothing,”
“Angie?” Tina’s tone was kinder, “what’s up?”
Angie shrugged, “Nothing, it’s just …”
“Yeah …?”
“Lottie and Miss Parkes are fighting and it’s because of me …”
Tina sighed, “They’re not fighting because of you honey,”
“Well,” added Bette before Tina’s scowl stopped her in her tracks, “what? … they sort of are …”
“Mom!” Angie cried,
Tina raised her arms in exasperation, “Calm down the both of you and stop being ridiculous, Angie … Lottie and Miss Parkes are *not* fighting because of you, they might be fighting because of something that happened to you, but that’s not the same thing, ok?”
Angie nodded slowly,
“And you …” Tina continued, turning her scolding on Bette, “your sister is fighting with her girlfriend, for the first time probably, you might try being a little bit more supportive … both of you!”
They both bowed their heads meekly, “Sorry …”
Tina smiled, “Now, I’m going to make some popcorn, you two decide what we’re going to watch,”
By the time Lottie rolled up the popcorn was ready and Bette and Angie sat expectantly curled up together on the couch under a blanket. Tine greeted her with a hug,
“Hey, how’s it going?”
Lottie shrugged, “On the upside, Alice and Helena …” she whispered,
Tina grinned, “Go sit down,” she instructed, “before Bette and Angie eat all the popcorn,”
By the time the movie was over, Lottie had completely forgotten about her argument with Jo, or the continuation of her ongoing argument with her father, which she’d had another instalment of on her way over to Bette’s. Everything was just too comfortable, and even Angie’s incessant questions about High School and College after they’d just finished watching “Mean Girls” for the tenth time couldn’t dampen her spirits.
“Ange …” said Tina, “bedtime …”
“Aww …” Angie pleaded, “but Lottie’s here,”
Tina shook her head, “Nuh uh, bedtime …”
Angie’s big oval eyes looked across at Bette, pleadingly,
Bette smiled but her tone was firm, “Angie, you heard Mama, bedtime,”
“Fine!” replied Angie, pretending to strop, “but I want Lottie to tuck me in?”
Lottie grinned, “Okay,”
Lottie shut the 3rd Harry Potter book after they’d read the agreed two chapters, Angie pleaded, but she knew they’d already read one more chapter than usual,
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hey, i’m first! *squeals with delight* that was great hun, super duper great. i was kinda enthralled…so much so that i have neglected my work for half an hour, re-reading your story twice. ok, so helena and alice..very subtle which made it all the more yummy…i like them together, and its good to go into that “why start, we got hurt once before, blahblah” angst that everyone goes through. people avoid shit cuz of those convos and i say ‘hooey!’ so i’m glad they’re going there! and jo and lottie…lottie should call the girl. i like that you’re going into that as well–those communication subtleties that are layered and different among women…we can all play those parts, we can all be emotionally clueless…the best is when the group jumps on lottie about that. i cracked up. i also cracked up at dana’s preggers breast fetish…hilarious…keep up the story, i furkin’ love it:) xo, pps, when you get some time off work darlin’
Very nice! I really liked that lunchtime round table discussion. Re: Jo, As hb said, Lottie needs to just pick up the phone. Al + Hels, I still like! And I wonder what trouble is coming from Mr. Lottie’s Dad. (can’t remember their last name?) Glad you had the time to post, more when you can, sofa, ta!
YAY YOU’RE BACK AND I HOPE YOUR PRESENCE WILL ONCE AGAIN BE A REGULAR ONE!!! I had forgotten about this story, however now I am truly happy to be reminded about it once again. Lottie’s dad..hmm drama to come I feel the winds changing. Jo and Lottie have gotta to make up, with both of them meeting half way, cause as I see it neither of them is wrong. NC17 with Al and H to come, (prefer NC17’s with B & T any day though). I love how Tina comes in and reprimands them from there fights and such, its cute. PPRS!!!!!
I can’t wait to see how Lottie’s father behaves. It seems like so much of her life is clothed in mystery. PPS!
Well this chapter surely had Lottie at the center of a lot of drama. Entertaining all around. Love the scene at the planet as they all ganged up on Lottie. Can’t wait to see Lottie’s dad’s reaction to her new life.
Yeah, Lottie’s avoidance lost her her chance to have some control over her situation (with her father and Jo) and now the shit is hitting the fan at the same time as her father is knocking on the door. It remains to be seen if his presence will be as traumatic as Lottie feared. Also remains to be seen if Jo or Lottie will step up to the plate (an Americanism) in regards to their issue(s). I like to use parentheses and you like asteriks. To each his (or her) own.
oooo! This should be good! I am thoroughly enjoying your story, especially the new characters you have created! One request: Can you write a scene with Sharmen? Post soon!
Hey there Sofa! Brilliant chapter. Always love the group scenes… can just imagine Dana drooling over the baby breasts! Your dialogue is so much better than what the show provides. Interested to see the fallout over the arrival of Lottie’s father… I sense drama in the works. By the way, if it’s positive reinforcement you desire, I am only too obliged to beg for chapters!!
Me too Sofa, I’ll beg, I love this story, you just suck up into being one of the family. Thanks good job, can’t wait for next chappy, please do so soon, there is weekend coming up. Md
Perfect!!!!! Great!!!!! and the cliffhanger!!!!! u better hurry up and post the follow up….
So Lottie’s dad has graced his daughter’s life. I hope that he will not freak out while in Bette and Tina’s home. When he sees Bette will he see her mother in her as he see her in Lottie? I love Alice and Helena together. Besides Bette and Tina I would like to see those two together in the upcoming season.
That was awesome!
Sofa your story and storytelling just gets better and better. I love the subtle parallels between Lottie and Bette, they are sisters afterall, right?! You have the dynamics of these characters down so well that the dialog and their interactions, their quirks (pregnant breasts?! LOL) come totally to life on the page. i hope you never get tired of giving us your version of the girls, I don’t know if I’d survive!! LOL. PPS