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Summer Vacation. Chapter 46
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“Are you going to come for me?” Lottie asked quietly, surprised for a moment by the low purr in her own voice. It had the desired effect and Jo began to move her hips faster, the tremble in her thighs translating into a vibration within Lottie. “come for me…” Lottie said again, kissing Jo’s ear, running her hands up and down her back until they came to rest against her ass.
“Huhhhh…oh God…” Jo felt Lottie take control, cared little that she wasn’t sure how it happened, but simply moved her hips quickly, thrusting in short almost frantic bursts, before reaching between them to touch the base of Lottie’s clit. “Come with me…” she moaned against Lottie’s neck. “I’m…I’m cumming …”
“Oh…” Lottie’s head slammed back on the bed, her hands clasping and unclasping Jo’s warm sweat covered back. She resisted the urge to sink her nails in, decided dimly somewhere in her mind that she would not mark the woman before leaving, but would wait until the next time they saw one another to do just that.
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“Alice?” Helena stared at her from the floor, one leg over Angie’s back as the three of them played twister on the mat.
“Left foot red Mummy!” Li repeated,
“Alice … the door?”
Alice tapped away on her laptop, refusing to join in the game or even acknowledge the doorbell until she completed her train of thought and ended the paragraph for her column that she was writing.
Helena slid her left foot along the mat under Angie’s side and groaned, her body contorted in the strangest position as the doorbell rang again, “Alice!”
Alice glanced up, grunted, and continued to type, uncrossing her legs as if she might go soon.
“Right hand yellow …” Helena instructed to Angie. The little girl tried to unravel her hands but felt her Aunt’s big toe tickling her as she did so. She giggled, lost her balance and toppled to the side, landing at Alice’s feet.
The doorbell rang again.
“I’ll get it then?” Angie announced sarcastically, all of them used to how engrossed Alice got in her writing and how pointless it was to try and get an answer from her.
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Lol, I have no idea why it’s nine pages! It was the same length it always is!!
SS don’t even think about it being nine pages I won’t complain.I was wondering when Jenny would appear.Let the drama begin.
I LOVE B&T SEX!!!!!!!!!!!! WOO HOO Great stuff Sofa. I will have to send this story along to a certain someone that cannot read the site at this time, but has requested updates be emailed to her when certain author’s post. You are one of them!!! Boy will she be quite happy to see it’s an NC17 to boot! Oh yeah, and suuuuuuuure making us all look bad with your 9 pages. *hmph*
i re-read sweets, and i was thinking that i really love how you’ve created lottie and jo…its a really tricky, realy hard thing, writing young lovers with all of the intensity and playfullness that the two characters share–and mixed in there, some of that uncertainty and knowing that they have to just live life and not worry about it, i don’t know, you just really capture all of those layers so well. and to contrast that so brilliantly with the b&t partnership, which is, as you’ve re-visioned it, so indicative of that journey of just being really brave and embracing life and all of that..the characters really do live full and interesting lives and you capture it on the page so well. so when your first novel comes out, i want a signed copy babe;) i look forward also, to reading the first unedited copy in bed with some pancakes and of course…you:) excellent chapter sweety, really good. xo
Sofa…9 Pages!!!!(clapping hands) You can write your chapters as long as you like. Thanks for the update…I’ve been patiently waiting for one bacause you know I love this story!
Wow, this post was like a rich and creamy 7 layer cake. What a treat.
hahahehem chicki i don’t think you could look bad with your writing talents.SO GLAD THIS STORY IS BACK SOFA. and 9 pages to boot. Sometimes your to hot for me to handle, the whole thing was great, a joy to read, please come back soon. Thank you, Md
Hey 9 pages is fine by me :) i can helena playing twister,lol… lottie and jo was written so well. love bette and tina they really have the communication thing down well huh! happy to see an update. this story makes melt. it is well written!! :) PPS
Love the nine pages.I’m not complaining, Jo and Lottie are great together, Have an ideal that Kit knows Eli, maybe hers or Bettes nanny. or an old family friend.
yaaaaaaaaaa….about time for an update….i think we all like B&T sex!! thanks Sofa
B&T sex a perfect chapter!!!! Also when I came to the sex with Jo and Lottie, is it any surprise to say I switched the names to B & T?? LOL!!! B & T with a strap on next in your story ok??? *hint, hint*
You made my day. So glad to see an update on this story. Great as always. Looking forward to more.
I always look forward to your updates on this story! jinjur
ummmm? Where to start? Great writing as usual. You keep effortlessly writing these somewhat complicated relationships…Lottie and Bette, Lottie and Jo…Alice’s article. Very well done. But damn!!! That Lottie and Jo scene, whew!!! Excellent, sexy, hot…can never have too much sofasitter! Looking 4ward to your next post.
Well-written and thoroughly enjoyable as usual, sofa. *Thanks a lot!* When I first read that Bette and Tina would stay alone in the beach house for one more night, I knew what was coming. As my fave Donald Duck would say, “Oh boy!Oh boy!Oh boy!” Loved the rug romp as much as I loved the almost-soundless bathtub tryst! :> Btw, *kudos* to your “Insight”. I didn’t know you’re good in psycho mystery/suspense thrillers too. Thanks again, sofa! PPS :>
Oh damn Jenny is back. I wish that she was not so obnoxious both in ff and the show, but hey it would not Jenny then. I am very interested in this Auntie Eli. Something tells me that Kit knows who this woman is and that means that Bette will probably know her. Maybe she was there to help raise Bette but left when Maxine left.
I guess Alice won’t be getting any for a while. Half ten? Sounds English to me! I was going to say it would be OK for Lottie to talk like that, and then you went and told me she’s only fake English.
That was great, B&T are hot and Lottie and Jo too. Oh no crazy bitch jenny is back run everyone run lol. Please post more, thanks!
Loved it, loved it, loved it…humor, sex, Jenny the crazy back…what more could we ask for???!!!! MORE thats what.
Every chapter of this story ROCKS and this one is no exception. I adore Bette and Tina getting alone time. Lottie’s bday gift was H-O-T! And wouldn’t you know chaos…oh I mean Jenny has returned. Brilliant writing!