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Summer Vacation. Chapter 46
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Angie ran to the door in her bare feet, as at home in her Aunt’s house as she would have been in her own. She opened the door without even thinking to check who it was, the sheltering of her upbringing swathed in safety.
“Aunt Jenny …!”
Jenny took off her shades and stepped in to hug Angie, her purse and a jacket thrown over her right arm, “Hey munchkin! … is Helena in?”
Angie nodded, a little surprised to see her absentee Aunt, one who rarely visited or was mentioned except in passing on her Mom’s or her Aunt Helena’s accounts of their visits to New York.
“What are you doing here?” Angie asked her, as she stepped aside to let her Aunt in.
“Aren’t you pleased to see me?” Jenny asked extravagantly. She handed Angie her jacket and purse before ducking outside again to collect the last of her items from the front of the cab.
“What’s that?” Angie asked suspiciously, eyeing a carry cage with a small furry black dog inside.
“This is Coco,” Jenny replied, undoing the cage and pulling him out, “he’s the new man in my life.”
“Ange … who is it?” Helena started to ask, wondering why answering the door was taking so long. “Jenny!!” The surprise in her voice gave her away, seeing Jenny standing at her front door with a cab stacked with luggage waiting behind her and a small, slightly evil looking dog in her hands.
Startled, Helena stalled as Jenny simply stood there and smiled, arriving like a character from a New York film, the crazy one no one ever quite believes when they watch it on screen that such a person could exist that way in real life.
“What are you doing here?” Helena asked, stepping forwards to hug Jenny gingerly and avoid the dog.
Li came running through and stood beside Angie, more familiar with Jenny since they hung out on occasion back in New York.
Jenny waved to her and smiled, letting the small black dog down onto the floor, its paws slipping and sliding as it shot off towards the two girls, tail wagging fervently.
“Well I went to Shane’s but they weren’t in and then I went to Alice’s but she wasn’t in either so I stopped by The Planet and saw Kit and she said that I’d find her here?” Jenny raised her eyebrows and stared at Helena pointedly. “I haven’t seen your mother in a while,” she continued dryly, “but it seems like a lot of things have changed since you left New York?”
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Lol, I have no idea why it’s nine pages! It was the same length it always is!!
SS don’t even think about it being nine pages I won’t complain.I was wondering when Jenny would appear.Let the drama begin.
I LOVE B&T SEX!!!!!!!!!!!! WOO HOO Great stuff Sofa. I will have to send this story along to a certain someone that cannot read the site at this time, but has requested updates be emailed to her when certain author’s post. You are one of them!!! Boy will she be quite happy to see it’s an NC17 to boot! Oh yeah, and suuuuuuuure making us all look bad with your 9 pages. *hmph*
i re-read sweets, and i was thinking that i really love how you’ve created lottie and jo…its a really tricky, realy hard thing, writing young lovers with all of the intensity and playfullness that the two characters share–and mixed in there, some of that uncertainty and knowing that they have to just live life and not worry about it, i don’t know, you just really capture all of those layers so well. and to contrast that so brilliantly with the b&t partnership, which is, as you’ve re-visioned it, so indicative of that journey of just being really brave and embracing life and all of that..the characters really do live full and interesting lives and you capture it on the page so well. so when your first novel comes out, i want a signed copy babe;) i look forward also, to reading the first unedited copy in bed with some pancakes and of course…you:) excellent chapter sweety, really good. xo
Sofa…9 Pages!!!!(clapping hands) You can write your chapters as long as you like. Thanks for the update…I’ve been patiently waiting for one bacause you know I love this story!
Wow, this post was like a rich and creamy 7 layer cake. What a treat.
hahahehem chicki i don’t think you could look bad with your writing talents.SO GLAD THIS STORY IS BACK SOFA. and 9 pages to boot. Sometimes your to hot for me to handle, the whole thing was great, a joy to read, please come back soon. Thank you, Md
Hey 9 pages is fine by me :) i can helena playing twister,lol… lottie and jo was written so well. love bette and tina they really have the communication thing down well huh! happy to see an update. this story makes melt. it is well written!! :) PPS
Love the nine pages.I’m not complaining, Jo and Lottie are great together, Have an ideal that Kit knows Eli, maybe hers or Bettes nanny. or an old family friend.
yaaaaaaaaaa….about time for an update….i think we all like B&T sex!! thanks Sofa
B&T sex a perfect chapter!!!! Also when I came to the sex with Jo and Lottie, is it any surprise to say I switched the names to B & T?? LOL!!! B & T with a strap on next in your story ok??? *hint, hint*
You made my day. So glad to see an update on this story. Great as always. Looking forward to more.
I always look forward to your updates on this story! jinjur
ummmm? Where to start? Great writing as usual. You keep effortlessly writing these somewhat complicated relationships…Lottie and Bette, Lottie and Jo…Alice’s article. Very well done. But damn!!! That Lottie and Jo scene, whew!!! Excellent, sexy, hot…can never have too much sofasitter! Looking 4ward to your next post.
Well-written and thoroughly enjoyable as usual, sofa. *Thanks a lot!* When I first read that Bette and Tina would stay alone in the beach house for one more night, I knew what was coming. As my fave Donald Duck would say, “Oh boy!Oh boy!Oh boy!” Loved the rug romp as much as I loved the almost-soundless bathtub tryst! :> Btw, *kudos* to your “Insight”. I didn’t know you’re good in psycho mystery/suspense thrillers too. Thanks again, sofa! PPS :>
Oh damn Jenny is back. I wish that she was not so obnoxious both in ff and the show, but hey it would not Jenny then. I am very interested in this Auntie Eli. Something tells me that Kit knows who this woman is and that means that Bette will probably know her. Maybe she was there to help raise Bette but left when Maxine left.
I guess Alice won’t be getting any for a while. Half ten? Sounds English to me! I was going to say it would be OK for Lottie to talk like that, and then you went and told me she’s only fake English.
That was great, B&T are hot and Lottie and Jo too. Oh no crazy bitch jenny is back run everyone run lol. Please post more, thanks!
Loved it, loved it, loved it…humor, sex, Jenny the crazy back…what more could we ask for???!!!! MORE thats what.
Every chapter of this story ROCKS and this one is no exception. I adore Bette and Tina getting alone time. Lottie’s bday gift was H-O-T! And wouldn’t you know chaos…oh I mean Jenny has returned. Brilliant writing!