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Summer Vacation. Chapter 46
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“Your Aunt?” Kit asked, realising they knew so little of Lottie’s family on her father’s side,
“No … no,” Lottie turned back around to face her, “she was my nanny, she’s very old now,” she added, wondering why Kit’s face was suddenly taking on a strange realisation, “What …?” Lottie asked, “when Mom died my Dad didn’t want to keep her around so Roger gave her a job as housekeeper for my Grandfather and then when my Grandfather died she just stayed on there taking care of the house.”
Jo could see Kit’s face in the rear view mirror, “What’s wrong Kit?”
“Nothing,” Kit mumbled, “and her name’s Esi?”
Lottie stared at her, “Eloise … but when I was little I couldn’t say Eloise so I used to call her Esi,”
Kit nodded, “I see …”
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“We should get going too,” Lara mumbled, poking Dana to get her to stand,
“Noooooo” Dana whined, lifting her legs to trap Lara on the couch, she shut her eyes and lay her head back against the cushions, “five more minutes …”
“You know you guys can stay if you want,” Tina offered, since they were staying for another night and they didn’t ‘have’ to stay there alone, just kid free would be good.
“Nah, it’s ok, we should get back,” Lara replied, “Dana has a tennis lesson at four,”
Dana’s head snapped up, “I do?”
“Uh huh,” Lara nodded,
“Shit,” Dana grumbled, “I’m gonna need more tylenol …”
“How about you guys?” Bette asked Shane, the two of them sat side by side on the couch with their feet up on the coffee table,
“Can’t,” Shane mumbled, “we’ve got dinner with Carmen’s sister and her new boyfriend tonight,”
“And we promised my Mom we’d have Freddie to her by lunchtime so we should probably get going,” Carmen added, getting up and taking Freddie from Tina to put him back into the stroller,
“Think you can move yet?” Lara asked Dana, her wife still a little worse for wear after too many margaritas,
Dana nodded pathetically and sat up a little with Lara’s help, “I think so … but drive slow, yeah?”
Lara swatted her arm, “Oh god, you’re going to throw up on the side of the road aren’t you?”
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Lol, I have no idea why it’s nine pages! It was the same length it always is!!
SS don’t even think about it being nine pages I won’t complain.I was wondering when Jenny would appear.Let the drama begin.
I LOVE B&T SEX!!!!!!!!!!!! WOO HOO Great stuff Sofa. I will have to send this story along to a certain someone that cannot read the site at this time, but has requested updates be emailed to her when certain author’s post. You are one of them!!! Boy will she be quite happy to see it’s an NC17 to boot! Oh yeah, and suuuuuuuure making us all look bad with your 9 pages. *hmph*
i re-read sweets, and i was thinking that i really love how you’ve created lottie and jo…its a really tricky, realy hard thing, writing young lovers with all of the intensity and playfullness that the two characters share–and mixed in there, some of that uncertainty and knowing that they have to just live life and not worry about it, i don’t know, you just really capture all of those layers so well. and to contrast that so brilliantly with the b&t partnership, which is, as you’ve re-visioned it, so indicative of that journey of just being really brave and embracing life and all of that..the characters really do live full and interesting lives and you capture it on the page so well. so when your first novel comes out, i want a signed copy babe;) i look forward also, to reading the first unedited copy in bed with some pancakes and of course…you:) excellent chapter sweety, really good. xo
Sofa…9 Pages!!!!(clapping hands) You can write your chapters as long as you like. Thanks for the update…I’ve been patiently waiting for one bacause you know I love this story!
Wow, this post was like a rich and creamy 7 layer cake. What a treat.
hahahehem chicki i don’t think you could look bad with your writing talents.SO GLAD THIS STORY IS BACK SOFA. and 9 pages to boot. Sometimes your to hot for me to handle, the whole thing was great, a joy to read, please come back soon. Thank you, Md
Hey 9 pages is fine by me :) i can helena playing twister,lol… lottie and jo was written so well. love bette and tina they really have the communication thing down well huh! happy to see an update. this story makes melt. it is well written!! :) PPS
Love the nine pages.I’m not complaining, Jo and Lottie are great together, Have an ideal that Kit knows Eli, maybe hers or Bettes nanny. or an old family friend.
yaaaaaaaaaa….about time for an update….i think we all like B&T sex!! thanks Sofa
B&T sex a perfect chapter!!!! Also when I came to the sex with Jo and Lottie, is it any surprise to say I switched the names to B & T?? LOL!!! B & T with a strap on next in your story ok??? *hint, hint*
You made my day. So glad to see an update on this story. Great as always. Looking forward to more.
I always look forward to your updates on this story! jinjur
ummmm? Where to start? Great writing as usual. You keep effortlessly writing these somewhat complicated relationships…Lottie and Bette, Lottie and Jo…Alice’s article. Very well done. But damn!!! That Lottie and Jo scene, whew!!! Excellent, sexy, hot…can never have too much sofasitter! Looking 4ward to your next post.
Well-written and thoroughly enjoyable as usual, sofa. *Thanks a lot!* When I first read that Bette and Tina would stay alone in the beach house for one more night, I knew what was coming. As my fave Donald Duck would say, “Oh boy!Oh boy!Oh boy!” Loved the rug romp as much as I loved the almost-soundless bathtub tryst! :> Btw, *kudos* to your “Insight”. I didn’t know you’re good in psycho mystery/suspense thrillers too. Thanks again, sofa! PPS :>
Oh damn Jenny is back. I wish that she was not so obnoxious both in ff and the show, but hey it would not Jenny then. I am very interested in this Auntie Eli. Something tells me that Kit knows who this woman is and that means that Bette will probably know her. Maybe she was there to help raise Bette but left when Maxine left.
I guess Alice won’t be getting any for a while. Half ten? Sounds English to me! I was going to say it would be OK for Lottie to talk like that, and then you went and told me she’s only fake English.
That was great, B&T are hot and Lottie and Jo too. Oh no crazy bitch jenny is back run everyone run lol. Please post more, thanks!
Loved it, loved it, loved it…humor, sex, Jenny the crazy back…what more could we ask for???!!!! MORE thats what.
Every chapter of this story ROCKS and this one is no exception. I adore Bette and Tina getting alone time. Lottie’s bday gift was H-O-T! And wouldn’t you know chaos…oh I mean Jenny has returned. Brilliant writing!