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Summer Vacation. Chapter 46
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Dana shrugged, “It’s a possibility.”
Bette chuckled, wondering if when their baby came along Lara would attempt a ban on Dana and Alice drinking together, since it always ended at some point in Lara pulled up along the side of the road holding Dana’s hair out of her face as she got it all out of her system.
They hugged each other goodbye and Bette cooed over Freddie in his stroller, asking them all a second time if they were sure they didn’t want to stay another night.
Tina stood behind Bette with her arms around her waist as the car pulled away, taking the last of their visitors with it. “You ok babe?” she asked, kissing the side of Bette’s bare shoulder from behind.
Bette nodded, saying little, “Uh huh,”
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When they dropped Kit and Che off at The Planet mid morning Alice was already there at her usual table with her laptop and papers spread out. Lottie wandered across as Jo stood chatting to Matilda, getting them both a drink.
“Hey Al, whatcha writing?”
Alice glanced up and said nothing for a second as she continued to type, finishing her train of thought, “Oh nothing, just next weeks column,”
Lottie sat down next to her and tried to sneak a peek at the writing on the screen, “What’s it about?”
Alice smiled and turned to her, “Family, actually,” she paused and grinned at Jo who came to join them, “and how nowadays family isn’t always about blood relations.”
Lottie nodded thoughtfully, “Where’s Helena?”
“She’s taken the girls shopping … but don’t tell Bette,” Alice added, “if she doesn’t know about it until after then she wont be as mad,”
Lottie giggled, “Okay,”
They left Alice to her column writing and stepped out into the sunshine, strolling down to the grocery store to pick up a few things for dinner as they both sipped iced tea and felt their bodies cleansing from the alcohol and sugar intake of the weekend.
“Hang on a sec,” Lottie pulled Jo with her as they passed a newsstand. She picked up a copy of VillageVoice, “You know I’ve never actually read one of Alice’s columns,”
Jo shrugged, “Get it then.”
They paid for the paper and one or two other things and went and sat down on the grass in the park opposite. Lottie laying on her front as Jo sat stretched out behind, listening to her read extracts from Alice’s weekly column.
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Lol, I have no idea why it’s nine pages! It was the same length it always is!!
SS don’t even think about it being nine pages I won’t complain.I was wondering when Jenny would appear.Let the drama begin.
I LOVE B&T SEX!!!!!!!!!!!! WOO HOO Great stuff Sofa. I will have to send this story along to a certain someone that cannot read the site at this time, but has requested updates be emailed to her when certain author’s post. You are one of them!!! Boy will she be quite happy to see it’s an NC17 to boot! Oh yeah, and suuuuuuuure making us all look bad with your 9 pages. *hmph*
i re-read sweets, and i was thinking that i really love how you’ve created lottie and jo…its a really tricky, realy hard thing, writing young lovers with all of the intensity and playfullness that the two characters share–and mixed in there, some of that uncertainty and knowing that they have to just live life and not worry about it, i don’t know, you just really capture all of those layers so well. and to contrast that so brilliantly with the b&t partnership, which is, as you’ve re-visioned it, so indicative of that journey of just being really brave and embracing life and all of that..the characters really do live full and interesting lives and you capture it on the page so well. so when your first novel comes out, i want a signed copy babe;) i look forward also, to reading the first unedited copy in bed with some pancakes and of course…you:) excellent chapter sweety, really good. xo
Sofa…9 Pages!!!!(clapping hands) You can write your chapters as long as you like. Thanks for the update…I’ve been patiently waiting for one bacause you know I love this story!
Wow, this post was like a rich and creamy 7 layer cake. What a treat.
hahahehem chicki i don’t think you could look bad with your writing talents.SO GLAD THIS STORY IS BACK SOFA. and 9 pages to boot. Sometimes your to hot for me to handle, the whole thing was great, a joy to read, please come back soon. Thank you, Md
Hey 9 pages is fine by me :) i can helena playing twister,lol… lottie and jo was written so well. love bette and tina they really have the communication thing down well huh! happy to see an update. this story makes melt. it is well written!! :) PPS
Love the nine pages.I’m not complaining, Jo and Lottie are great together, Have an ideal that Kit knows Eli, maybe hers or Bettes nanny. or an old family friend.
yaaaaaaaaaa….about time for an update….i think we all like B&T sex!! thanks Sofa
B&T sex a perfect chapter!!!! Also when I came to the sex with Jo and Lottie, is it any surprise to say I switched the names to B & T?? LOL!!! B & T with a strap on next in your story ok??? *hint, hint*
You made my day. So glad to see an update on this story. Great as always. Looking forward to more.
I always look forward to your updates on this story! jinjur
ummmm? Where to start? Great writing as usual. You keep effortlessly writing these somewhat complicated relationships…Lottie and Bette, Lottie and Jo…Alice’s article. Very well done. But damn!!! That Lottie and Jo scene, whew!!! Excellent, sexy, hot…can never have too much sofasitter! Looking 4ward to your next post.
Well-written and thoroughly enjoyable as usual, sofa. *Thanks a lot!* When I first read that Bette and Tina would stay alone in the beach house for one more night, I knew what was coming. As my fave Donald Duck would say, “Oh boy!Oh boy!Oh boy!” Loved the rug romp as much as I loved the almost-soundless bathtub tryst! :> Btw, *kudos* to your “Insight”. I didn’t know you’re good in psycho mystery/suspense thrillers too. Thanks again, sofa! PPS :>
Oh damn Jenny is back. I wish that she was not so obnoxious both in ff and the show, but hey it would not Jenny then. I am very interested in this Auntie Eli. Something tells me that Kit knows who this woman is and that means that Bette will probably know her. Maybe she was there to help raise Bette but left when Maxine left.
I guess Alice won’t be getting any for a while. Half ten? Sounds English to me! I was going to say it would be OK for Lottie to talk like that, and then you went and told me she’s only fake English.
That was great, B&T are hot and Lottie and Jo too. Oh no crazy bitch jenny is back run everyone run lol. Please post more, thanks!
Loved it, loved it, loved it…humor, sex, Jenny the crazy back…what more could we ask for???!!!! MORE thats what.
Every chapter of this story ROCKS and this one is no exception. I adore Bette and Tina getting alone time. Lottie’s bday gift was H-O-T! And wouldn’t you know chaos…oh I mean Jenny has returned. Brilliant writing!