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Summer Vacation. Chapter 46
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Lottie glanced at Jo and wondered if she’d share, but Jo’s eyes remained firmly closed and her lips still.
“I’m sure we mean it at the time, but the women in our lives who we live with and love with, grow and change. I know I’m not the same person I was when I walked away from the relationship I’m currently in. And every day since she came back I wake up and I think of that poem and I make a mental note to never close the door on anything. It’s a world of endless possibilities; our children will all grow together, perhaps bringing in complicated relationships of their own. I just hope in the future they have the courage to walk away from things if they hurt, but come back if and when they are brave enough. For I’m sure Robert Frost meant for it to impart courage in his poem that a decision was made. However I’m here to tell you that going backwards, retracing your steps and in the end even changing your mind can sometimes be the only way of going forwards in life. It’s that kind of contradictory conundrum that keeps us guessing I expect.”
Lottie closed the pages and set it down in front of her, nudging Jo’s arm to get her to wake. “Did you hear that?”
Jo nodded, “Uh huh …”
“What did you think?”
Jo opened one eye and squinted through the sun, “Baby, I get the VillageVoice delivered every week, I think Alice is great, she used to be more light hearted though,” Jo added with a smile.
“Oh.” Lottie’s reply sounded deflated.
“You know what,” Jo sat up, swinging her legs round to curl against Lottie’s side, “you should tell Alice that you read it.” Jo suggested, “I’m sure she’d really like to hear that?”
Lottie nodded, pondering the deeper meaning behind Alice’s words. The significance of one of her all time favourite poems and the feelings she’d been struggling with recently that she’d perhaps not always made the best decisions in her adult life so far.
“Lets go,” Lottie said suddenly, “you still haven’t packed,”
Jo groaned and agreeably got up, pulling Lottie up with her. She unhooked Banjo’s leash from around her foot and nudged the dog to wake up, the sunshine making him lethargic and sleepy.
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Lol, I have no idea why it’s nine pages! It was the same length it always is!!
SS don’t even think about it being nine pages I won’t complain.I was wondering when Jenny would appear.Let the drama begin.
I LOVE B&T SEX!!!!!!!!!!!! WOO HOO Great stuff Sofa. I will have to send this story along to a certain someone that cannot read the site at this time, but has requested updates be emailed to her when certain author’s post. You are one of them!!! Boy will she be quite happy to see it’s an NC17 to boot! Oh yeah, and suuuuuuuure making us all look bad with your 9 pages. *hmph*
i re-read sweets, and i was thinking that i really love how you’ve created lottie and jo…its a really tricky, realy hard thing, writing young lovers with all of the intensity and playfullness that the two characters share–and mixed in there, some of that uncertainty and knowing that they have to just live life and not worry about it, i don’t know, you just really capture all of those layers so well. and to contrast that so brilliantly with the b&t partnership, which is, as you’ve re-visioned it, so indicative of that journey of just being really brave and embracing life and all of that..the characters really do live full and interesting lives and you capture it on the page so well. so when your first novel comes out, i want a signed copy babe;) i look forward also, to reading the first unedited copy in bed with some pancakes and of course…you:) excellent chapter sweety, really good. xo
Sofa…9 Pages!!!!(clapping hands) You can write your chapters as long as you like. Thanks for the update…I’ve been patiently waiting for one bacause you know I love this story!
Wow, this post was like a rich and creamy 7 layer cake. What a treat.
hahahehem chicki i don’t think you could look bad with your writing talents.SO GLAD THIS STORY IS BACK SOFA. and 9 pages to boot. Sometimes your to hot for me to handle, the whole thing was great, a joy to read, please come back soon. Thank you, Md
Hey 9 pages is fine by me :) i can helena playing twister,lol… lottie and jo was written so well. love bette and tina they really have the communication thing down well huh! happy to see an update. this story makes melt. it is well written!! :) PPS
Love the nine pages.I’m not complaining, Jo and Lottie are great together, Have an ideal that Kit knows Eli, maybe hers or Bettes nanny. or an old family friend.
yaaaaaaaaaa….about time for an update….i think we all like B&T sex!! thanks Sofa
B&T sex a perfect chapter!!!! Also when I came to the sex with Jo and Lottie, is it any surprise to say I switched the names to B & T?? LOL!!! B & T with a strap on next in your story ok??? *hint, hint*
You made my day. So glad to see an update on this story. Great as always. Looking forward to more.
I always look forward to your updates on this story! jinjur
ummmm? Where to start? Great writing as usual. You keep effortlessly writing these somewhat complicated relationships…Lottie and Bette, Lottie and Jo…Alice’s article. Very well done. But damn!!! That Lottie and Jo scene, whew!!! Excellent, sexy, hot…can never have too much sofasitter! Looking 4ward to your next post.
Well-written and thoroughly enjoyable as usual, sofa. *Thanks a lot!* When I first read that Bette and Tina would stay alone in the beach house for one more night, I knew what was coming. As my fave Donald Duck would say, “Oh boy!Oh boy!Oh boy!” Loved the rug romp as much as I loved the almost-soundless bathtub tryst! :> Btw, *kudos* to your “Insight”. I didn’t know you’re good in psycho mystery/suspense thrillers too. Thanks again, sofa! PPS :>
Oh damn Jenny is back. I wish that she was not so obnoxious both in ff and the show, but hey it would not Jenny then. I am very interested in this Auntie Eli. Something tells me that Kit knows who this woman is and that means that Bette will probably know her. Maybe she was there to help raise Bette but left when Maxine left.
I guess Alice won’t be getting any for a while. Half ten? Sounds English to me! I was going to say it would be OK for Lottie to talk like that, and then you went and told me she’s only fake English.
That was great, B&T are hot and Lottie and Jo too. Oh no crazy bitch jenny is back run everyone run lol. Please post more, thanks!
Loved it, loved it, loved it…humor, sex, Jenny the crazy back…what more could we ask for???!!!! MORE thats what.
Every chapter of this story ROCKS and this one is no exception. I adore Bette and Tina getting alone time. Lottie’s bday gift was H-O-T! And wouldn’t you know chaos…oh I mean Jenny has returned. Brilliant writing!