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Summer Vacation. Chapter 5
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“He’s fine” answered Bette, “but I feel better now knowing that he has his medication … he loved seeing Angie this afternoon” she added.
“She loved seeing him too”
“I wish we could talk properly,” Bette said, barely in a whisper
Tina hesitated, “You should spend the time you have with your father,”
The next morning Alice left the radio station following her Sunday breakfast slot and grimaced as the bright morning sunshine lanced her eyes. She shoved her hands into the pockets of her jeans and with a determined stride started up the street in pursuit of her car, hoping to God it was still parked where she left it outside Wax the night before.
She frowned into the sunlight as rounding the corner ahead of her walked a familiar form, she squinted as they came into focus,
“Lottie?”
It was her, Alice knew she wasn’t mistaken, then she noticed her headphones and instinctively jumped in her way instead, waving her arms like a crazy person.
“Lottie, hey Lottie!!”
Lottie stopped, startled and whipped off her sunglasses, “Shit Al … shit! … you scared the shit out of me!” she cried, clearly momentarily terrified at being accosted in the street.
“Sorry,” said Alice, genuinely apologetic, “you had your earphones in.”
Lottie laughed, recovered, “No worries Al, I’m just a little jumpy,” she said, pointing to the large bag she was carrying by way of an explanation, “I just bought a laptop.”
Alice stared, continually surprised by this strange person. “You just bought a laptop?”
Lottie nodded, pointing “Uh huh, there’s an apple store back up that way.”
Alice stepped in closer, lowering her voice, “Are you crazy?” she asked, not really asking but telling, “you can’t just go walking about LA on your own carrying a thousand dollar laptop … well, not if you’re looking to keep it.”
“Alice … it’s Sunday morning … there’s no one about!” Lottie stated
Alice shook her head, “Exactly! … Come on!” she said, grabbing Lottie by the arm, “I’ll give you a ride.”
About twenty minutes later Lottie wasn’t sure how, but she was once again sitting at a table in The Planet surrounded by more people that she didn’t know, it was becoming the norm. Alice had bundled her in and sat her down, hurriedly introducing her to Lara and Dana who already sat eating their lunch, before she launched into a tirade about some insufferable woman at Wax the night before.
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Maybe an unknown sister
your still killing me… and if you left any clues … well i missed them… unles lottie was talking with melvin while bette was talking to tina on her cell… ok waiting for the next chapter
I think maybe Bette had a child and the father raised her, I dont believe that Melvin knows about it. Lottie is just trying to find out about her other parent. It happens all the time when the child get older. thanks
wow u’ve got me going on this one…all signs makethis Bette’s daughter BUT i have a feeling not!!!! Is Lottie’s dad, Bette’s brother through their mother, Maxine…or is Lottie Bette’s half-sister through Maxine and this mysterious dad????? I gotta know soon, pleaszzzzzzzzzzz
Give the girl a car. Everyone in LA has a car. She can affor a hotel for the summer, but no car, no realistic. Thanks for sharing!
Maybe Tina feels like Lottie is trying to take her place somehow. I’m definitely sucked in, so PPS!
You are driving your readers…me included…crazy trying to figure out how Lottie might be related to Bette. I for one give up and will just wait until you tell us.
i’m getting really worried about that lottie person, she’s bothering me a little though i don’t think she’s evil or anything but she’s seriously disturbed, sort of LOL…i hope bette gets home soon
I love this story! Bette needs to come home before Tina loses it. If that is Bette’s daughter then will this put a riff in their relationship? I mean Bette had all these years to tell Tina…and I remember you had Kit say something about Bette going to Paris when she was 19 and Melvin didn’t know where she was….oh the suspense I love it!
Who really is Lottie!
Intriguing. Can wait to see what the relationship is between Bette and Lottie. Hope this info is coming soon.
cant wait for there more and bette/lottie to meet where we can see where it leads to…p.p.s.
I feel like Tina. Who is this Lottie person? She can’t be Bette’s daughter, can she? Has Lottie patterned her life to follow Bette’s. You really have us guessing. Keep Posting.
Gotta tell you, I love this story, and the storyline, and the whole mystery around who Lottie is, etc, but honestly, what I love the most about this story (and maybe your writing in general as i hope to find out with more stories of yours) is the way you portray Bette and Tina’s relationship. There are a lot of amazing authors on this site and a lot of them have done a fantastic job in describing the life-long relationship that B&T indeed have in our favorite fanfic land, but there is something very special about your B&T… They are so “together”, and real life-partners at so many levels. I mean, the very fact that you start this story with them both on opposite sides of the country and still make them appear closer and more in love than ever is simply amazing, and so addictive may I add! I really love your style and some the tiny details you integrate here and there… like this feeling of Bette that Tina gets everytime she enters one of Bette’s galleries… Tiny detail, but oh so meaningful! Thanks, and please post soon!
damn whooooooo is Lottie?????????????????????????????